Old 12-03-2012, 02:22 PM   #1
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Long Stories?

I have a hard time writing Short Stories, my first tale ended with 40 chapters!

I started a new series, "Horner Springs Retirees", I tried to write 1 &2 as character introduction, not much sex,

Then in #3 & 4 I let the Main Character dip his wick, several times.
In Chapter 5 I introduce the other half of the characters.

Since the story is about the Human Sexuality Institute at Futter University it has different approach to hooking up.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/me...ge=submissions

Scores are over 4 so I think I did OK, but I was wondering if the storyline is believable?
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