Mysterious Heroine of the Nice Guys

[mythtrav16]

There's this really sexy college freshman. She's a "good girl" who grew up in a very religious household. She's always been very personable and friendly, to both boys and girls, but she has never given away her virginity or even an open-mouthed kiss. Many guys in her home town tried to put the moves on her, but she always politely but assertively refused to engage in wanton acts with them.

However, now out on her own, away from her judgemental parents and mired in the turbulent sea of hormones that is college, her attitude towards sex is becoming more open. She begins masturbating and bringing herself to some great orgasms. She realizes that the next logical step is to have actual sex. She hasn't really found anyone on campus whom she feels a strong romantic chemistry, but she's getting so excited, she doesn't think she can wait to find a serious boyfriend. On the other hand, she wants her first time to be something special, something meaningful; she doesn't want it to be just some random encounter with a nameless guy, even if he is sexy.

Then one day she sees this snobby bombshell cheerleader taking advantage of this geeky guy who has the hots for her. The religious girl overhears the cheerleader making cruel jokes about how easy the geek is to manipulate and it makes her sad. She knows the geek as a casual acquaintance and he is really a sweet, caring guy, if a little awkward and shy. She thinks it's sad that the nicest guys are so often rejected by women in favor of the egotistical jocks.

Suddenly, she has a solution to her problem! She will seduce and have her first sexual encounter with the geek! Even if she doesn't feel enough chemistry for an LTR with him, she likes his kindness. She knows she has a great body that will blow his mind and she's certain that because of his poor track record with the ladies, a night with her would really mean a lot to him; it might even be his first time, too! It seems like the perfect way to make the loss of her virginity special and memorable. So later that night she comes to the guy's room and offers herself to him, point blank. She's wearing a mask because she doesn't want him to know who she is. This will just be a one night stand, she doesn't want the guy to start pursuing her as a prospective girlfriend.

After overcoming the initial shock, the guy accepts her proposition eagerly. The girl takes control of the situation right away, because the guy is really excitable and clumsy. She realizes that the encounter would be quick and unsatisfying otherwise. She enforces patience on the guy, telling him how to get her motor running with foreplay. She gives him very detailed instructions and keeps his excitement in check by admonishing him whenever he gets too far ahead of her. Eventually she let's him penetrate her and continues to guide him as they thrust, so that they are both able to reach orgasm together. Along the way, the girl realizes that her instructions will serve the guy well in the future, by making him an extremely skillful lover.

Having really enjoyed her first time, the woman decides that it will be her mission to reward the nice guys who just don't catch a break from the other sexy girls. She has a great sex life because the guys are very attentive to her instructions and she really gets off on being intimate with the sweetest guys around. And the whole alter-ego thing is exciting, too; nobody suspects her because she has a reputation for being such a religious prude.

Within months, the "Masked Minx" becomes a well-known urban legend on campus. The part that the girl is most proud of, though, is the claim that the guys she sleeps with become the best lovers on campus ,thanks to her tutoring.

[MatthewVett]

I like the idea. Sort of a night-time vigilante, ambushing guys on their way home from the library. Maybe a bit of exhibitionism/voyeurism, too, depending on how careful they are...

[Saucyminx]

During her instruction she could throw in there that "Nice guys finish last. "

[lazyhobo]

Is Masked Minx her official name? because Im pretty sure that those other girls have a few other good names for her.

[mythtrav16]

Originally Posted by lazyhobo

Is Masked Minx her official name? because Im pretty sure that those other girls have a few other good names for her.

You can name her whatever you like . It's just a rough idea for a story.

I like the idea very much.

[HankDolworth]

How does she provide masterful tutoring while being a virgin?

It would be more 'real' if she picks up tips from the geeks and spreads that studious knowledge of sexuality around, but her first few times are awkward and embarrassing, though the geeks think they are awesome!


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Actually, I like the idea of the story a lot. If know one has dibs on this, I'll start something up.

I'm a long time reader, new to the forums. I have two chapters of my first story posted, but would like to do a one off to cleanse the palette.

Thanks for the idea.

[lazyhobo]

Originally Posted by HankDolworth

How does she provide masterful tutoring while being a virgin?

It would be more 'real' if she picks up tips from the geeks and spreads that studious knowledge of sexuality around, but her first few times are awkward and embarrassing, though the geeks think they are awesome!

No no no, shes teaching them how to pleasure a woman, which in itself is quite easy as she guides them as to what makes her feel good. Its like how when You jerk off, you know where on your cock it feels good, but a woman may not (especially if its her first time) have the same knowledge of where exactly makes you feel best. Shes not teaching them about how she can make them feel good, shes teaching them again how to pleasure a woman, since she has knowledge of what makes her feel good she can simply tell them.

[HankDolworth]

Okay, I hear ya. My point is that geeks and nerds are very studious, and would have figured out the best way to make love is to make the woman feel good, no great! Unselfish people for the most part is a natural trait. They'd also treat the encounter as an experiment, and maybe even teach our young virgin a thing or two along the way.

But I concede your point the best person to listen to when it comes to pleasing a woman is a woman. Any self-respecting nerd or geek should know that. (reference movie : Revenge of the Nerds)

[lazyhobo]

Originally Posted by HankDolworth

Okay, I hear ya. My point is that geeks and nerds are very studious, and would have figured out the best way to make love is to make the woman feel good, no great! Unselfish people for the most part is a natural trait. They'd also treat the encounter as an experiment, and maybe even teach our young virgin a thing or two along the way.

But I concede your point the best person to listen to when it comes to pleasing a woman is a woman. Any self-respecting nerd or geek should know that. (reference movie : Revenge of the Nerds)

Well, its easy to find out this information, but putting it in practise is another matter. Lets presume that all these geeks / nerds have no sexual experience aside from pictures and videos, they would be quite nervous. And saying "Squeezing the nipples feels good for women" Fine, but How hard differs, those sort of minute details that only a woman could tell them. Add in once again, they'll probably be very nervous to conduct any experiments or even remember / appropriately do whatever it was they heard.

[HankDolworth]

Stipulated. It would be awkward every time. The good news is geeks are fast learners, and usually very conscientious to their teachers.

[mythtrav16]

Originally Posted by lazyhobo

No no no, shes teaching them how to pleasure a woman, which in itself is quite easy as she guides them as to what makes her feel good. Its like how when You jerk off, you know where on your cock it feels good, but a woman may not (especially if its her first time) have the same knowledge of where exactly makes you feel best. Shes not teaching them about how she can make them feel good, shes teaching them again how to pleasure a woman, since she has knowledge of what makes her feel good she can simply tell them.

Thank you, hobo. You get it.

Yes, the main haracter might be sexually inexperienced, but she knows what she likes, and she knows how excited she is at any given time - something that no textbook or porno can tell any other person.

[HankDolworth]

I wanted to add a link to my interpretation of the idea. I wrote this a few days ago and submitted it, and now it's been approved.

The Mysterious Masked Minx of Missuola

Thanks for the idea, and I hope you enjoy my take on it. I certainly enjoyed writing it.

I don't plan to continue with a sequel (or prequel) but certainly leave it open for others to continue the legend.

[lazyhobo]

Originally Posted by HankDolworth

I wanted to add a link to my interpretation of the idea. I wrote this a few days ago and submitted it, and now it's been approved.

The Mysterious Masked Minx of Missuola

Thanks for the idea, and I hope you enjoy my take on it. I certainly enjoyed writing it.

I don't plan to continue with a sequel (or prequel) but certainly leave it open for others to continue the legend.

Not my favourite story I will admit, though the base idea around it was fine.

Based on the idea that you used to make it, and your use of the rumor that she teaches people and afterwards they become famous for being great lovers, I was disappointed that she didn't actually instruct them. In fact the only thing she seemed to instruct him on, was using proper words (Not much of an instruction) and that he should "slow down" during sex, now these are just a little more than Tips, but not nearly enough to make it sound like she was really teaching him anything.

Because you were writing it as him telling the story, rather than writing it in as a flashback, you had to consistently use speech marks, since he was talking. There were some grammatical errors, including a few speech marks missing. While a few errors don't really ruin the story, since most stories have a few, with that way of telling it, where the character is talking, missing speech marks can lead to confusion to the reader.

It was an okay read, A little short but not that much. It was a nice variation towards this Idea, though it did have its differences.

[HankDolworth]

Thanks for reading and commenting. Your critiques are all valid, and I might have addressed it differently if I wanted to make this a multi-part story.

My hope was to introduce The Minx as a character, demonstrate the type of guy she chooses as her victims, and develop some curiosity.

The next story could start with: "George was not my first victim…" or "this is what happened with William…" and start a first person narrative of either origin (awkward first time, learning, teaching...

That said, I do appreciate your feedback, I wanted to also work on writing a discussion narrative as an exercise, so I appreciate your technical critique as well.

If someone wants to pick up the next chapter, go for it.