Chat room transcripts and phone sex
I'm currently planning out my second story for Literotica and I was wondering what you guys thought about a couple aspects of the narrative.
First, the male character initially meets a soon-to-be-lover in an IRC chatroom. Now, my plan isn't to saturate the narrative with pages and pages of this, but I wanted to have at least parts of their opening conversation read like a chat transport. Something along the lines of:
AllliCatSmiles6924: So you just broke up, huh? Sorry bout that :-(
CaptainMal: Sorry about what? I couldn't be happier!
AlliCatSmiles6924: Good to know ;-)
The chat part only makes up the opening parts of the story. But soon Malcolm and Allison move from chatting to talking on the phone and eventually phone sex.
Would setting up some of the dialogue like a chat transcript be distracting and off putting to readers? And how do readers feel about phone sex, especially male ones, since Malcolm is most likely going to be jerking off while he listens to Allison cum over the phone?
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