Old 05-21-2012, 07:20 AM   #1
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hi. New to this thread so not sure if this has been done before or over done But it's a challenge i use to share with some friends. Basically you write a word and the next person writes a 4 line quick poem and then gives a word for the next person etc. If it sucks I'm sorry. My word for the first person game enough to try follow my rambling is.............. Highland
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Old 05-21-2012, 09:23 PM   #2
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(you're on!)

Afterward inserting 4 line poem after Tzara made me read the damn directions. (TY TZ)

Next Stop, Ireland

my clan buried the sons
of the Campbells on Scotts'
highland. Centuries of skirmish
later, Kingsmen evicted us.



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Old 05-21-2012, 11:19 PM   #3
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Park
The night had settled as the car stopped at the park down by the river./ The cool breeze off the water raised goosebumps as our bared flesh began to shiver/ In anticipation we laid ourselves down upon the dewy grass./ And you moaned with delight as I gently kissed and licked and enjoyed your offered ass. the next word is breeze.

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Old 05-22-2012, 05:07 PM   #4
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(in response to breeze)

Oh this light print dress
among trees and traffic
with the flutter hem
rises above thighs!

trajectory
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Old 05-22-2012, 05:21 PM   #5
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Love shot his heart pure linear,
but gravity bent his inertial arc
parabolic, trajectory near vertical,
and the affair ended augered in the earth.

Next word: schism


I think you're supposed to respond with a four-line poem as well as a word, Dora.
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Love shot his heart pure linear,
but gravity bent his inertial arc
parabolic, trajectory near vertical,
and the affair ended augered in the earth.

Next word: schism


I think you're supposed to respond with a four-line poem as well as a word, Dora.

Our union comes undone no
opposition, a divorce sans emnity.
A shattering schism my rock
that rolled, my poor old Camry, goodbye.

Next word: predatory

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Our union comes undone no
opposition, a divorce sans emnity.
A shattering schism my rock
that rolled, my poor old Camry, goodbye.

Next word: predatory
Spinal Tap

Cranked to eleven, the amplifier
suddenly went predatory and ate
my guitar. My fingers bled a dirge.
Bring on the chthonic gods!


Next word: nocturne



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Cranked to eleven, the amplifier
suddenly went predatory and ate
my guitar. My fingers bled a dirge.
Bring on the chthonic gods!


Next word: nocturne



............
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If only the vic had some bad habits
the whack wouldn't have been so bad,
blonde hair no longer vanilla
but blood cherry in some nocturne alley.

Next word: naugahyde
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If only the vic had some bad habits
the whack wouldn't have been so bad,
blonde hair no longer vanilla
but blood cherry in some nocturne alley.

Next word: naugahyde
Buick Electra 225

Sapphire blue, with Naugahyde
Bench seat in back, let's hide
And lose our youth in stride.

The film: When Worlds Collide.



Next word: inarticulate.




We, or more particularly, I, have missed you, gm. Good to see you back.
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inarticulate

Across the bed on her back she laid./ And a gargled, inarticulate noise she made./ As she felt her cervix pierced by his cock./ She moaned in wonder, ecstasy and shock The next word is TULIP
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LA Dick

If only the vic had some bad habits
the whack wouldn't have been so bad,
blonde hair no longer vanilla
but blood cherry in some nocturne alley.

Next word: naugahyde
I love this. I saw a scene from The Sopranos.


A row of tulips sober as judges here
a robin's egg blue and perfectly petal
pink straight I need the profuse green
lush and tangled brush wild flowers, please.

New word: politic
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A row of tulips sober as judges here
a robin's egg blue and perfectly petal
pink straight I need the profuse green
lush and tangled brush wild flowers, please.

New word: politic
2012

In Tampa in August, Charlotte September,
Writhing in the late summer heat,
Gather to feast on our Constitution
Convocations of politic worms.


New word: umber
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In Tampa in August, Charlotte September,
Writhing in the late summer heat,
Gather to feast on our Constitution
Convocations of politic worms.


New word: umber
In the umber glow of the the post-apocalyptic boom/The wind blew in circles, in silence, alone./ For no spirit was left to rise to the glory./ Noone was left to listen to the story...
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In the umber glow of the the post-apocalyptic boom/The wind blew in circles, in silence, alone./ For no spirit was left to rise to the glory./ Noone was left to listen to the story...
:searches: :cries: - new word: disappointment
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In Tampa in August, Charlotte September,
Writhing in the late summer heat,
Gather to feast on our Constitution
Convocations of politic worms.


New word: umber
Deep Inside Micky D's

He feels like umber in Idaho
and smells like a theater lobby clerk,
peeling spuds the size of running shoes
from Monsanto ninety-nine cents.

Next word: cataracts

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new word: disappointment
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Next word: cataracts
....Nervous. ........The diagnosis? Cataracts,
The sock and disappointment of lost vision--
Flowers seen only fogged through dirty glass.
Still, revealed,
................... imagined,
..................................one perfect octagon.






New word: liquid
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Oops! Will go back later and do the others.

Black squirt ink squid
mark me guilty centre id
mass, weight, heavy kid,
drink me (mostly just liquid).

Next word: Skate
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Fueled by a dense heat of inner Most fires/ I skate through this existence on blades of Desire. /Bypassing bystanders standing still in a daze./ Please someone help me find the one with whom I can share this craze. The next word is TALENT
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Then entered Thorign | bearing the chest,
Upon the stark stones | his burden laid.
Wrought iron wielded | old bands breaking,
O'er shattered oak | gold talents spilled.

Next word: ZEPHYR
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Then entered Thorign | bearing the chest,
Upon the stark stones | his burden laid.
Wrought iron wielded | old bands breaking,
O'er shattered oak | gold talents spilled.

Next word: ZEPHYR
The old Zephyr 6 had a bench seat,
perfect for inarticulate teen explorations
I whispered the same yearning into your hair
last night, grey now but still your engine roared.

New word Emerald
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The old Zephyr 6 had a bench seat,
perfect for inarticulate teen explorations
I whispered the same yearning into your hair
last night, grey now but still your engine roared.

New word Emerald
When you speak of her eyes,
do you talk about the emerald sparkle
or the vibrant green? I speak of envy,
wishing she were mine.

New word: inarticulate
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do you talk about the emerald sparkle
or the vibrant green? I speak of envy,
wishing she were mine.

New word: inarticulate
When finally your eyes, wide
And still as an empty pasture, turn
To me, I'm inarticulate as a stump,
Words ground down into sawdust




New word: handrail
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When finally your eyes, wide
And still as an empty pasture, turn
To me, I'm inarticulate as a stump,
Words ground down into sawdust




New word: handrail
They've fixed a handrail now where you fell
but still lost in the memories, I'm swept away
to the days of salty summer skin
kissed to your smile, remembered sun.

New word Notebook
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If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
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