Old 11-07-2012, 10:29 PM   #1
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From here to there

fluid
flighty, wafting into words and order
I feel the reach, from noun to verb
and nothing
becomes I
by deft strokes - and
color grows from barren dust
glinting in darkness and being moves
to Be
fragrance blows when I rush
along the thin grey rope spanned across
eternity; the rod of enterprise a balance
against the wave of time
solid
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Old 11-07-2012, 10:52 PM   #2
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Old 11-08-2012, 02:27 PM   #3
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absolutely lovely read
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Old 11-16-2012, 09:48 PM   #4
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Old 11-22-2012, 06:51 PM   #5
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Wonderful use of language, very fluid. Put me in the mind of a kind of desert environment, whether physical or metaphorical though it's hard to say.
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Old 11-24-2012, 03:37 PM   #6
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Phase transition, in the desert of the mind when suffering becomes action.

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