Hi everyone,
I've been here sometime and I'm something of a real part-time writer (ok, I'm very slow at getting this done).
I'm wondering if I should apply myself more to this as I tackle my stories in a very piecemeal fashion only writing for an hour at a time. I do enjoy writing stories but I think some helpful feedback might put me onto a faster track to improving my style as well as my output.
Anyway, the link is here:
http://www.literotica.com/s/how-it-all-began-ch-06
All feedback is always warmly received and I'm a big boy now so please don't pull words or punches, I'd like to really improve.
Many Thanks,
The Travelling Man.
