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Old 04-12-2018, 08:25 AM   #1
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My latest warrior illustration

Hi,

Here's an illustration I recently did for a game app project. Somewhat inspired by my GF.
What do you think?


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Old 04-12-2018, 02:49 PM   #2
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You're a very talented and lucky dude to have a girl friend like that.
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Old 04-13-2018, 11:31 AM   #3
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You're a very talented and lucky dude to have a girl friend like that.
Thanks a lot dude
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Old 04-13-2018, 12:19 PM   #4
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Hi,

Here's an illustration I recently did for a game app project. Somewhat inspired by my GF.
What do you think?


Seeing as you asked
I dont know whether you have drawn it or its a mesh render touched up -doesnt matter
Given your competence level and the effort you put in I feel justified in being brutal
Its not good. Its flat and dull. Unfocussed -over detailed
You have a precious face trying to be a portrait competing with some movement of the hand/sword thingy.

I think you intuitively already know the above for a stand alone picture
It becomes less of importance when text dominates

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