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Old 07-22-2012, 11:30 PM   #1
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How my wife became a sex slave

My wife works with a guy (Bob) that has made it clear that his #1 goal in life is to fuck her.
She thinks he's an ass that can't imagine why any woman wouldn't want him.
His comments have become so blatant and graphic that she's talked about filing a complaint with the HR department.
We live in the 'burbs but she commutes into work 5 days a week.
Every once in awhile, Nina and I will travel into the city and spend a weekend indulging in some fun and games.
I've never met the guy.

There we were, finishing up a candle lit dinner at the hotel's restaurant when Bob walked in.
He didn't see us in the dimly lit room and he was seated on the opposite side of he room.
Nina said that if he spotted us and came over that she'd probably make a scene so we had better leave.
We signed the check to our room account and she headed up to the room to prepare for the night's events.
My job was to find us a bell-boy or maintenance man that might be interested in banging a "rich bitch".
Suddenly, I had a better idea.

I went back to the restaurant and approached Bob's table.
The short version is that I told him my wife and I were from a small town in the Midwest visiting the big city and that my wife wanted to live out her fantasy of being some stranger's slut for the night.
I told him that she had seen him earlier and thought that he would do nicely.
"She's upstairs in our room getting ready right now. Are you interested?"
"How do I know that she's worth my time? I'm not interested in some train wreck."
"C'mon up and take a look. If you don't like what you see, you're free to turn around and walk out. No harm, no foul."
He agreed and I offered him one of the two key-cards that they gave us at check-in. I told him to give me 15 minutes and then let himself in.

When I got back to the room Nina was sitting on the bed. She was nude except for ankle and wrist cuffs. She was just finishing putting on her mask.
The mask was black latex and fitted over her head like an old style swim cap. It covered her to just under her nose, with two holes for her nostrils. The lower half of her face was left exposed.

I had just gotten her tied spread eagle when I heard the door open and Bob walked in.
The first thing he saw was Nina, spread wide, pussy completely shaved with stick on nipple jewelry that looked like sunbursts around her nipples.
I told him that there were a few rules. He wasn't allowed to talk (I didn't want her to recognize his voice) and he had to be out of the room by midnight.

While he was undressing I said to Nina "Our guest is here. Just to reassure him, do you agree to be his fuck toy? To be his piece of meat to use as he wants? To give yourself over to one purpose and that is for his pleasure?" She nodded yes to each question and Bob shrugged as if to say "good enough".

He climbed up on the bed and straddled her chest. He started out by tapping his cock on her mouth. She stuck her tongue out and licked the tip a few times and then opening her mouth. He shoved his cock in so fast that she looked shocked by the abruptness of it.
Him sitting on her chest and her trying to hold her head up didn't offer a very good angle for head but soon they had a pretty good rhythm going. It consisted of her with her lips wrapped around his dick while he drove it in and out of her mouth.

It looked like he was about to cum so he pulled out and slid down her body until he was between her legs. He started licking around her upper thigh getting closer and closer to her pussy. Finally he flicked his tongue over her clit and she gasped out loud. He clamped his mouth down over her pussy, shoving his tongue in and out like a miniature cock. He used his nose to continue rubbing her clit.
Suddenly she threw her head back and started cumming "Oh God! Oh God!" she tried to yell but was cumming so hard that she was having trouble speaking.

Just about time her orgasm started to subside he raised himself up and slid forward. Driving his cock, balls deep on the first thrust.
"Oh FUCK!" She screamed as another massive orgasm washed over her. I don't know how to describe the animal noises that she was making but she was in total slut mode now. "Uhhhh fuck me! Fuck me! Oh God! It's so fucking goood! FUUUUCK!!!!"
While he was fucking her he was biting and sucking her nipples and using his thumb to torture her clit.
He was making a lot of noise but so far had kept up the agreement and not talking.

Suddenly he pulled out and the first shot of his cum shot out and hit Nina right between the tits. The second shot landed right across her mouth. After that they started to subside, mostly landing on her stomach.
She lay there, trembling like an earthquake. "little" orgasms rocking her body as they rolled through her.

I told Bob that he still had about 45 minutes left. "Think you've got another one in you?" I asked?
He just laughed and started climbing back up Nina's body. wiping up his come with his cock and when it couldn't hold anymore, his fingers.

When he was once again straddling her chest he made her lick his fingers clean and then shoved his cock back into her mouth. She started sucking and licking him clean. Once he pulled out and used his cock to shove cum from her cheek and lips back into her mouth. It didn't take long for him to be rock hard again.

He pantomimed his wish to have her ankles unclipped from the foot of the bed and attached to the headboard. I agreed and we worked together to make it happen. Now she was on her back with her wrists attached to the headboard and her ankles clipped onto the eyelets on the wrist cuffs. It bent her up to present her pussy and ass at a great angle.

He returned to the foot of the bed and without warning clamped his mouth down on her pussy again. She was taken completely by surprise and started shaking and bucking.
He started by licking her clit and then took two fingers and started fucking her with them. In and out. twisting back and forth. When he started rubbing her G-Spot she bucked so hard I thought she was going to knock some teeth out of his mouth.

Without warning he pulled his fingers out of her pussy and shoved first one, then both of them into her asshole.
Nina's never been much into assplay.
"NO!NO!NO!NO! Not the ass! Not the ass!"
He didn't listen. Instead he kept eating her pussy, making her juices run down and provide lube for his fingers.

Finally he relented and pulled his fingers our of her ass and jammed his cock all the way in her cunt. He immediately started sawing his dick in and out, moving forward so that it dragged across her clit with each stroke.

I'm sure she knew what was coming next but when he pulled out and piledrived his cock into her ass I thought she was going to pass out.
He continued to use his thumb on her clit as he started moving his cock in and out of her tight asshole.
"NO! Please don't! Oh God! Please stop! Fuuuck! It hurts! It feels so good! Please! Oh Fuck! Oh God! Don't stop!!! Fuuuck Meeee! AAAAAHHHHH!" she came so hard she squirted all over his hand. It sprayed up and hit him in the chest.

I got his attention and indicated that he had about 10 minutes to finish, get dressed and get out.

He went around the bed and unhooked all of her restraints. He spun her around so she was laying across the bed with her head over the side. He then came up to her head from above and once again began rubbing his cock on her mouth.
She started to protest that it had just come out of her ass but he was having none of that. He used his hand to squeeze her cheeks until she opened her mouth to relieve the pain. Then he shoved his cock back down her throat.
Her head was now hanging completely off the edge of the bed and provided him with the perfect angle. He was going in so deep that I could see her throat bulge. He'd shove it in and hold it til she started to choke. Then he'd pull it out just long enough for her to suck in some air and shove it back in.

There was nothing sexual about it. It was a throat fuck. She was a slut. A whore. She was a piece of meat to be used for his pleasure only. She wasn't a person, she was a warm wet hole for him to stick his dick in. And, it was exactly what she looked forward to on our weekend trips to the city.

Finally, he pulled out until just the head of his dick was in her mouth. He held her jaws open with one hand and shot rope after rope of hot cum in her mouth. It reached the point of overflowing when she finally swallowed. The last few blast of cum he shot on her face and tits.
She collapsed in exhaustion. He reached for his clothes but before pulling on his pants he walked up to her and wiped his dick clean on her face. Then he dressed and left the room.

Normally we hide 3 or 4 digital cameras around the room so that we can make ourselves some souvenir movies for our enjoyment. The next morning when Nina saw the footage from one of the cameras she went ballistic when she saw who it had been that fucked her in every hole the night before.
I eventually got her to calm down and I explained my plan. I spent the first half of the week editing the footage from the different camera angles until I had a very high quality movie. I made a 5 minute clip from that and sent it to Bob in an e-mail from one of those free accounts that anyone can sign up for.
I told him to watch the video of himself violently fucking a helpless woman. I told him that a "friend of mine" had set him up and that if he didn't stop his constant harassment of my wife then I would send the video to his wife and other people that could ruin him. I explained that we weren't looking for money, just for him to leave her alone at work.
Everything went according to plan. Nina came home from work and explained that Bob had been a perfect gentleman all week and behaved in the most professional manor.
Until Friday....
I received an return e-mail at the same address I had sent the video to Bob from.
It said
"Kevin", (I should have known that there was trouble if he knew my name) "How fucking stupid do you think I am? I knew it was Nina the second I walked in the room. I've been fantasizing about her lips wrapped around my cock for 3 years now. Do you think I wouldn't recognize that mouth as soon as I saw it? And her voice is all over the video you so kindly sent me. It's so clear in some parts that there's no mistaking that it's her.
I read your offer and I'll go along with it up to a point. I'll leave her alone "at work". Now, here's my counter offer. I will send a copy of the video to everyone in her address book including her parents, brothers, sisters. People she went to school with. Co-workers. All of her Facebook friends. I've spent the last week at work hacking into all of her accounts to acquire this information. UNLESS...
I'm having a dozen or so buddies over this week-end to watch the big game. Normally we pop in a porno during the half time but this week Nina will provide the entertainment. Have her at my house by 10 a.m. so that she'll be ready to serve drinks and snacks when the game starts. She should probably bring her mask as we probably have some mutual friends and they might recognize her. I'll provide the rest of her uniform that she'll be wearing until the half time festivities start. Do me a favor though and send along the cuffs. You can pick her up as soon as the 2nd half starts. She probably won't be much use as a waitress by then.
BTW Me and my wife split up about 6 months ago but nice try."

Now I had to go break the news to Nina.
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Old 07-22-2012, 11:45 PM   #2
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And you want someone to write you a story and submit it to Lit?
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Old 07-23-2012, 05:20 AM   #3
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Well sounds like a great idea, If you do want this to become a story, I look forward to it.
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published story

I'd like for it to be a published story.
Everytime in the past that I've submitted a story it's been rejected with very little feedback as to why.
This time I thought I'd submit it as an idea and see if any of the editors would make any suggestions before I submitted it for approval.
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I'd like for it to be a published story.
Everytime in the past that I've submitted a story it's been rejected with very little feedback as to why.
This time I thought I'd submit it as an idea and see if any of the editors would make any suggestions before I submitted it for approval.
So what? This is your story and you want Editors to look it over and offer feedback / suggestions? You're not looking for an Author to write it?
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I hate to sound obtuse here but I'm new at this and I'm not sure what the protocol is.
If I may. Do YOU think it's good enough as is?
If you'd like to take a shot at writting it, I'm good with that too.
I just wanted the story out there. I'm not necessarily looking for credit.
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I'd like for it to be a published story.
Everytime in the past that I've submitted a story it's been rejected with very little feedback as to why.
This time I thought I'd submit it as an idea and see if any of the editors would make any suggestions before I submitted it for approval.
So, it's not a story idea? Okay. Editor's Forum
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I hate to sound obtuse here but I'm new at this and I'm not sure what the protocol is.
If I may. Do YOU think it's good enough as is?
If you'd like to take a shot at writting it, I'm good with that too.
I just wanted the story out there. I'm not necessarily looking for credit.
If you wanted an Editor specifically to look at it, you could've put it in the Editors Forum.

Or, you could have put it in either Story Discussion or Story Feedback.
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So, it's not a story idea? Okay. Editor's Forum
The Editor's forum is no more the place to post a story than this is. The EF is the place to find an editor, or discuss editing matters. Stories are supposed to be posted (after editing if appropriate) ONLY via the submissions mechanism.
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The Editor's forum is no more the place to post a story than this is. The EF is the place to find an editor, or discuss editing matters. Stories are supposed to be posted (after editing if appropriate) ONLY via the submissions mechanism.
Well, hopefully he'd go there to look for an editor instead of reposting this.
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Or, you could have put it in either Story Discussion or Story Feedback.
No board is appropriate for dumping a full story. (Even SRP is a place for more than one person to share a story.) So, no, those two mentioned boards are a place to discuss stories that are submitted to Lit.
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Who exactly was harmed by his "dumping" a story on the ideas board. If you didn't want to read it, you shouldn't have. For a porn site, some of the people here are ridiculously uptight.

OP - I see no reason this would be rejected. If you'd like to send it to me for editing, feel free to send a file to the email below.
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Not a matter of "harm". It's a matter of Lit having its rules for a reason. I know Risia has been MIA for a long time, but did anyone every bother to read the STICKY at the top of this board? Does anyone ever read the STICKIES at the top of any board that a mod puts up? Does anyone ever read Literotica's Forum Rules? They shouldn't (and wouldn't) bitch if they ever have.
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They shouldn't (and wouldn't) bitch if they ever have.
Incorrect. If people DID read the rules, they would Bitch About the rules.
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I'm sure there would still be plenty of people who would; however, many people bitch about "why was my pic taken down?" or "where did my E-mail address go?" or "why can't I/he/she post this thing right here in this board?" because they never bothered to read the rules and then they blame others (or bitch that them) even though they're the one in the wrong.
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Not a matter of "harm". It's a matter of Lit having its rules for a reason. I know Risia has been MIA for a long time, but did anyone every bother to read the STICKY at the top of this board? Does anyone ever read the STICKIES at the top of any board that a mod puts up? Does anyone ever read Literotica's Forum Rules? They shouldn't (and wouldn't) bitch if they ever have.
If people listened to "The Rules" we wouldn't have porn boards.
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Now, that silly generalization is not true. Plus, Lit is not a porn board. It's an erotic literature web site.
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Now, that silly generalization is not true. Plus, Lit is not a porn board. It's an erotic literature web site.
Literature? Now, that's silly. Have you read the story board? There's about three people in a thousand that can write around here.
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Even if the quality of "some" (most?) stories here do not meet your standards, an erotic literature site is what Laurel and Manu had in mind when they started it up in the late '90s.
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Even if the quality of "some" (most?) stories here do not meet your standards, an erotic literature site is what Laurel and Manu had in mind when they started it up in the late '90s.
We've been over this ground under other noms de guerre in the past. I'm going to take a pass this time around.
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Ok, I admit that I didn't follow the rules.
I can only say that it wasn't an intentional violation.
I clicked on the edit/delete button but only the edit feature came up. I can't figure out how to delete my original post.
I'll try to pay more attention in the future
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I can't figure out how to delete my original post.
Simple. You can't. At best you can edit out the original post to make it "blank" (but will still need at least five characters of something left in the post) or have a mod move this thread to Mod Queue. Only problem there? RisiaSkye hasn't been back in years now.
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Ok, I admit that I didn't follow the rules.
I can only say that it wasn't an intentional violation.
I clicked on the edit/delete button but only the edit feature came up. I can't figure out how to delete my original post.
I'll try to pay more attention in the future
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Are you going to work with an editor? out of all the people who visit Literotica, have done more than most. meaning, most want to write erotica but never do. you have a start to a story, keep going and work with an editor!

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There are two reasons for not allowing stories to be posted in the fora.

The first is that the owners of this site are responsible in law for the content of the stories, so they want to check them before they go up.

The second is that stories posted properly are seen by many more readers than those in the threads.
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