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Old 01-17-2015, 03:32 AM   #1
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Let's Hear It For The Poets

This is a voice thread y'all. So let's hear it.

Read us a favorite piece
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I'll start us off with one of each, a favorite and a tribute piece

https://soundcloud.com/mistress-heather/poemtothefreaks

https://soundcloud.com/mistress-heather/sorrycharlie
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Old 01-20-2015, 04:58 AM   #2
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Old 01-20-2015, 07:27 AM   #3
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shush whispered deep into you clavicle
as hands pin your wrists to your hips,
teeth slide hard as hot breath
chars a path up to your ear lobe

moaning a little
grind forward
your want simmers below the belt
as he turns up the flames,
the forceful thump
as pinned to the wall you squirm
in beaded droplets of heat boiled over
dampen your panties as he

passes both your wrists into one hand
nailing them to the wall
his lips, your lips
join together
as his free hand
rends your underwear
he whispers shush as you blush a deep crimson
and try your hardest to get him to fuck you
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Old 01-20-2015, 07:39 AM   #4
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Yay, I'm not a lone nut any more. Now there's a pair of us.

Great voice and choice of pieces to read.
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Old 01-20-2015, 08:40 AM   #5
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Old 01-20-2015, 11:15 AM   #6
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Now it's a party!

Angeline, you remind me of someone, I wish I could think who, but I know it's someone I've heard read poetry before. If I ever figure it out I'll PM it to you
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Old 01-20-2015, 12:11 PM   #7
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Old 01-20-2015, 06:29 PM   #8
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Here you go Trix :-)

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Old 01-20-2015, 06:34 PM   #9
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Yay! Love your stuff and your voice!
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Old 01-20-2015, 06:37 PM   #10
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And on the steamier side...

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Old 01-20-2015, 06:49 PM   #11
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And on the steamier side...

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You know I just luuurve your Southern drawl and admire all your writing Trix.

This piece is hawt! Hawt! Hawt!
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Old 01-20-2015, 10:22 PM   #12
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Here ya go Honey, another with my southern drawl

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Old 01-20-2015, 10:46 PM   #13
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Vocally Poetic
Spring!

It's exciting to see the early spears
of hyacinth and daffodil pierce the mulch
which answers with a labial embrace
around the thickening stem

Sun-warmed fertility of damp richness
prepared with peat and composted life
clumps in thick furrows as fingertips
rake the earth over early seeds

A prayer sung by robins in the birch
in a hope that last week's snows
are merely remnants of the winter
not harbringers of too cold spring

Low slung clouds portend afternoon
precipitation and smell of fresh rain
the day too hot for snow unlike frost
scented nights that bite twitched noses

The dust boils around childish ankles
as sand and broom replaces snow
and shovel for a ten dollar allowance
a copper sparks unwanted, worthless

The flick of tongue across thirsty lips
gathers salt and minerals from heated
skin and reminds that the labour earns
no more or less than 1000 pennies saved.

But still, tulips press through yeilding earth
and trees bud with impetuous disregard
that snow weighs heavy on fragile green
and breaks the spine of hasty blossoms.
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Yay! I was hoping you'd join the fray Champagne. Lovely piece and reading
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Old 01-20-2015, 11:05 PM   #15
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Great thread Trix. I am loving listening to the reads. Hope more will take the plunge!
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Old 01-21-2015, 05:39 AM   #17
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on my old laptop i can only hear angie and champers atm, but what a delight! i'll try to listen to you others on mine or no3's pc later today if i get the chance between things i have to do with the sons. keep it up!
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Old 01-21-2015, 07:21 AM   #18
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SO good to hear you all you all sound vry different to how I imagined, except trix, I some how expected a real southern lilt
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Butters! I wanna hear you too! Any chance you'll join the fray?
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Old 01-21-2015, 03:11 PM   #20
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Butters! I wanna hear you too! Any chance you'll join the fray?
i will, i promise. i'll try for sunday - i need to do something for pete's thread over on the GB as well. the issue is this laptop, with no2 son using my pc dwnstairs and no3 using his in his room when he's not asleep - i need to match up my time when not at work with their using/sleeping times. it's a bit complicated, especially when i'm fitting in lots of reading, celebrity big brother and, starting tonight, wolf hall. speaking of which, i'm not happy with how theyve got the lead character looking. he doesn't match up to the description in the book!
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Smile Record a poem Smokey, you know you want to ;-)

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Smile Riffin offa this thread

https://soundcloud.com/honeyadored/the-voice

The Voice

Softly his words drift over me
A warm breath of air caresses my delicate flesh
Humming attentively on the more receptive parts of my body
Arousal heightens
Paying homage to his voice
His tongue fills me with giddiness
Sensual words swirl and whirl in my mind...and below
Evoking fanciful desires and lusty needs
I reach out
Grasping at each syllable
Clinging onto every enunciation
His voice draws us closer as our two worlds collide
Words enticing me over the edge...of my world
I’m falling...
Falling...
I succumb to erotic verse
Tossing and turning as wave upon wave engulfs me
Silence comes...
I lay in the stillness...
Panting...for breath...
His seductive lyrics have left me...with more than my ears buzzing
He will always be No.1 on my playlist......
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Well, thank you so much for your encouragement, H.A.—I just took out the link at first because I hadn't at first realized this was a poetry audio thread, so I didn't think it belonged there...but if you really want it back, okay—boom!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/sh...-audio-version

And yeah, I'll certainly have to locate a poem to record. I'm thinking of ideas to write another one, but in the meantime, do you have any suggestions?
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Well, thank you so much for your encouragement, H.A.—I just took out the link at first because I hadn't at first realized this was a poetry audio thread, so I didn't think it belonged there...but if you really want it back, okay—boom!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/sh...-audio-version

And yeah, I'll certainly have to locate a poem to record. I'm thinking of ideas to write another one, but in the meantime, do you have any suggestions?
Here's a challenge for you, pick a title of one of your existing stories and write a poem based on said title :-)
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