I've got a problem with a story of mine. I wrote one part of it as a First Person experience. I think it is good based on the ratings it has been getting so far on here.
At the suggestion of a friend of mine who has been published herself, I started writing another story but it is not first person style. As I was writing the new story it fell into line with my first piece and I feel like they could actually be the chapters of a longer tale.
Would it work having one part of a tale in one style and then flip it right around to another style?
The story I posted already is available here: http://www.literotica.com/s/early-morning-sunshine