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Old 09-19-2012, 12:38 PM   #1
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Mother is son's 18th birthday present

Here's something I thought of, along the lines of the story "A Mother's Duty".

Her son is turning 18, and being a widow raising him alone, and perhaps not that well off, she's not sure what to get him, until she gets an idea. On his birthday, she sits him down and tells him "what I'm giving you is... me."

They'll go on with their lives, with one important difference. From now on, if he tells her to do something, she'll do it. He's a bit confused at first as to what this means, but accepts it graciously.

For the next few days or weeks, their lives aren't much different. She might defer to him when deciding what to watch on TV, or what to make for dinner, but not much else. He's probably unsure how he can take things.

Then, one day, just before they're about to go out, he spots a sundress in her closet and casually suggests she wear that instead of the drab pant suit she's wearing. She says she hasn't worn it in years because it's rather short, but if he wants her to wear it, she will. The dress is indeed fairly short and shows a great deal of bare leg (especially when sitting in the car), which he likes. So he starts to suggest clothes for her more often. He has her wear shorts, and short skirts and dressed around the house so he can see her legs more often.

He likes looking at her so much, he'll sometimes say "freeze!" and she'll freeze in the middle of whatever she's doing, like a statue, so he can look at her.

He eventually starts to give her a hug or a kiss more and more often, and suggests their kisses get progressively longer and longer. Whenever they sit on the couch to watch TV, he suggests she sit on his lap, and starts running his hand up her thigh. Sometimes when he has her freeze, he'll start running his hands over her shoulders, arms, and legs. He eventually suggests their usual kisses include a bit of tongue, and from there they quickly evolve into daily makeout sessions (sometimes multiple times a day).

He starts running his hands over the rest of her body during these makeout sessions, over her breasts, and...

(Well I'm not gonna do ALL the work for you!)

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Old 09-19-2012, 12:48 PM   #2
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I like the idea, particularly it starting as non-sexual and him discovering it along the way...

Of course, the big question is why would the mother give herself to him? maybe she already feels she has sacrificed so much for him, not dating much, to take care of him, etc. why the sudden need to make it a verbal agreement of submission?

As things progress, and the son demands increasingly sexual things, one afternoon a few of his bodies are over and one happens to mention how sexy they think his mother is, particularly her big tits. He then calls in his mother and tells her to go topless while she serves up some snakes for his friends. Their draws drop when she returns with a tray of cake and sodas and her big naked tits swaying...
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Old 09-19-2012, 01:07 PM   #3
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I like the idea, particularly it starting as non-sexual and him discovering it along the way...

Of course, the big question is why would the mother give herself to him? maybe she already feels she has sacrificed so much for him, not dating much, to take care of him, etc. why the sudden need to make it a verbal agreement of submission?

As things progress, and the son demands increasingly sexual things, one afternoon a few of his bodies are over and one happens to mention how sexy they think his mother is, particularly her big tits. He then calls in his mother and tells her to go topless while she serves up some snakes for his friends. Their draws drop when she returns with a tray of cake and sodas and her big naked tits swaying...
You're right about proabably needing some justification for her submission. Maybe guilt that she feels she hasn't done enough for him or been around as much as she could've been, or something like that.

I don't like the idea of him making her be topless in front of his friends though. I think it should be something personal between them, without involving anyone else. Also, descriptions of big breasts usually strike me as fake.
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Old 09-19-2012, 01:18 PM   #4
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valid points. perhaps one of his friend's comments about her being a MILF however triggers a new boldness in him. I like the idea that it is something he grows in to and is not very comfortable with, but increasingly finds it exciting to keep pushing the envelop....
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Old 09-20-2012, 03:07 AM   #5
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Old 09-20-2012, 11:15 PM   #6
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Glad you approve. What do other people think? Does anyone wanna give it a try?
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Old 10-05-2012, 01:14 PM   #7
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Old 10-05-2012, 01:20 PM   #8
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Sounds terrific. Any possibility of future stories involving the son's friends?
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Old 10-05-2012, 01:46 PM   #9
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Here is my two cents what if the son had been born horribly disabled?

The mother feeling compassion and sympathy toward her only son because of his disability, She offers to have sex with him on his birthday.

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Old 10-05-2012, 01:47 PM   #10
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Shocked at his mother's actions...son decides to test his mother's submissiveness towards him...constantly pusshing the limits

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Old 10-05-2012, 03:21 PM   #11
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You're right about proabably needing some justification for her submission. Maybe guilt that she feels she hasn't done enough for him or been around as much as she could've been, or something like that.
Perhaps she isn't his real mother, but technically his guardian. However, she's filled the role since he was so young, she's his mother as far as he's concerned. And perhaps he exerts authority over her because he is of a higher station than she.

Say you have an English lord and lady who have a son, then die together shortly thereafter. The baby son is technically the new lord of the shire, however, I'm fairly certain that in this situation an adult steward is appointed the lord's powers and responsibilities until the boy comes of age. Perhaps this is the deceased lord's brother (the baby's uncle). The uncle doesn't care much for children and he notices that the young nanny the boy's parents hired seems genuinely affectionate towards him. So he strikes a deal with her: she can be, in practice, the baby's guardian, while the uncle remains the legal guardian and administrator of the boy's trust and family affairs. A condition of this arrangement is that the nanny and the boy have to move out of the manor itself and settle into a cottage at the far end of the estate.

When the baby learns to talk, he calls the nanny "Mama" and she likes this so she lets him call her his mother throughout his childhood. However, she never lies to him about his origins. He knows he never sprang from her womb, he knows he is the the son of the lord, whom was her employer, and he knows that one day he will assume the full power of his noble title and therefore become her master. As these concepts become clearer to him, the power balance of their relationship shifts. By the time he turns 18, his "mother" is ready and willing to be his completely obedient servant.
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Old 10-07-2012, 02:39 AM   #12
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Perhaps she isn't his real mother, but technically his guardian. However, she's filled the role since he was so young, she's his mother as far as he's concerned. And perhaps he exerts authority over her because he is of a higher station than she.

Say you have an English lord and lady who have a son, then die together shortly thereafter. The baby son is technically the new lord of the shire, however, I'm fairly certain that in this situation an adult steward is appointed the lord's powers and responsibilities until the boy comes of age. Perhaps this is the deceased lord's brother (the baby's uncle). The uncle doesn't care much for children and he notices that the young nanny the boy's parents hired seems genuinely affectionate towards him. So he strikes a deal with her: she can be, in practice, the baby's guardian, while the uncle remains the legal guardian and administrator of the boy's trust and family affairs. A condition of this arrangement is that the nanny and the boy have to move out of the manor itself and settle into a cottage at the far end of the estate.

When the baby learns to talk, he calls the nanny "Mama" and she likes this so she lets him call her his mother throughout his childhood. However, she never lies to him about his origins. He knows he never sprang from her womb, he knows he is the the son of the lord, whom was her employer, and he knows that one day he will assume the full power of his noble title and therefore become her master. As these concepts become clearer to him, the power balance of their relationship shifts. By the time he turns 18, his "mother" is ready and willing to be his completely obedient servant.
Lords? Ladies? Sounds a bit convoluted. I didn't imagine this being some Victorian period piece.

I'm open to ideas about how to justify her "gift", but I think simpler is better. (Don't need to spend TOO much time on what is essentially a plot device).
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Old 10-07-2012, 03:19 AM   #13
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Lords? Ladies? Sounds a bit convoluted. I didn't imagine this being some Victorian period piece.

I'm open to ideas about how to justify her "gift", but I think simpler is better. (Don't need to spend TOO much time on what is essentially a plot device).
It's not so Victorian. Nobles are still a significant part of British culture, even today. And within that culture, I understand that there is still a strong sense of loyalty to these nobles among the staff that work for them. Some of those families have servants who come from a bloodline that has been in service to the lords of that manor for many generations.
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It's not so Victorian. Nobles are still a significant part of British culture, even today. And within that culture, I understand that there is still a strong sense of loyalty to these nobles among the staff that work for them. Some of those families have servants who come from a bloodline that has been in service to the lords of that manor for many generations.
Being from North America, I rather assumed the story was as well, (though location can be vague to appeal to more people).
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Old 10-10-2012, 03:13 PM   #15
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Think I may have a justification:

The son has been diagnosed with a terminal illness. The mother, feeling guilty for not having been around much of his life make him a promise:

Her gift to him is her. She'll do anything he wants for as much time he has left.

Shortly thereafter, however, the doctor gives them shocking news: His illness is reversing and he's expected to make a full recovery.

What this means, however, is that her promise to her son will last far, far longer than she expected.
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Old 10-10-2012, 03:24 PM   #16
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This post reminds me of this Thin H Line comic: http://thinhline.tumblr.com/post/102...f-the-poor-and
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Think I may have a justification:

The son has been diagnosed with a terminal illness. The mother, feeling guilty for not having been around much of his life make him a promise:

Her gift to him is her. She'll do anything he wants for as much time he has left.

Shortly thereafter, however, the doctor gives them shocking news: His illness is reversing and he's expected to make a full recovery.

What this means, however, is that her promise to her son will last far, far longer than she expected.

That sounds really good.

It reminds me of a joke from Chris Rock, about giving a dying kid a lap dance or something. That was also used on Curb Your Enthusiasm.

Perhaps the mom catches her son watching porn and she feels terrible that he'll never get to experience it.

You know what happens from there.

The only downside to this is that the whole angle of death in the beggining of the story is pretty depressing and kills the mood in my opinion.

But the second part is still a pretty hot premise.
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Old 10-10-2012, 05:14 PM   #18
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I think i have a way to include death . The Son and his Mom are at the doctor's office for his latest medical test results, and the doctor tells the son that he is going to make a full recovery
the sex part is put into the story shortly after this.
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Old 10-11-2012, 02:34 PM   #19
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So did she make the promise before the good news?
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Old 10-11-2012, 02:38 PM   #20
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yes she did and she always keeps her promises so on the morning of the son's 18th birth she has sex with him.

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The son's friends could be the one who desire Mom, and talk about her, causing son to a) see her in a different light, and b) become conflicted. A little guilt & shame on both parts goes a long way...
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Here's something I thought of, along the lines of the story "A Mother's Duty".

Her son is turning 18, and being a widow raising him alone, and perhaps not that well off, she's not sure what to get him, until she gets an idea. On his birthday, she sits him down and tells him "what I'm giving you is... me."

They'll go on with their lives, with one important difference. From now on, if he tells her to do something, she'll do it. He's a bit confused at first as to what this means, but accepts it graciously.

For the next few days or weeks, their lives aren't much different. She might defer to him when deciding what to watch on TV, or what to make for dinner, but not much else. He's probably unsure how he can take things.

Then, one day, just before they're about to go out, he spots a sundress in her closet and casually suggests she wear that instead of the drab pant suit she's wearing. She says she hasn't worn it in years because it's rather short, but if he wants her to wear it, she will. The dress is indeed fairly short and shows a great deal of bare leg (especially when sitting in the car), which he likes. So he starts to suggest clothes for her more often. He has her wear shorts, and short skirts and dressed around the house so he can see her legs more often.

He likes looking at her so much, he'll sometimes say "freeze!" and she'll freeze in the middle of whatever she's doing, like a statue, so he can look at her.

He eventually starts to give her a hug or a kiss more and more often, and suggests their kisses get progressively longer and longer. Whenever they sit on the couch to watch TV, he suggests she sit on his lap, and starts running his hand up her thigh. Sometimes when he has her freeze, he'll start running his hands over her shoulders, arms, and legs. He eventually suggests their usual kisses include a bit of tongue, and from there they quickly evolve into daily makeout sessions (sometimes multiple times a day).

He starts running his hands over the rest of her body during these makeout sessions, over her breasts, and...

(Well I'm not gonna do ALL the work for you!)

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Not a bad idea for a story but def needs some work and detail and some background with the mother and sons relationship before the 18th birthday gala !!The mother is not likey to just say or think, I am going to fuck my son, for his 18th birthday !!! There has to be some amount of sexual tension along the way before this comes into play !!!!!!
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Here is my two cents what if the son had been born horribly disabled?

The mother feeling compassion and sympathy toward her only son because of his disability, She offers to have sex with him on his birthday.
HHmmm that sounds really ill for a story !!! Sorry !
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Not a bad idea for a story but def needs some work and detail and some background with the mother and sons relationship before the 18th birthday gala !!The mother is not likey to just say or think, I am going to fuck my son, for his 18th birthday !!! There has to be some amount of sexual tension along the way before this comes into play !!!!!!
Well, I did think it would be a gradual thing. Perhaps as he gains more confidence in what he can tell her to do, she too is conflicted at each step, but decides it's important to keep her promise.

As I said, it would probably start with relatively innocent choices: What to make for dinner, what to watch on TV, etc.

He might like a short dress she wears, and occasionally starts to tell her to wear clothes that show more legs.

From there, he might tell her to freeze like a mannequin sometimes, so he can look her over.

He might eventually work up the nerve to touch her a bit while she stands frozen. (i.e. running his hands up and down her legs).

Hello or goodnight kisses might gradually get longer and longer, eventually open mouthed. Eventually, tongues would get involved.

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