Originally Posted by LiquidMatthew
Bit of a cop-outty idea, but I was thinking that an interesting story idea might be to follow a pervert to the afterlife (presumably he died of sexual exhaustion). He was virtuous enough in life to make it to the heaven-equivalent of whichever belief system you follow, and now gets to enjoy all the pleasures he imagined in life but never got to partake in.
Orgies with dozens of virgins, eating desserts off beautiful nudes, a different woman to take to bed every night... If he can imagine it, he can have it.
Might be a fun little story to write, and a good excuse plot to have any manner of implausible scenes.
:lol: What an interesting idea!
But I would like to add/suggest that at the very end of the story he's tired, hurting, and just drained, both metaphorically and physically (or metaphysically as it may be), yet the girls want more and more and more from him. And as the scene pans out from him there's nothing but horny women as far as the eye can see. With this last scene he realizes that it's not Heaven at all ....He's in the other place. ;-) Maybe he wasn't so virtuous as he thought.
What a twisted and humorous ending that would be.
But hey .... it's your idea. I was just adding two cents worth of suggestions.
Regardless .... I'd read it either way. Sounds like a good story!