 |
|
 |
| - Free Speech, No Spam! - |
 |
 |
 |
 |
 |
05-27-2012, 10:38 AM
|
#1
|
|
Virgin
delonch is offline
Join Date: Nov 2009
Posts: 20
|
Religious mom tricked with bible quotes
hey yall, heres an idea:
---
Jack's the son of a small town preacher and his wife Erin. His parents are deeply religious, but Jack has lost faith.
Jack's in the kitchen, trying to reach for a glass on the top shelf. Thinking he was alone, he is startled by his mom entering the kitchen and accidentally knocks over the glass which falls on the floor shattering. "Jack! Those are very expensive! We'll have to take that out of your allowance," yells Erin.
- "But mom!"
- "No buts, you have to learn the consequences of your actions!"
Dejectedly, Jack says, "but doesn't the bible say that a broken glass brings luck?" Erin looks dumbfounded at him, she doesn't remember the bible saying that, but she doesn't want to lose face and she's not entirely sure. "Yes, Jack, it does," she affirms. There is no more talk about culling Jack's allowance.
An idea forms in Jack's mind, and over the next few days, he experiments. It appears to him that it has been some time since Erin last read the bible, and if he's careful she'll believe whatever he says as long as he attributes it to the book. At first he just uses this to get out of chores and stay out late, but one day his father announces that he's going to a religious seminar in the capital.
As the afternoon comes to an end, Jack enters his parents bedroom and finds his mom sitting on the side of the bed in her long virginal night gown, braiding her hair. "You know what the bible says, mom. If a man is away from home, his wife must not tempt her neighbors with an empty bed. Her first-born son must sleep next to her to protect her virtue from strangers."
"I know that," she huffs, "I've always lived by the rules of the good book!"
Jack takes off his shirt and pants, but as he starts to pull down his boxers, his mom exclaims "what on Earth do you think you're doing?!" Having prepared for this question, Jack replies "In sleep, man and woman are innocent like Adam and Eve in the garden before the fall. They can shed off their clothing with a clear conscience under the watchful eyes of God."
Erin mulls it over and nods. "You're right, it is a beautiful thing that we may return to that innocence." She bends down and pulls her night gown over her head as Jack lets his boxers fall to the ground.
"Time for our evening prayer," says Erin and kneels next to the bed. Jack stands behind her, admiring her full behind. "What are you waiting for," she asks, and he kneels down next to her and folds his hands. The ritual completed, they get under the covers. Jack turns and hugs her good night, but does not yet have a plan for how to proceed, and so they drift off to sleep naked as God created them.
The next morning, Jack awakens to the sounds of his mom puttering about. He opens his eyes and sees to his disappointment that she's wearing the night gown again. I guess I was too specific with that quote, thinks Jack, she will only be naked at night.
Jack stretches and yawns. "About time you woke up," says Erin. "Now get up and take a shower so I can make the bed."
In a flash of inspiration, Jack says "A pious mother must ensure with vigilance that her son's body does not become unclean. Doesn't that mean you should help me?"
"You're right, it does," says Erin. "Now hurry up, I don't want to wait all day!"
"So how do we do this?" She asks as Jack reaches into the shower and starts adjusting the knobs for the correct temperature. "I guess you can come into the shower with me? That way we'll avoid getting water everywhere." Erin nods, and Jack enters the stall having found the ideal temperature.
To his surprise, Erin enters the stall still wearing the night gown. "But your gown!" exclaims Jack. "You silly boy, we can't be naked together like that, it wouldn't be right," she replies, oblivious to the fact that the sheer white material is immediately completely transparent.
Jack stands there under the water as his mom starts soaping him up, diligently avoiding his dick as it juts out between them. "All over, mom," Jack whispers, and finally she puts the washcloth where he wants. Almost immediately, he shoots all over her night gown.
"Jack! remember the story of Onan, you mustn't spill your seed!"
"I'm sorry, I couldn't help it!"
"Well, try to be more careful, this is serious!"
Jack agrees dizzily.
That night in bed, Jack turns to Erin. "Mom, I was thinking about the story of Onan."
"What about it?"
"Well, I have to tell you that I often have wet dreams, and I'm worried about what God will think of me spilling my seed."
"I don't think that is a problem, if it happens in the innocence of night, when we are free from sin," she says, having fully embraced his earlier "quote".
"But what if it is? I don't want to sully that innocence with sinful emissions."
"What are you getting at?"
"Onan was struck down because he spilled his seed, and I don't want that to happen to me, so maybe you could help me."
"How could I possibly do that?"
"If you allow me to deposit my seed in you, God will see that it is good."
In the ensuing silence, Jack swallowed hard as his heart pounded in his ears.
"You're right Jack. I will help you be pure in the eyes of God. Let me know if you are worried that it might happen one night."
Jack almost exploded, and with forced calm said, "I am worried it might happen tonight."
With that, Erin rolled over and got on top of him, guiding his rod into her warmth. "Oh mom, thank you" whispered Jack.
"Hush, son, I am doing this to save your soul and mine too. I must do everything in my power to keep you pure and innocent," said Erin as she started riding him.
Last edited by delonch : 05-27-2012 at 10:45 AM.
|
|
|
|
05-27-2012, 11:10 AM
|
#2
|
|
Really Really Experienced
lynn-23 is offline
Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: Colorado
Posts: 313
|
That is great! Very original, loved it.
|
|
|
|
05-27-2012, 11:40 AM
|
#3
|
|
Nature's Child
DarkPleasures is offline
Join Date: Feb 2012
Location: Near Offutt AFB
Posts: 2,138
|
So, Jack is an eighteen year old who still gets an allowance and who sounds/acts like a little boy?
__________________
I am a pansexual Pagan who finds beauty in all things in life, and certainly in all people regardless of their sexual orientation or gender identification.
|
|
|
|
05-27-2012, 11:44 AM
|
#4
|
|
Virgin
delonch is offline
Join Date: Nov 2009
Posts: 20
|
what can I say, sheltered religious upbrining
|
|
|
|
05-27-2012, 02:26 PM
|
#5
|
|
Riding to the Rescue
sirhugs is offline
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: Thunder Bay, Ontario, Canada
Posts: 32,556
|
and Jack grows up to be be a famous TV evangelist?

|
|
|
|
05-27-2012, 03:33 PM
|
#6
|
|
Literotica Guru
HeyAll is offline
Join Date: Jun 2008
Location: California
Posts: 2,290
|
Interesting and original idea.
Perhaps the son could also mention that a wife is supposed to be submissive to her husband, yet the son expands & twists the meaning to the wife has to be submissive to the man of the house. The husband is out of the picture for whatever reason, so that would make the son the household leader. You know what happens next...
__________________
Sex Toys- A younger brother finds his sister's naughty collection.
Can I Watch?- Mom enjoys seeing her son masturbate.
Your Heart's Desire- A college student falls for her professor. (Lesbian)
|
|
|
|
05-27-2012, 05:53 PM
|
#7
|
|
Literotica Guru
SeaUrchin_STG_M is offline
Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: FL
Posts: 527
|
It is a really original dea with lots of room for interesting events, until Erin attends a womans bible conference, and realizes that Jack has been lying to her. Revenge is a dish best served cold.
__________________
Hope to titilate you soon. My Stories can be found here
|
|
|
|
05-27-2012, 05:57 PM
|
#8
|
|
Literotica Guru
HeyAll is offline
Join Date: Jun 2008
Location: California
Posts: 2,290
|
Perhaps she realizes her son has been tricking her in to giving him hand jobs or oral sex, then she decides to tease the heck out of him with skimpy outfits and promises of sex, only to say she's too tired leaving him on his own to masturbate. She realizes that she loves teasing him and giving him a hard time, and eventually has sex with him to make up for it.
__________________
Sex Toys- A younger brother finds his sister's naughty collection.
Can I Watch?- Mom enjoys seeing her son masturbate.
Your Heart's Desire- A college student falls for her professor. (Lesbian)
|
|
|
|
05-28-2012, 06:50 AM
|
#9
|
|
Was charmbrights, snooper
snoopercharmbrights is offline
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: Tirphil
Posts: 2,115
|
Quote:
Originally Posted by delonch
... It appears to him that it has been some time since Erin last read the bible, and if he's careful she'll believe whatever he says as long as he attributes it to the book. ...
|
Two good ones come to mind:
The US Senator who famously said, "As the Good Book says, 'He that tooteth not his own trumpet, the same shall not be tooted'?" (Actually written by Scots novelist and soldier, Ian Hay.)
Or
Judas went out and hanged himself. And Jesus said, "Go and do thou likewise."
__________________
Latest news of my novels, including where to find free copies, can be found here.
My Literotica stories can be found here and here.
I am not a "qualified" editor, ex-pilot, ex-diplomat, or ex-CIA operative, or expert on literary derivations, nor do I post ten times a day on Lit; I am merely —————?
As Asimov said, I am merely a merely.
Last edited by snoopercharmbrights : 05-28-2012 at 06:54 AM.
Reason: Add attribution
|
|
|
|
05-28-2012, 07:04 AM
|
#10
|
|
Literotica Guru
shewantsmore is offline
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: cambs.....uk
Posts: 5,618
|
Quote:
Originally Posted by delonch
hey yall, heres an idea:
---
Jack's the son of a small town preacher and his wife Erin. His parents are deeply religious, but Jack has lost faith.
Jack's in the kitchen, trying to reach for a glass on the top shelf. Thinking he was alone, he is startled by his mom entering the kitchen and accidentally knocks over the glass which falls on the floor shattering. "Jack! Those are very expensive! We'll have to take that out of your allowance," yells Erin.
- "But mom!"
- "No buts, you have to learn the consequences of your actions!"
Dejectedly, Jack says, "but doesn't the bible say that a broken glass brings luck?" Erin looks dumbfounded at him, she doesn't remember the bible saying that, but she doesn't want to lose face and she's not entirely sure. "Yes, Jack, it does," she affirms. There is no more talk about culling Jack's allowance.
An idea forms in Jack's mind, and over the next few days, he experiments. It appears to him that it has been some time since Erin last read the bible, and if he's careful she'll believe whatever he says as long as he attributes it to the book. At first he just uses this to get out of chores and stay out late, but one day his father announces that he's going to a religious seminar in the capital.
As the afternoon comes to an end, Jack enters his parents bedroom and finds his mom sitting on the side of the bed in her long virginal night gown, braiding her hair. "You know what the bible says, mom. If a man is away from home, his wife must not tempt her neighbors with an empty bed. Her first-born son must sleep next to her to protect her virtue from strangers."
"I know that," she huffs, "I've always lived by the rules of the good book!"
Jack takes off his shirt and pants, but as he starts to pull down his boxers, his mom exclaims "what on Earth do you think you're doing?!" Having prepared for this question, Jack replies "In sleep, man and woman are innocent like Adam and Eve in the garden before the fall. They can shed off their clothing with a clear conscience under the watchful eyes of God."
Erin mulls it over and nods. "You're right, it is a beautiful thing that we may return to that innocence." She bends down and pulls her night gown over her head as Jack lets his boxers fall to the ground.
"Time for our evening prayer," says Erin and kneels next to the bed. Jack stands behind her, admiring her full behind. "What are you waiting for," she asks, and he kneels down next to her and folds his hands. The ritual completed, they get under the covers. Jack turns and hugs her good night, but does not yet have a plan for how to proceed, and so they drift off to sleep naked as God created them.
The next morning, Jack awakens to the sounds of his mom puttering about. He opens his eyes and sees to his disappointment that she's wearing the night gown again. I guess I was too specific with that quote, thinks Jack, she will only be naked at night.
Jack stretches and yawns. "About time you woke up," says Erin. "Now get up and take a shower so I can make the bed."
In a flash of inspiration, Jack says "A pious mother must ensure with vigilance that her son's body does not become unclean. Doesn't that mean you should help me?"
"You're right, it does," says Erin. "Now hurry up, I don't want to wait all day!"
"So how do we do this?" She asks as Jack reaches into the shower and starts adjusting the knobs for the correct temperature. "I guess you can come into the shower with me? That way we'll avoid getting water everywhere." Erin nods, and Jack enters the stall having found the ideal temperature.
To his surprise, Erin enters the stall still wearing the night gown. "But your gown!" exclaims Jack. "You silly boy, we can't be naked together like that, it wouldn't be right," she replies, oblivious to the fact that the sheer white material is immediately completely transparent.
Jack stands there under the water as his mom starts soaping him up, diligently avoiding his dick as it juts out between them. "All over, mom," Jack whispers, and finally she puts the washcloth where he wants. Almost immediately, he shoots all over her night gown.
"Jack! remember the story of Onan, you mustn't spill your seed!"
"I'm sorry, I couldn't help it!"
"Well, try to be more careful, this is serious!"
Jack agrees dizzily.
That night in bed, Jack turns to Erin. "Mom, I was thinking about the story of Onan."
"What about it?"
"Well, I have to tell you that I often have wet dreams, and I'm worried about what God will think of me spilling my seed."
"I don't think that is a problem, if it happens in the innocence of night, when we are free from sin," she says, having fully embraced his earlier "quote".
"But what if it is? I don't want to sully that innocence with sinful emissions."
"What are you getting at?"
"Onan was struck down because he spilled his seed, and I don't want that to happen to me, so maybe you could help me."
"How could I possibly do that?"
"If you allow me to deposit my seed in you, God will see that it is good."
In the ensuing silence, Jack swallowed hard as his heart pounded in his ears.
"You're right Jack. I will help you be pure in the eyes of God. Let me know if you are worried that it might happen one night."
Jack almost exploded, and with forced calm said, "I am worried it might happen tonight."
With that, Erin rolled over and got on top of him, guiding his rod into her warmth. "Oh mom, thank you" whispered Jack.
"Hush, son, I am doing this to save your soul and mine too. I must do everything in my power to keep you pure and innocent," said Erin as she started riding him.
|
thats an original idea,never seen that one before
|
|
|
|
06-23-2012, 07:57 AM
|
#11
|
|
Virgin
delonch is offline
Join Date: Nov 2009
Posts: 20
|
I'm not a writer though so if anyone wants to run with it, go ahead. I just like thinkin up scenarios.
|
|
|
|
06-23-2012, 09:59 AM
|
#12
|
|
Really Experienced
Electronichippy is offline
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: Im from the North of England
Posts: 170
|
This sounds great, would love to read a full story 
|
|
|
|
06-23-2012, 12:43 PM
|
#13
|
|
Lit's Resident Eagle
topace is offline
Join Date: Apr 2012
Location: Alberta, Canada
Posts: 1,905
|
I might run with this idea. It's interesting to me in a way.
|
|
|
|
06-24-2012, 06:34 PM
|
#14
|
|
Virgin
delonch is offline
Join Date: Nov 2009
Posts: 20
|
Quote:
Originally Posted by topace
I might run with this idea. It's interesting to me in a way.
|
Cool, please post the link here if you do it 
|
|
|
|
06-24-2012, 07:39 PM
|
#15
|
|
Literotica Guru
Englandboy2 is offline
Join Date: Jun 2009
Posts: 5,942
|
Very good idea, and has lots of potential if handled properly. Original and inventive. Hope to read it soon.
|
|
|
|
06-24-2012, 09:16 PM
|
#16
|
|
Literotica Guru
rthnck is offline
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Mayland
Posts: 637
|
The Dark Bible
I think the story would be much stronger (although harder to write) by using actual biblical quotes to justify the sex. There is enough ambiguity and first century culture in the written text to allow for twisted interpretations to achieve any ends desired (witness every televangelist in the world). A good starting point might be here: The Dark Bible
I'm sure there a plenty of internet discussions that could aid in twisting the words to suit the story.
|
|
|
|
06-24-2012, 09:58 PM
|
#17
|
|
Virgin
delonch is offline
Join Date: Nov 2009
Posts: 20
|
Yeah it should definitely at least start out with real quotes, if only to get Erin believing he's being benign. Then maybe later when she's under his spell as it were, he can start the more outlandish stuff.
|
|
|
|
06-25-2012, 01:40 AM
|
#18
|
|
Literotica Guru
lazyhobo is offline
Join Date: Dec 2011
Location: England
Posts: 570
|
Quote:
Originally Posted by delonch
Yeah it should definitely at least start out with real quotes, if only to get Erin believing he's being benign. Then maybe later when she's under his spell as it were, he can start the more outlandish stuff.
|
Very good idea, though im inclined to agree, it should start out as true quotes, even if he twists the meanings, that way, she can check and upon seeing them, be more believing and less inclined to check what he says.
|
|
|
|
06-25-2012, 08:06 AM
|
#19
|
|
Really Really Experienced
Reshbod is offline
Join Date: Apr 2002
Location: Texas
Posts: 466
|
I recall a scene from some porn movie similar to this idea. In it, the woman is talking with a minister and answers a question about being saved that she is sinless. Now no Christian (assuming the mom is one) would say that, even if deep down she believed it. The minister convinced her that she had to sin in order to ask for forgiveness to be saved.
Of course, he convinced her and they go to town.
I think this idea could be expanded on using actual quotes and so confusing the mom that she ends up agreeing enthusiastically.
__________________
"In the beginning the universe was created. This has made a lot of people unhappy and been generally regarded as a bad move."
Life the Universe and Everything
|
|
|
|
06-25-2012, 02:46 PM
|
#20
|
|
Virgin
DrMartens is offline
Join Date: Mar 2010
Posts: 19
|
I been thinking about this idea for a long time. really erotic. a deep religious mom... and a son.
maybe with time they get aware of what they are doing. that this is really forbidden in the eyes of god. but they want to live what bible tells them.
maybe they start to try to exorcize the devil with special rituals and masses in their private chapel. maybe they use a other bible for this rituals.
this masses should be even more forbidden and dirty.
with her wearing sinful dresses. and doing naughty things like driking his seed with wine... or eating it up with the host.
but everytime after these masses both feel kind of cleaned and free to live a good and proper religious life again... until the pressure starts to build up again.
kind of a historic setting in the 19th century would be nice too... but no must ;-)
|
|
|
|
06-26-2012, 06:33 PM
|
#21
|
|
Naughty Nurse in Training
NeverWinterNite is offline
Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: Toronto, Canada
Posts: 5,775
|
Quote:
Originally Posted by delonch
hey yall, heres an idea:
---
Jack's the son of a small town preacher and his wife Erin. His parents are deeply religious, but Jack has lost faith.
Jack's in the kitchen, trying to reach for a glass on the top shelf. Thinking he was alone, he is startled by his mom entering the kitchen and accidentally knocks over the glass which falls on the floor shattering. "Jack! Those are very expensive! We'll have to take that out of your allowance," yells Erin.
- "But mom!"
- "No buts, you have to learn the consequences of your actions!"
Dejectedly, Jack says, "but doesn't the bible say that a broken glass brings luck?" Erin looks dumbfounded at him, she doesn't remember the bible saying that, but she doesn't want to lose face and she's not entirely sure. "Yes, Jack, it does," she affirms. There is no more talk about culling Jack's allowance.
An idea forms in Jack's mind, and over the next few days, he experiments. It appears to him that it has been some time since Erin last read the bible, and if he's careful she'll believe whatever he says as long as he attributes it to the book. At first he just uses this to get out of chores and stay out late, but one day his father announces that he's going to a religious seminar in the capital.
As the afternoon comes to an end, Jack enters his parents bedroom and finds his mom sitting on the side of the bed in her long virginal night gown, braiding her hair. "You know what the bible says, mom. If a man is away from home, his wife must not tempt her neighbors with an empty bed. Her first-born son must sleep next to her to protect her virtue from strangers."
"I know that," she huffs, "I've always lived by the rules of the good book!"
Jack takes off his shirt and pants, but as he starts to pull down his boxers, his mom exclaims "what on Earth do you think you're doing?!" Having prepared for this question, Jack replies "In sleep, man and woman are innocent like Adam and Eve in the garden before the fall. They can shed off their clothing with a clear conscience under the watchful eyes of God."
Erin mulls it over and nods. "You're right, it is a beautiful thing that we may return to that innocence." She bends down and pulls her night gown over her head as Jack lets his boxers fall to the ground.
"Time for our evening prayer," says Erin and kneels next to the bed. Jack stands behind her, admiring her full behind. "What are you waiting for," she asks, and he kneels down next to her and folds his hands. The ritual completed, they get under the covers. Jack turns and hugs her good night, but does not yet have a plan for how to proceed, and so they drift off to sleep naked as God created them.
The next morning, Jack awakens to the sounds of his mom puttering about. He opens his eyes and sees to his disappointment that she's wearing the night gown again. I guess I was too specific with that quote, thinks Jack, she will only be naked at night.
Jack stretches and yawns. "About time you woke up," says Erin. "Now get up and take a shower so I can make the bed."
In a flash of inspiration, Jack says "A pious mother must ensure with vigilance that her son's body does not become unclean. Doesn't that mean you should help me?"
"You're right, it does," says Erin. "Now hurry up, I don't want to wait all day!"
"So how do we do this?" She asks as Jack reaches into the shower and starts adjusting the knobs for the correct temperature. "I guess you can come into the shower with me? That way we'll avoid getting water everywhere." Erin nods, and Jack enters the stall having found the ideal temperature.
To his surprise, Erin enters the stall still wearing the night gown. "But your gown!" exclaims Jack. "You silly boy, we can't be naked together like that, it wouldn't be right," she replies, oblivious to the fact that the sheer white material is immediately completely transparent.
Jack stands there under the water as his mom starts soaping him up, diligently avoiding his dick as it juts out between them. "All over, mom," Jack whispers, and finally she puts the washcloth where he wants. Almost immediately, he shoots all over her night gown.
"Jack! remember the story of Onan, you mustn't spill your seed!"
"I'm sorry, I couldn't help it!"
"Well, try to be more careful, this is serious!"
Jack agrees dizzily.
That night in bed, Jack turns to Erin. "Mom, I was thinking about the story of Onan."
"What about it?"
"Well, I have to tell you that I often have wet dreams, and I'm worried about what God will think of me spilling my seed."
"I don't think that is a problem, if it happens in the innocence of night, when we are free from sin," she says, having fully embraced his earlier "quote".
"But what if it is? I don't want to sully that innocence with sinful emissions."
"What are you getting at?"
"Onan was struck down because he spilled his seed, and I don't want that to happen to me, so maybe you could help me."
"How could I possibly do that?"
"If you allow me to deposit my seed in you, God will see that it is good."
In the ensuing silence, Jack swallowed hard as his heart pounded in his ears.
"You're right Jack. I will help you be pure in the eyes of God. Let me know if you are worried that it might happen one night."
Jack almost exploded, and with forced calm said, "I am worried it might happen tonight."
With that, Erin rolled over and got on top of him, guiding his rod into her warmth. "Oh mom, thank you" whispered Jack.
"Hush, son, I am doing this to save your soul and mine too. I must do everything in my power to keep you pure and innocent," said Erin as she started riding him.
|
I think this is a wonderful idea.
|
|
|
|
06-27-2012, 06:01 PM
|
#22
|
|
Virgin
STD00 is offline
Join Date: May 2009
Location: Capital City, inDiA
Posts: 4
|
Awesome.....please post link here if anyone runs this story..
__________________
I am a disease...
|
|
|
|
07-01-2012, 01:47 AM
|
#23
|
|
Really Experienced
silkstockingslover is offline
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: canada
Posts: 110
|
Quote:
Originally Posted by delonch
Yeah it should definitely at least start out with real quotes, if only to get Erin believing he's being benign. Then maybe later when she's under his spell as it were, he can start the more outlandish stuff.
|
Hi,
I would be interested in writing this story if no one else is yet..please check my stories to see if u like my style...
If so...email me and we can chat...over details ans so forth...
Silkstockinglover
Love, love the idea...
|
|
|
|
12-02-2012, 08:45 PM
|
#24
|
|
Virgin
Wintarlend is offline
Join Date: Dec 2012
Posts: 2
|
Hello. Someone wrote this story?
|
|
|
|
12-02-2012, 09:42 PM
|
#25
|
|
Jahansuz
MatthewVett is offline
Join Date: Jun 2009
Location: New England
Posts: 1,787
|
Quote:
Originally Posted by Wintarlend
Hello. Someone wrote this story?
|
You made an account to ask this?
|
|
|
|
Posting Rules
|
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
HTML code is Off
|
|
|
|
All times are GMT -4. The time now is 03:27 AM. |
|
|
|
|