Good evening, guys and gals.
I hope everything is set to have a great weekend.
I've been working on Demon Pi for quite a while now, going back to part one here http://www.literotica.com/s/the-devils-number
. I've gotten a few fine bits of feedback and some good comments, but as I've picked it back up after a long stretch I'd love to get some more. I want it to be a damn fun story for people to read, so the more constructive feedback, the better!
The Devil's Number, Demon Pi Part 1 (it's up to part 16)
Humor and Satire
I look forward to browsing this forum myself and trying to give some feedback on others too.