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Old 06-23-2017, 04:15 AM   #1
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Talking For Incest authors...all.

I have noted many, many of you write stories which are either NOT believeable, or VERY short on details. A hot seductive leadup is GOOD, but PLEASE add details like about the actual act of penetration, the sounds and feelings involved. I prefer M/S stories best, but Father/daughter ones are nice too. Especially love the "middle of the night" senarios.

Also, for heavens sake "DROP THE ANAL" Most don't care for it, MOST don't indulge, and you can bet your REAL mother wouldn't like that shit.
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Old 06-23-2017, 04:51 AM   #2
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Curiosity.

Hello! I am a relatively new writer and I have 11 published and a 12th on the way. I write incest mostly, and understand what you are saying. I have seen on some other sites these short way left field stories that are barely believable. I was curious if you would be interested in viewing my Father / Daughter stories and giving me an opinion on how I am doing or what I could do to better my writing? For any authors out there really with advice.

https://www.literotica.com/s/daddys-punishment-ch-01-1 is the start of the Father / Daughter ones if you are interested in viewing. Note - some of my earlier works are a bit iffy and I have intentions of coming back to edit them later on.
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Old 06-24-2017, 07:52 PM   #3
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Okay, but...

It's porn. If it's a quick stroke story, it's going to be light on details and not particularly plausible. That's a conceit of the genre. A longer story, yeah sure, put in all the "realism" you want.

And also, it's porn and all girls are bisexual and love anal, even if they don't know it yet.
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Old 06-24-2017, 08:00 PM   #4
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I have noted many, many of you write stories which are either NOT believeable, or VERY short on details. A hot seductive leadup is GOOD, but PLEASE add details like about the actual act of penetration, the sounds and feelings involved. I prefer M/S stories best, but Father/daughter ones are nice too. Especially love the "middle of the night" senarios.

Also, for heavens sake "DROP THE ANAL" Most don't care for it, MOST don't indulge, and you can bet your REAL mother wouldn't like that shit.
You're talking about incest and insisting on believable? I think I know what your problem is.
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Old 08-09-2017, 11:18 PM   #5
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Old 08-10-2017, 01:18 AM   #6
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Here are my personal preferences. Authors, when I give you specific instructions, for heaven's sake, follow them! What are you, writing for your own enjoyment, or what?
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Old 08-10-2017, 11:04 AM   #7
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Here are my personal preferences. Authors, when I give you specific instructions, for heaven's sake, follow them! What are you, writing for your own enjoyment, or what?
I think bytedj is willing to double our pay.
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Old 08-11-2017, 07:00 PM   #8
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I've written some incest - always brother-sister - and some romance. Believeability is more important in romance (not that a knight on a white horse is going to show up on my street any time soon) and romance makes an incest story more believable. On the other hand, Harry being awarded with sex with each member of the cheerleading squad because he scored the winning touchdown, including his hot twin sisters, may not be believable, but it could be a hot, high-scoring story. Kudos to sr71plt; incest (except maybe for brother/sister) is inherently unbelievable, certainly in the quantities on this site.
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Old 08-12-2017, 09:45 AM   #9
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I've submitted a mother/son story (from mother's first person POV) that's not up yet. Should be viewable early next week.
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Old 08-12-2017, 01:20 PM   #10
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See if my incest tales (linked here) fit your criteria.
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