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Old 07-06-2014, 09:59 AM   #1
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OOC Sealed Together discussion thread and feedback.

Since this is an adventure story, we can't let them get too comfortable...

Feedback is welcome.
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Old 07-06-2014, 04:14 PM   #2
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I love this story but am anxious for how Ally meets her family again.
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Old 07-06-2014, 08:41 PM   #3
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I have been wondering if we should have created this long ago. lol

Wondering who else has read the story and what they think of it! Ally is one of my favorite characters to write.
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Old 07-07-2014, 04:56 PM   #4
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I love this story but am anxious for how Ally meets her family again.
I am afraid you might have s bit of a wait until Ally is ready to enter back into that world. Michael isn't ready to have her leave his world just yet and we have some bad guys to deal with too.
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Haven't been in the mood to write this week, too much stress I suppose. Maybe I can figure something out by tomorrow.
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Old 07-16-2014, 07:39 AM   #6
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Haven't been in the mood to write this week, too much stress I suppose. Maybe I can figure something out by tomorrow.
Understand. I have a biopsy on my thyroid today at 1 pm. 95% come back benign, but send me your thoughts, kisses, positive energy or prayers, please. I'll be fine either way, but it never hurts.
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Old 07-16-2014, 08:05 PM   #8
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good luck Horus, wife had one and yes it was benign so know the feeling. Prayers and all going out buddy.
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My thyroid lump is benign!
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