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Old 06-18-2005, 09:45 AM   #1
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Free Thoughts~on One word...

Hi ya peeps.

I have been thinking. (Hmm just a lil think I oft do~ although I do try not to do it too often...)
Why don't we do a free thoughts post? What I have found in my time back here at Lit. is that I am going through the threads and looking for inspiration.
I love to read and get inspiration from others post and thoughts. Sometimes it's just one word that will jump out. Then I kinda go crazy with that~ till I write it all out.

For instance: today's word~~ Temple

Can ya just *see* it.
All the thoughts that go through the mind with that one lil word.

Thanks for lettin' me ramble,
Now I am gonna *play* with my new lil word.
WooHooo~

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Old 06-18-2005, 10:03 AM   #2
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Temples

fingers circle with varying pressure on these soft windows to my brain

pressure to relieve
pressure
ward off the migraine
that winds down the road
like a 18 wheel trailer
filled with a "belly full of pain"
comin slow but you know you damn well better get the hell out of its way
no breaks gonna stop that mother fucker in time

Temples
I wonder why we have these tender portals beside each eye
almost like someone reverse engineered Frankenstein to have a place to plug in
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Old 06-18-2005, 10:36 AM   #3
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Neat idea, Fairy.



I fall by the altar
of notions shooting
curved syllables
from behind the wall
of your tremble

lift the sacred sangreal
forever besung as
you
to my lips

and kiss your temple
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Old 06-18-2005, 11:12 AM   #4
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Smile Temple~

Thank You Anna~ Liar
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Temple of Time


temple of time
a wrinkle in the fabric
dancing upon a whisper
evolution withstands

corroding earth
winds humidly swirling
brick replacing stone
the eye watches all

dark murky shadows
rodents scurrying within
crevices interrupting
sinkholes of age

years recapture art
oil scribbles
paintings of cave
orbs of eternity

horoscope collage
elements of pride
sheerly transparent
the temple of time...


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Old 06-18-2005, 01:24 PM   #5
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neat idea :)

clinging tendrils of suculent ivy
envelop hidden temple walls

what secrets lie entombed
inside this silent shrouded edifice
raised for ancient gods?

what rites were sung
in pain and praise?

what sacrifices left
such varigated stains
upon the altar stone?

if only dust could speak,
to pierce the veil
of mystery and silence
before Nature's unceasing
power returns the temple
to her womb.
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Old 06-18-2005, 06:24 PM   #6
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Temple

He bent and the sidecurls swayed
and the men in the pews davened,
twisted fringes of the tallis

I sat above with women and children,
my head covered in a black shawl.
I saw them in pieces, diamonds
of men spied through a wood lattice
and a tapestry curtain was pulled open

as if they were on a stage, those men
stepping to Torah, some had no beards,
some were children but all men
in Yaweh's eyes.

The gilt ark was open and the covenant
spread on a wooden table. The men read
right to left with a tiny silver hand.
Its finger pointed at the words
Baruch Atoh Adonai

I never read them
while the cantor sang
over millenia from the first
Temple of Jerusalem.

Baruch Atoh Adonai

I never read them,
but I knew them always
wrapped in an amulet
warm against me.
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Old 06-18-2005, 06:54 PM   #7
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Originally Posted by RhymeFairy
Hi ya peeps.

I have been thinking. (Hmm just a lil think I oft do~ although I do try not to do it too often...)
Why don't we do a free thoughts post? What I have found in my time back here at Lit. is that I am going through the threads and looking for inspiration.
I love to read and get inspiration from others post and thoughts. Sometimes it's just one word that will jump out. Then I kinda go crazy with that~ till I write it all out.

For instance: today's word~~ Temple

Can ya just *see* it.
All the thoughts that go through the mind with that one lil word.

Thanks for lettin' me ramble,
Now I am gonna *play* with my new lil word.
WooHooo~

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Oh
my head hurts
pounding
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Old 06-18-2005, 07:17 PM   #8
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on my knees I worship
the object of my devotion
flushed with fever
and religious fervor
worshipping
with my lips,
my tongue
at the temple
of my desire
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Old 06-19-2005, 12:21 AM   #9
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Wow~!!!

Can not Thank Ya'll enough for the great poems and for the open mindedness here. I love all the poems. Think I still have so much to learn. Ya'll put me to shame, but that's just it. So many diverse ideas, and thoughts.

*Bravo* to all who played with me today...*grins*

OK ready for the new word?


~~~~Phantom


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Old 06-19-2005, 07:08 PM   #10
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Tranquility....

in a raging storm
... I see!
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Old 06-19-2005, 09:31 PM   #11
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I've been waiting to see inside her jeans for a year and a half now. Forget changing parties, I'd change planets if I thought it would help. ~ cheerful_deviant
I wonder what you will be when you grow-up, min? Temperamental domesticated fowl artist? Religious Icon? Or President of the free world? ~ Yui
Okay....the gosling will be the Poster child...we shall worship her as a small cult. ~ ABSTRUSE
...incapable of a rational discussion without sprinkling pejoratives. ~ amicus
you are so... so.... so....GAY ~ vella_ms
You had me at dildo ~ lucky-E-leven
Out and proud. Of you. ~ matriarch
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Old 06-19-2005, 10:05 PM   #12
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Lightbulb My Phantom Love~

Sometimes I see you, on the edge of reality.
Standing tall with a winsome smile.
Such a warm feeling of love,
steals through me. Taking my breath.
Whispering life through this body again.

Reaching out your hand, knowingly.
Warm understanding, radiating throughout you.
Fingertips beckon for a return to heaven.
Asking that life long question,
"Will you take the chance?"

Clever eyes devour me, showing no mercy.
Already you are so sure of our union.
Your stance upon the clouds, floating
away with the wind.

I see your retreating form, shoulders
shrugging. As if again
you knew. Star dust shimmering
as if to say, "Till we meet
again, my phantom love.
Until we meet again."


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It is not perfect.
Yet, I kinda like it.

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Old 06-20-2005, 06:12 AM   #13
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Smile Moring All~

Hi ya, and Good Morning to ya~

Passes cups of coffee all around.
If your like me, you NEED it...

I had an inspiration bolt hit...

How about the word:

*Sensual*

If you follow my writinig at all,
well ya have to know,
it is one of my most fav. words~

Grrrrrrr..........

*winks* at ya~
Happy writing.

Oh if anyone has a differ word, feel free to Jump in~
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Old 06-21-2005, 05:57 AM   #14
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Sensuality~

sensuality speaks
with open mindedness,
slowly serenading
the heart murmurphorically,
sending the soul
into ecliptic palpitations.

spastically spanning
the mind euphorically,
sanguinely spawning
electrical currents throughout,
sliding spectacles slither down
spoon spanking the whole body.

sensuality spearing deep,
sensuality liquefied hotness
dripping within,
sensuality
sensuality
sensuality taking over~


just a lil thought~

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Old 06-21-2005, 11:44 PM   #15
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I'm drawing a blank today, but I'll give ya a *bump!*
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I wonder what you will be when you grow-up, min? Temperamental domesticated fowl artist? Religious Icon? Or President of the free world? ~ Yui
Okay....the gosling will be the Poster child...we shall worship her as a small cult. ~ ABSTRUSE
...incapable of a rational discussion without sprinkling pejoratives. ~ amicus
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Old 06-21-2005, 11:48 PM   #16
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Quote:
Originally Posted by RhymeFairy
Hi ya peeps.

I have been thinking. (Hmm just a lil think I oft do~ although I do try not to do it too often...)
Why don't we do a free thoughts post? What I have found in my time back here at Lit. is that I am going through the threads and looking for inspiration.
I love to read and get inspiration from others post and thoughts. Sometimes it's just one word that will jump out. Then I kinda go crazy with that~ till I write it all out.

For instance: today's word~~ Temple

Can ya just *see* it.
All the thoughts that go through the mind with that one lil word.

Thanks for lettin' me ramble,
Now I am gonna *play* with my new lil word.
WooHooo~

RhymeFairy~
When I see the word temple, I immediately think of something my mother has told me since I was about 12 years old.

"Your body is a temple...not a prize to be won, but a gift to be given."
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Old 06-22-2005, 11:28 PM   #17
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Wink

err edited~

sorry my friends...
i had started writing a poem, got in a hurry and had to leave.
so i did not get it finished. my badd~~


new word~
had a request~


~~abandon~~


*winks*

have fun, and have a wonderful night...

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Old 06-24-2005, 10:39 PM   #18
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~Abandon~

Go ahead
abandon all reasonable thought.
Get Your cannons out,
aim straight and high.

Shoot...
Blast...
Take'm all out of commission.
Show no mercy
for the weak, softhearted,
or unknowing.

No rhyme or thought
can get through.
You are so witty,
charming, all knowing.

Mean...Cruel...
Heartless Baboon.
So perfect You!

Take careful store
of all that's good.
Blow it to smithereens!

Grind it to dust
beneath
Your godlike feet.

Abandon the writing,
You know so well.
Announce to all others,
spouting off
Your own stupidity.

Take charge and command
us Lesser Mortals,
who have Dared
to question Your superiority.

Riddle me this,
Oh Holy one...
How the hell do you sleep at night?
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Old 06-26-2005, 10:59 AM   #19
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Smile

Hmmm...

Been a long week for me.
I have a few thoughts...
How about

clouds

dreams

stars

I am working on a poem,
so kinda bare with me.
Hugggs ya'll~

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Old 06-26-2005, 07:03 PM   #20
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Wink Dreamer~

I wish I were not such a dreamer.
Life is always perfect...
in dreams~
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Old 06-26-2005, 07:18 PM   #21
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why I long to distill
this indecision

and
clouds
in their
dreams
become
stars

everything aspires
a pinnacle definition
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Old 06-27-2005, 06:13 PM   #22
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Diamond Clouds

Sparkling images shine tumultuously through.
Glitter laced clouds come whispering around.
Carrying me away to the beauteous land of love.
Withholding nothing of my glimmering angelic future.

Wispy wings of fortunes hand placing me softly,
upon the golden throne of lovers landing.
Starlit heavens opening up, thousands of
diamond like shells daintily dance around.
Pearly pillow clouds drifting by, showering feathers
of slow sensual kisses. Enshrining this golden goddess
within perfect petals of lavender lace.
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Old 06-30-2005, 12:26 AM   #23
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Life

ever wonder what life has to bring
what offerings are upon the wind
sadly life gets complicated
at times
one must do
what they think is best
for all involved

still ya have to wonder
have to glimpse
that small portal in time
when life could have
should have
been what you wanted
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Old 06-30-2005, 10:16 AM   #24
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In Dreams
Roy Orbison

A candy colored clown they call the sandman
Tiptoes to my room every night
Just to sprinkle stardust and to whisper,
“Go to sleep, everything is alright.”

I close my eyes then I drift away
Into the magic night
I softly say a silent prayer
Like dreamers do
Then I fall asleep and dream my dreams of you

In dreams I walk with you
In dreams I talk to you
In dreams you’re mine all the time
With you ever in dreams, in dreams

But just before the dawn
I awake and find you gone
I can’t help it, I can’t help it
If I cry
I remember that you said goodbye

It’s too bad that all these things
Can only happen in my dreams
Only in dreams, beautiful dreams



Sorry I know that this isn't my own poem, but when I hear dreams associated with poetry I think of this song. One of my favorite! I hope you don't mind. Kitty
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Old 06-30-2005, 10:29 AM   #25
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Smile

Full of promise,
and of pain.
Full of love,
and of hate.
Full of happy,
and of sad.
Full of good,
and of bad.
Full of everything,
and of nothing.
Full of what we want to be,
and of what we are.
Full of life,
and of death.
Full of you,
and of me,
and of a love that was ment to be.
Dreams.

This is all mine.....hope you like. Kitty
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