Old 10-23-2012, 07:29 PM   #1
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Anne's Surprise

Recently, I posted "Anne's Surprise". There aren't a lot of comments thus far.

If there are any suggestions on how to improve it, I'd appreciate it!

Always looking to improve.
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Old 10-23-2012, 10:41 PM   #2
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With 100-something new stories going up a day, it's hard to find yours amongst everything else that's been posted "recently". If you gave us a link, you might get more people involved in helping you out. Just, you know, just sayin.
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Old 10-28-2012, 01:24 PM   #3
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Not hard to look up his name.

Here's the link: Anne's Surprise
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