Need an editor for a loving wife story with indian characters
I've written a story which revolves around an indian couple living in the US. The wife's friend from college days comes to visit, and the shy wife opens up gradually, finally ending in the wife and the friend having sex in front of the hubby.
The story has a lot of indian-themed stuff in it. For example, you need to know what a saree is, what a pallu is and so on.
The story has been rejected a couple of times now for grammar mistakes. I'm looking for an editor to help me get it through into Literotica!
If you're interested, please send me a PM/reply to this thread.
Last edited by yajiv132 : 10-08-2012 at 01:09 AM.