Old 07-19-2012, 05:45 PM   #1
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Young couple. Older overweight and obnoxious neighbour. Young couple don't like him much. The boyfriend doesn't like the way he looks at his beautiful girlfriend. Girlfriend would never consider having sex with a man like this.

The older neighbour starts working out. He remains fat and obnoxious but devolps a large physique, big arms and shoulders. The young girlfriend develops sexual feelings for him. She's ashamed after she makes herself cum thinking about this dirty old man fucking her beautiful young body.

Im not sure how it develops from there.
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Old 07-20-2012, 12:50 PM   #2
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Looking for ideas and suggestions before I write this.

Young couple. Older overweight and obnoxious neighbour. Young couple don't like him much. The boyfriend doesn't like the way he looks at his beautiful girlfriend. Girlfriend would never consider having sex with a man like this.

The older neighbour starts working out. He remains fat and obnoxious but devolps a large physique, big arms and shoulders. The young girlfriend develops sexual feelings for him. She's ashamed after she makes herself cum thinking about this dirty old man fucking her beautiful young body.

Im not sure how it develops from there.
Just an idea but you could have the old neighbor offer the young girlfriend some money to create a nice garden for him. she could be good at that and do a nice job on her own home. Anyway, the younger couple could need a few extra dollars so she accepts. He could take her around to the nursery to buy flowers, gardneing tools etc. and the more time she spends with him the more she thinks about her fantasy. FInally he makes his move when she is out working and she can't resist him.
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Old 07-20-2012, 12:53 PM   #3
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Looking for ideas and suggestions before I write this.

Young couple. Older overweight and obnoxious neighbour. Young couple don't like him much. The boyfriend doesn't like the way he looks at his beautiful girlfriend. Girlfriend would never consider having sex with a man like this.

The older neighbour starts working out. He remains fat and obnoxious but devolps a large physique, big arms and shoulders. The young girlfriend develops sexual feelings for him. She's ashamed after she makes herself cum thinking about this dirty old man fucking her beautiful young body.

Im not sure how it develops from there.
So you're saying a generally unattractive and unlikable man works out a little, getting himself some thicker arms / physique while his UN-likableness and unattractiveness remains the same, and he manages to get the young hot girl to masturbate to him?
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Old 07-20-2012, 04:08 PM   #4
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Hm. I'd flip it, more the normal hangups some overweight people have, and they're behavior can be rude, because they've been treated rudely.

The neighbors form an opinion of him that is wrong based on the presumption. What if the overweight neighbor is a woman?

Through the journey of getting fit, the neighbor becomes more self-aware and confident. That self- awareness is the attraction, the physical changes are the candy coating.

Goto to cuckold or consensual threesome from there.
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Old 07-20-2012, 04:15 PM   #5
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Hm. I'd flip it, more the normal hangups some overweight people have, and they're behavior can be rude, because they've been treated rudely.

The neighbors form an opinion of him that is wrong based on the presumption. What if the overweight neighbor is a woman?

Through the journey of getting fit, the neighbor becomes more self-aware and confident. That self- awareness is the attraction, the physical changes are the candy coating.

Goto to cuckold or consensual threesome from there.
I'd say that if we're talking about someone who has been treated rudely or harshly before, If he got a lot more strength, then he might become more of a rude / forceful person.

I wouldn't say cuckold would be as affective with this particular one, firstly because it wasnt a married relationship, but merely boyfriend and girlfriend, and if shes able to fantasize about older and unattractive men in that sense, they may not be that emotionally involved. Though a threesome I can imagine here.

I would say that this idea could effectively work in a non consensual setting.
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Sure, I can see that too.

The working out and improving psyique could bring on a more uglier version of and ugly person. The way I was looking at it was misunderstood nicer person.

Seems we look at the world differently.

There's nothing wrong with that.
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Old 07-20-2012, 05:07 PM   #7
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Looking for ideas and suggestions before I write this.

Young couple. Older overweight and obnoxious neighbour. Young couple don't like him much. The boyfriend doesn't like the way he looks at his beautiful girlfriend. Girlfriend would never consider having sex with a man like this.

The older neighbour starts working out. He remains fat and obnoxious but devolps a large physique, big arms and shoulders. The young girlfriend develops sexual feelings for him. She's ashamed after she makes herself cum thinking about this dirty old man fucking her beautiful young body.

Im not sure how it develops from there.
I get more heat off a young couple living next to an older, overweight woman
with whom they don't initially hit it off.

Then, as summer arrives, things warm up. Like, the previously-turned off husband is continuously "exposed" to this old gal's indecent displays of her older, fleshy curves as she sunbathes every afternoon in various shades of scanty coverings he finds himself strangely stimulated...

He swears she knows how hot her naked mounds of white, dimpled flesh makes him as he starts to masturbate, every afternoon from his room while spying on her lewd and lascivious daily exposures...maybe his young wife accidentally observes one of his clandestine stroking sessions while she walks into the bedroom to remove her bathing suit and, well, you know!
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Old 07-21-2012, 08:15 AM   #9
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the girl has conflicting emotions. paradoxically she repelled by the man's boorishness, but still finds herself wanting to be nasty with him. she vacillates for days, chewing over the bone (no pun) of this problem constantly. her head is filled with fantasy images. eventually she contrives a situation whereby she can fulfill her sordid imaginings.
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