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Old 03-21-2018, 08:14 AM   #1
Magenta_Magee
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When does delectable spill into deplorable?

https://www.literotica.com/s/one-hell-of-a-trick

First time author on here - this was supposed to be for the April Fool's contest, but I missed the boat, oh well.

Anyway, this is the result of a dare from a friend, to write the most disgusting tale I could, while still managing to incite a bit of titillation - I'm worried it's heavy on the 'revolting' and light on the um... 'stimulating'. I may have overdone the 'monster' trope.

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Old 03-21-2018, 08:23 AM   #2
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that's one HELL of a dare.
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Old 03-21-2018, 08:41 AM   #3
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that's one HELL of a dare.
Lol, I haven't delved into the arena of the supernatural before - but it seemed like a good 'fit' this time and my friend is into the whole demon thing, so....
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