Old 09-03-2012, 06:31 PM   #1
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Things Get Better 2

I've uploaded the first part of my story and it got a good reaction. It's a slow moving romance. The main characters are: Shirley, her son Andy, a man who falls in love with her named John. In part two I introduce a new character who becomes Shirley's best friend and confidant named Nancy.
I've been drowning in classes, getting used to a new environment, getting over an illness, getting settled in a new relationship, and having my editor being forced to drop my story due to a lack of free time. I have good stories, in my opinion, but am not a good writer. I need help with grammar, spelling (what spell check doesn't catch), and writing. I'm using Microsoft Word to type my story. If you want to see part one, http://www.literotica.com/s/things-get-better
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Old 09-03-2012, 06:53 PM   #2
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I forgot to add.
To get a hold of me, send me a PM on here.
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Old 09-05-2012, 09:46 AM   #3
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Will someone please help me!
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Old 09-06-2012, 08:32 AM   #4
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Will someone please help me!
Yes, but I'm travelling for a while.

Why not post a link to the story in Stories Feedback asking for a review and await the avalanche?

Better than Editors' Forum.
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Old 09-06-2012, 08:39 AM   #5
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sweet -- I clicked on your link but your story has not been approved for posting yet. It usually takes 72 hours, maybe another day or two for new authors and there's also a contest underway. Once your story is up, you should post a link in the "Story Feedback" forum and I'm sure someone will be able to help.
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Old 09-06-2012, 06:48 PM   #6
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It got re-approved, so my story is now back up from getting removed I really need an editor and hope someone will help me
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Old 09-06-2012, 07:13 PM   #7
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Hi,

I'd love to edit your stories

Please PM me or better yet contact me through here: http://www.literotica.com/editors/ed...hp?uid=1416068
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