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07-14-2012, 09:19 PM
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I love the black and white
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07-16-2012, 08:27 AM
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The one That got Away
thiscouldbtricky is offline
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Your writing spoiled me for finding anyone else on here. Guys, do your best to try and pique her interest. She is so worth it
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Aww.... Where you been? Lol
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The difference between confident and cocky is in how much noise it makes. Confidence is silent.
~ Tricky
Who needs a knight in shining armor when you can have a soldier in ACU's?
Please check out my thread! Leave me some love. Young Female Seeks Obscenely Rich Sugar Daddy
Dyslexic Devil Worshipers Sold Their Souls To Santa.
http://www.literotica.com/s/getting-over-it-ch-01-1
First chapter in new story. This is my first submission since 05, so go easy on me, but please vote and comment! Constructive criticisms please!
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07-16-2012, 10:19 AM
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Really Experienced
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around now & then. Learned some valuable lessons from you on being a truly descriptive writer who can capture a moment. If you ever want to pick up where we left off I'm all yours 
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07-18-2012, 07:49 AM
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The one That got Away
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Originally Posted by mecurial sky
around now & then. Learned some valuable lessons from you on being a truly descriptive writer who can capture a moment. If you ever want to pick up where we left off I'm all yours 
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Aw thats really sweet.... Thank you. I have some things I need to work on but I would definitely swap stories again 
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The difference between confident and cocky is in how much noise it makes. Confidence is silent.
~ Tricky
Who needs a knight in shining armor when you can have a soldier in ACU's?
Please check out my thread! Leave me some love. Young Female Seeks Obscenely Rich Sugar Daddy
Dyslexic Devil Worshipers Sold Their Souls To Santa.
http://www.literotica.com/s/getting-over-it-ch-01-1
First chapter in new story. This is my first submission since 05, so go easy on me, but please vote and comment! Constructive criticisms please!
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07-20-2012, 01:36 AM
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The one That got Away
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I'm not really expecting a lot of luck with this, but I would like someone to talk to. Not just anyone, though. A man who can hold a conversation, who wants to actually know about me and what I like instead of just using me as a means to an end. I would love it if he were witty and sarcastic and funny and isn't afraid to argue with me. He can paint a picture with words for me. I don't need to see pictures and I'm not really in the business of swapping pics. I would rather let my imagination tell me what you look like, or you can describe yourself to me. I want him to be a friend too, but my own personal fantasy lover first. If this isn't you, but you are good at pretending to be, and would like someone to be all of that for you, then shoot me a message. Dark, and mysterious a must

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The difference between confident and cocky is in how much noise it makes. Confidence is silent.
~ Tricky
Who needs a knight in shining armor when you can have a soldier in ACU's?
Please check out my thread! Leave me some love. Young Female Seeks Obscenely Rich Sugar Daddy
Dyslexic Devil Worshipers Sold Their Souls To Santa.
http://www.literotica.com/s/getting-over-it-ch-01-1
First chapter in new story. This is my first submission since 05, so go easy on me, but please vote and comment! Constructive criticisms please!
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07-21-2012, 02:51 AM
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The one That got Away
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Shameless bump 
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The difference between confident and cocky is in how much noise it makes. Confidence is silent.
~ Tricky
Who needs a knight in shining armor when you can have a soldier in ACU's?
Please check out my thread! Leave me some love. Young Female Seeks Obscenely Rich Sugar Daddy
Dyslexic Devil Worshipers Sold Their Souls To Santa.
http://www.literotica.com/s/getting-over-it-ch-01-1
First chapter in new story. This is my first submission since 05, so go easy on me, but please vote and comment! Constructive criticisms please!
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07-22-2012, 02:53 AM
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The one That got Away
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Anyone around tonight?
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The difference between confident and cocky is in how much noise it makes. Confidence is silent.
~ Tricky
Who needs a knight in shining armor when you can have a soldier in ACU's?
Please check out my thread! Leave me some love. Young Female Seeks Obscenely Rich Sugar Daddy
Dyslexic Devil Worshipers Sold Their Souls To Santa.
http://www.literotica.com/s/getting-over-it-ch-01-1
First chapter in new story. This is my first submission since 05, so go easy on me, but please vote and comment! Constructive criticisms please!
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07-22-2012, 05:42 AM
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Really Experienced
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Originally Posted by thiscouldbtricky
Anyone around tonight?
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Around if you are 
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07-22-2012, 05:43 AM
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The one That got Away
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Originally Posted by openmindedmnyc
Around if you are 
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Yep... definitely still here. lol
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The difference between confident and cocky is in how much noise it makes. Confidence is silent.
~ Tricky
Who needs a knight in shining armor when you can have a soldier in ACU's?
Please check out my thread! Leave me some love. Young Female Seeks Obscenely Rich Sugar Daddy
Dyslexic Devil Worshipers Sold Their Souls To Santa.
http://www.literotica.com/s/getting-over-it-ch-01-1
First chapter in new story. This is my first submission since 05, so go easy on me, but please vote and comment! Constructive criticisms please!
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07-22-2012, 05:49 AM
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Really Experienced
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Originally Posted by thiscouldbtricky
Yep... definitely still here. lol
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Then hello there, lol. So how ya doing tonight?
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07-22-2012, 05:54 AM
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The one That got Away
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Originally Posted by openmindedmnyc
Then hello there, lol. So how ya doing tonight?
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I'm good. Honestly, I've just been a little antsy the last couple days. I submitted a story here to lit and it's pending. The wait is making me a little nuts. 
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The difference between confident and cocky is in how much noise it makes. Confidence is silent.
~ Tricky
Who needs a knight in shining armor when you can have a soldier in ACU's?
Please check out my thread! Leave me some love. Young Female Seeks Obscenely Rich Sugar Daddy
Dyslexic Devil Worshipers Sold Their Souls To Santa.
http://www.literotica.com/s/getting-over-it-ch-01-1
First chapter in new story. This is my first submission since 05, so go easy on me, but please vote and comment! Constructive criticisms please!
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07-22-2012, 05:55 AM
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Really Experienced
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Originally Posted by thiscouldbtricky
I'm good. Honestly, I've just been a little antsy the last couple days. I submitted a story here to lit and it's pending. The wait is making me a little nuts. 
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Good for you. What's the story about? No spoilers!
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07-22-2012, 06:04 AM
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The one That got Away
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Good for you. What's the story about? No spoilers!
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lol, if I tell you, it will sound pretty boring. Post-first-date jitters kind of a thing. You'll really just have to read it. And it's less of a story so far than it is just a chapter.
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The difference between confident and cocky is in how much noise it makes. Confidence is silent.
~ Tricky
Who needs a knight in shining armor when you can have a soldier in ACU's?
Please check out my thread! Leave me some love. Young Female Seeks Obscenely Rich Sugar Daddy
Dyslexic Devil Worshipers Sold Their Souls To Santa.
http://www.literotica.com/s/getting-over-it-ch-01-1
First chapter in new story. This is my first submission since 05, so go easy on me, but please vote and comment! Constructive criticisms please!
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07-22-2012, 06:06 AM
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The one That got Away
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As a side note, I know a lot of people check up on this thread for the story. My submission has nothing in common with what you have read here. If there is enough outcry to read it though, I will post the link when it actually get's approved. 
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The difference between confident and cocky is in how much noise it makes. Confidence is silent.
~ Tricky
Who needs a knight in shining armor when you can have a soldier in ACU's?
Please check out my thread! Leave me some love. Young Female Seeks Obscenely Rich Sugar Daddy
Dyslexic Devil Worshipers Sold Their Souls To Santa.
http://www.literotica.com/s/getting-over-it-ch-01-1
First chapter in new story. This is my first submission since 05, so go easy on me, but please vote and comment! Constructive criticisms please!
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07-22-2012, 06:12 AM
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Re-Winged
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Quote:
Originally Posted by thiscouldbtricky
As a side note, I know a lot of people check up on this thread for the story. My submission has nothing in common with what you have read here. If there is enough outcry to read it though, I will post the link when it actually get's approved. 
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The waiting's frustrating isn't it? Believe me, you have my sympathy.
You get so excited to finally submit after all that effort of writing, reviewing, changing, editing and polishing.
And then you wait.
Check? Not approved yet.
Check? Yes some reviewers have started to read it.
Check? Yep, a few more.
Check? No more, so that's all right?
Check? Three fucking days. Aargh, I can't take this any more.
Check? *sobbing*
Check? YES!!!
Now, how's my rating going?
Check? ...
And so it goes. 
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07-22-2012, 06:31 AM
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The one That got Away
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Originally Posted by Jett_73
The waiting's frustrating isn't it? Believe me, you have my sympathy.
You get so excited to finally submit after all that effort of writing, reviewing, changing, editing and polishing.
And then you wait.
Check? Not approved yet.
Check? Yes some reviewers have started to read it.
Check? Yep, a few more.
Check? No more, so that's all right?
Check? Three fucking days. Aargh, I can't take this any more.
Check? *sobbing*
Check? YES!!!
Now, how's my rating going?
Check? ...
And so it goes. 
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.... Are you peeking in my windows or something? You just described my life for the past three days. Lol. It's nerve wracking, cuz it has like 50 views and I can't yelp but think enough reviewers MUST have seen it by now. ARRRgGhH.
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The difference between confident and cocky is in how much noise it makes. Confidence is silent.
~ Tricky
Who needs a knight in shining armor when you can have a soldier in ACU's?
Please check out my thread! Leave me some love. Young Female Seeks Obscenely Rich Sugar Daddy
Dyslexic Devil Worshipers Sold Their Souls To Santa.
http://www.literotica.com/s/getting-over-it-ch-01-1
First chapter in new story. This is my first submission since 05, so go easy on me, but please vote and comment! Constructive criticisms please!
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07-22-2012, 06:36 AM
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Youre worrying too much! Just let it happen.
Id stay and talk, but Ive only had a couple hours of sleep.
I just stopped by to have a quick peek around.
Have a good night and a good tomorrow!
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07-22-2012, 06:51 AM
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The one That got Away
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Originally Posted by jiimmmy
Youre worrying too much! Just let it happen.
Id stay and talk, but Ive only had a couple hours of sleep.
I just stopped by to have a quick peek around.
Have a good night and a good tomorrow!
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Aw, well thanks for checking in! Have a good night babe. 
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The difference between confident and cocky is in how much noise it makes. Confidence is silent.
~ Tricky
Who needs a knight in shining armor when you can have a soldier in ACU's?
Please check out my thread! Leave me some love. Young Female Seeks Obscenely Rich Sugar Daddy
Dyslexic Devil Worshipers Sold Their Souls To Santa.
http://www.literotica.com/s/getting-over-it-ch-01-1
First chapter in new story. This is my first submission since 05, so go easy on me, but please vote and comment! Constructive criticisms please!
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07-22-2012, 07:18 AM
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Good morning, only just stumbled across this thread, notice you had the usual 'wam bam thank you mam' responses from the less imaginative members of our lovely community here on Lit!
Thought it sounded a great start to a story, so hope you got some good quality additions from the more romantic and creative ones!
Have a great day!
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07-22-2012, 07:26 AM
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I love your writing and eagerly await more! If you ever want a partner for a thread please contact me.
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07-22-2012, 07:31 AM
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Re-Winged
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Quote:
Originally Posted by thiscouldbtricky
.... Are you peeking in my windows or something? You just described my life for the past three days. Lol. It's nerve wracking, cuz it has like 50 views and I can't yelp but think enough reviewers MUST have seen it by now. ARRRgGhH.
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Not peeking, I promise.
Just that I do exactly that whenever I sub a story. I think we get attached to our little creations. 
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07-22-2012, 07:32 AM
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The one That got Away
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Quote:
Originally Posted by jackflash81
Good morning, only just stumbled across this thread, notice you had the usual 'wam bam thank you mam' responses from the less imaginative members of our lovely community here on Lit!
Thought it sounded a great start to a story, so hope you got some good quality additions from the more romantic and creative ones!
Have a great day!
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As a general rule, the really good ones messaged me privately their additions 
I appreciate you checking it out though, thanks. Have a great day yourself. 
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The difference between confident and cocky is in how much noise it makes. Confidence is silent.
~ Tricky
Who needs a knight in shining armor when you can have a soldier in ACU's?
Please check out my thread! Leave me some love. Young Female Seeks Obscenely Rich Sugar Daddy
Dyslexic Devil Worshipers Sold Their Souls To Santa.
http://www.literotica.com/s/getting-over-it-ch-01-1
First chapter in new story. This is my first submission since 05, so go easy on me, but please vote and comment! Constructive criticisms please!
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07-22-2012, 09:38 AM
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shifting my paradigms
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Hey Sweetie!
How the book pimping going? Are you reading more then selling? Beautifully written can't wait to see more.
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07-23-2012, 05:53 AM
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The one That got Away
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Hey Sweetie!
How the book pimping going? Are you reading more then selling? Beautifully written can't wait to see more.
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Hi there! Book pimping... I think I'm gonna start using that now lol. It's going, stuff doesn't really change that much. Havent had another hot seller since 50. I haven't been reading much lately though, been crazy busy with work and getting ready to start school again.
I'm house sitting for a friend right now, so I'm kinda lonely. But it's out in the country so the view is nice 
How are you doing?
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The difference between confident and cocky is in how much noise it makes. Confidence is silent.
~ Tricky
Who needs a knight in shining armor when you can have a soldier in ACU's?
Please check out my thread! Leave me some love. Young Female Seeks Obscenely Rich Sugar Daddy
Dyslexic Devil Worshipers Sold Their Souls To Santa.
http://www.literotica.com/s/getting-over-it-ch-01-1
First chapter in new story. This is my first submission since 05, so go easy on me, but please vote and comment! Constructive criticisms please!
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07-23-2012, 09:45 PM
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The one That got Away
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Finally!
My submission posted! The votes aren't looking so hot so far so I would greatly appreciate it if you all checked it out. Vote, comment, all that. Go easy on me, it's been a long time since I really wrote anything, but constructive criticism would be awesome!
Thanks in advance!
http://www.literotica.com/s/getting-over-it-ch-01-1
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The difference between confident and cocky is in how much noise it makes. Confidence is silent.
~ Tricky
Who needs a knight in shining armor when you can have a soldier in ACU's?
Please check out my thread! Leave me some love. Young Female Seeks Obscenely Rich Sugar Daddy
Dyslexic Devil Worshipers Sold Their Souls To Santa.
http://www.literotica.com/s/getting-over-it-ch-01-1
First chapter in new story. This is my first submission since 05, so go easy on me, but please vote and comment! Constructive criticisms please!
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