Need an experienced editor to help with an Incest story. Part #1 is 5000+ words
Ok... This is my first story, and although I'm new to writing and finishing an erotic story, I'm not new to writing as a whole. I was a creative writing major for 3 semesters in college before transferring to music. I suppose that's irrelevant for now though.
Anyway, I'm writing a mother/son incest romance story. I'm planning on organizing it into 3 to 4 parts, each part with 3-4 chapters/scenes. I've just finished what I'm pretty confident is part 1 in its entirety, or rather, the meat and potatoes of a rough draft for part 1. The problem is... I'm already over 5000 words and on pace to write 20,000 before I'm done.
Is this a bit too long to hold the attention of the average reader?
Will anyone, hopefully someone comfortable working on an on-going basis for the rest of the story, be willing to read what I've written so far? I'm not looking for spelling/grammar/syntax editing really at the point, but more your opinion on organization, story structure, pace. Although like any self-conscious writer, any feedback given, no matter how subtle or direct, will be analyzed 10 times over lol.
Alright that's it for now I guess. Hopefully I hear back from someone willing to give her a read.
Thanks fellow Literoticans