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Old 06-30-2014, 02:40 PM   #1
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Circumcised by a Woman

Okay, the idea is that a guy meets his high school crush in college, and finds out she has a weird fetish he can help her with: She's in love with circumcision and the idea of circumcising a guy with nothing to numb the pain. She's also in love with the idea of doing that last thing wearing a bikini with her socks on.

So, any takers? Strange idea, I know, but it's really, really hot when you can get into it.
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Old 07-01-2014, 12:45 AM   #2
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She's also in love with the idea of doing that last thing wearing a bikini with her socks on.
Wool socks? Wool bikini? Do they itch?
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Old 07-02-2014, 08:23 AM   #3
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No, that's not really part of what I had in mind, sorry.
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Old 07-02-2014, 08:44 AM   #4
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Won't be allowed.

Even if the guy is okay with it, men cannot be sexually tortured here and that's most likely what it would be seen as

For you this is hot, but 99% of the "real men" here would cross their legs and whimper and run to the site complaining some guys little winky got hurt.

Try another site, one that acknowledges all fantasies and is not run like a frat house.
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Old 07-02-2014, 11:54 AM   #5
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Yeah.... I figured as much, God Dammit. Whatever, worth a shot.
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Old 07-02-2014, 04:45 PM   #6
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I must respectfully disagree with LC. Search stories on TORTURE and you'll find more than a few with male victims of sexual torture. If you write your story, you might finesse it by creating a masochistic victim who experiences exquisite agony while being damaged, especially if the session is voluntary.

But consider: My rejected story LIKE A HOLE IN THE HEAD is narrated by a woman whose fetish was fucking brain-damaged folks, and who considered trephanation for herself. Laurel rejected that sort of damage, even though it was self-inflicted, voluntary, non-fatal, and IT DIDN'T HAPPEN!

So I disagree that only female sexual torture is allowed at LIT.
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Old 07-07-2014, 06:29 PM   #7
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Wool socks? Wool bikini? Do they itch?
He didn't say anything about wool.

Anyways, this story could be made more acceptable if she just let him have anesthesia. If you need a pain element, she could make injecting the needle painful for the guy.
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Old 07-08-2014, 03:10 AM   #8
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He didn't say anything about wool.
I was being facetious. Guess I left off the smirking smilie.

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Anyways, this story could be made more acceptable if she just let him have anesthesia. If you need a pain element, she could make injecting the needle painful for the guy.
Nope, OP specified no anesthesia. We're going for a dose of masochistic pain. Really, hasn't pain ever made you cum?
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Old 07-08-2014, 09:48 AM   #9
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I was being facetious. Guess I left off the smirking smilie.


Nope, OP specified no anesthesia. We're going for a dose of masochistic pain. Really, hasn't pain ever made you cum?
Not as much as the idea of trepanning myself with a bris knife without benefit of anesthesia--that's HOT!! I'm getting stiff just imagining it...
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Old 07-08-2014, 11:07 AM   #10
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Not as much as the idea of trepanning myself with a bris knife without benefit of anesthesia--that's HOT!! I'm getting stiff just imagining it...
That's the spirit!
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Yeah, the no anesthesia thing is pretty central to the whole idea... I guess I just need to take it somewhere else, or take my nuts out and write it myself.
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You can always submit it to Reader's Digest.
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Yeah, the no anesthesia thing is pretty central to the whole idea... I guess I just need to take it somewhere else, or take my nuts out and write it myself.
Great idea! But be sure you're properly anesthetized when writing it.

No, really, it's an interesting idea, just not my bag. I can see how it would incite many readers. I like inciting readers. They're fun to watch.

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Wouldn't that be Bleeder's Digest?
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I was being facetious. Guess I left off the smirking smilie.
Oh were you making a joke? Can you explain, I just didn't get it. Is wool a reference to something?
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I must respectfully disagree with LC. Search stories on TORTURE and you'll find more than a few with male victims of sexual torture. If you write your story, you might finesse it by creating a masochistic victim who experiences exquisite agony while being damaged, especially if the session is voluntary.

But consider: My rejected story LIKE A HOLE IN THE HEAD is narrated by a woman whose fetish was fucking brain-damaged folks, and who considered trephanation for herself. Laurel rejected that sort of damage, even though it was self-inflicted, voluntary, non-fatal, and IT DIDN'T HAPPEN!

So I disagree that only female sexual torture is allowed at LIT.
Castration is verboten and although this is not castration I will lay money down the quick skin given the stories before approval will see it that way and boot it.
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Castration is verboten and although this is not castration I will lay money down the quick skin given the stories before approval will see it that way and boot it.
Last time I looked, circumcision and castration produced rather different results. Skin-clipping usually isn't considered mayhem. Of course, I haven't yet posted this story: ROSES ARE RED, TOO - "What a lovely cock," she whispered, just before biting it off.
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Old 07-08-2014, 11:38 PM   #17
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Is this one of those Jewish jokes that end with "she wanted 5 percent off?"
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Reminds me of that joke by some comedian I don't remember:
"Everybody thinks Jews are so smart. If they were that smart, they'd be adding on, not taking off."

(This joke was told to me by a Jewish friend, and no offense is intended to those of the Jewish faith. The remark is solely a response to the idea of circumcision, and not a reflection on Judaism.)
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Is this one of those Jewish jokes that end with "she wanted 5 percent off?"
I like it!
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