Old 11-16-2012, 01:23 AM   #1
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Nerd wins fuck a pornstar contest. he's get to the house/mansion where camera's are setup. he decides he can't go through with it.

After he leaves the pornstar checkes out his facebook profile and decides he's a really nice guy.

She contacts him and set up a normal date. From there who the fuck knows.
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Old 11-16-2012, 01:39 AM   #2
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Nerd wins fuck a pornstar contest. he's get to the house/mansion where camera's are setup. he decides he can't go through with it.

After he leaves the pornstar checkes out his facebook profile and decides he's a really nice guy.

She contacts him and set up a normal date. From there who the fuck knows.
That's it?
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Old 11-16-2012, 01:43 AM   #3
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Old 11-16-2012, 09:02 AM   #4
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I think its a pretty good idea think about it, after their date there is some sexual tension in the air, they could end up having sex after all.
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Old 11-16-2012, 10:10 AM   #5
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If you guys were to ask me, it actually depends on one's point of view.

But then again, that's just my opinion.
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Old 11-16-2012, 02:00 PM   #6
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I think the story should be from a mans perspective
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Old 11-16-2012, 04:22 PM   #7
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i always write from the mans prospective, a womens would be good though. i someone would assist. This story will be delayed if I even get to it.

He's a advertising consultant, with a grad degree in phycology, whose takeing night classes hoping for a phd. His boss thinks he's after his job.

I was thinking of haveing the pornstar be A.J Bailey because she is smart with a masters degree, and she has real boobs although she is blonde. She's moderatley classy.

I thought about the typical big boobed blonde for a while. What do ya'll think?
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Old 11-16-2012, 04:36 PM   #8
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i think that sounds good but could the guy in the story be very shy and some what in experienced with women? Maybe he has dated some but he has very little sexual experience But Not a virgin.

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Old 11-16-2012, 04:44 PM   #9
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AJ Bailey is 32, but I'm thinking of making the pornstar 25-26 and the guy 26-27.
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Old 11-16-2012, 04:47 PM   #10
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I suggest you stick with A.J. Bailey since she is a little older than the man she has more sexual experience, and she can show him some sexual things that will rock his world and his bed.

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Old 11-16-2012, 04:49 PM   #11
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Give me a little time and i will find a pornstar who fits your age range for the story.
24- 25? Would be better thanks.
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Old 11-16-2012, 04:51 PM   #12
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if 24 to 25 is what you want i will try to find a pornstar for you that fits that range.
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Old 11-16-2012, 05:59 PM   #13
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Nerd wins fuck a pornstar contest. he's get to the house/mansion where camera's are setup. he decides he can't go through with it.

After he leaves the pornstar checkes out his facebook profile and decides he's a really nice guy.

She contacts him and set up a normal date. From there who the fuck knows.
Um, seems a little too pedestrian and maybe too unrealistic.

The woman is a porn star. The usual cliche is that she meets aggressive sex crazed dudes all day long. Probably true. But she also has to know her "following" is comprised of nice guys who beat off to her like shes some goddess or something. Point being, she could have mr nice guy on facebook so damn easily it would turn her off.

Id try something more complex. The guy has a golden ticket to fuck her but DOESNT cash it in. You need to make the mystery around why he doesnt more confusing to her than "hes overwhelmed by her, scared to have sex, anything that puts him in a submissive light"

If he wasnt going to fuck her, why'd he come? Whats a guy like this entering a contest for porn star sex for anyway? And even after she transitions to wanting him for him and not "as part of the job", why does he still decline her offer?

Porn stars have pretty easy access to ultra aggressive super dick kinds of guys and loveable losers. Both are going to seem run of the mill.

This guy needs to be complex because shes a complex woman. The lovable loser gets the girl just by being a good guy is almost overdone at this point.

If you wrote something with a little more depth, giving her a reason to want this mystery guy because he has some quality she hasnt found in the guys she has easy access too (both cocksmen and losers mind you) youd have a category winning winner, no doubt.
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Old 11-16-2012, 06:30 PM   #14
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Um, seems a little too pedestrian and maybe too unrealistic.

The woman is a porn star. The usual cliche is that she meets aggressive sex crazed dudes all day long. Probably true. But she also has to know her "following" is comprised of nice guys who beat off to her like shes some goddess or something. Point being, she could have mr nice guy on facebook so damn easily it would turn her off.

Id try something more complex. The guy has a golden ticket to fuck her but DOESNT cash it in. You need to make the mystery around why he doesnt more confusing to her than "hes overwhelmed by her, scared to have sex, anything that puts him in a submissive light"

If he wasnt going to fuck her, why'd he come? Whats a guy like this entering a contest for porn star sex for anyway? And even after she transitions to wanting him for him and not "as part of the job", why does he still decline her offer?

Porn stars have pretty easy access to ultra aggressive super dick kinds of guys and loveable losers. Both are going to seem run of the mill.

This guy needs to be complex because shes a complex woman. The lovable loser gets the girl just by being a good guy is almost overdone at this point.

If you wrote something with a little more depth, giving her a reason to want this mystery guy because he has some quality she hasnt found in the guys she has easy access too (both cocksmen and losers mind you) youd have a category winning winner, no doubt.
I was'nt going to have him resist her adavances in private. YOUR WHOLE THING IS SO AWESOME.
What do you think of keeping the inteligent pornstar concept? FURTHER HELP FROM YOU CREATING THE COMPLEXITY WOULD BE AWESOME!
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I was'nt going to have him resist her adavances in private. YOUR WHOLE THING IS SO AWESOME.
What do you think of keeping the inteligent pornstar concept? FURTHER HELP FROM YOU CREATING THE COMPLEXITY WOULD BE AWESOME!
Id still have him resist her even IN private. If he jumps her once the cameras are off or whatever, then shes got him instantly figured out (he wants the pussy just none of the responsibility that comes with it (i.e. fucking a porn star) Shed probably hate his ass even more than if he had just fucked her on camera (cause in her mind, thats just "work sex." does it every day)

I could help you with the complexity but you really need to come up with it yourself as you have to write the whole story around it. Its not just a plug in a good idea and the rest works itself out.

Plus youll be far more motivated to write it if YOU are the driving force.

All you have to do to find your hook is ask yourself

"What is in it for her?"

With the sex date shes getting publicity, paid, more fans/exposure whatever. He shuts that down. So now shes free to chose sex with him or not. But then, hes free to chose sex with her ... or not. What a mind fuck it must be for her to be so desired by millions of fans yet not be able to get the one guy she wants.

Give her a good and unique reason for wanting him (nice guy is overdone and she gets those thrown at her constantly) and him a logical reason for holding out. Then you write around that.

Just think about the scenario for a bit and it will come to you. If you think about them as real people, ideas come as if they were real people and you tend to write them as real people. And readers LOVE real people.

You dont have to make her a genius or business tycoon or anything (unless thats what makes the guy want her) Just make sure you dont paint her as a typical porn star (give her goals, meaning, maybe even a plan AFTER porn) and you ll be fine.
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Id try something more complex. The guy has a golden ticket to fuck her but DOESNT cash it in. You need to make the mystery around why he doesnt more confusing to her than "hes overwhelmed by her, scared to have sex, anything that puts him in a submissive light"
I like this, its interesting.

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If he wasn't going to fuck her, why'd he come? Whats a guy like this entering a contest for porn star sex for anyway? And even after she transitions to wanting him for him and not "as part of the job", why does he still decline her offer?
People enter contests all the time, and they don't necessarily think that they'll win anything. Maybe that's the case here. Also, maybe he thinks that since she fcks big c*cks all day long that she'll be disappointed at his size.

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This guy needs to be complex because shes a complex woman. The lovable loser gets the girl just by being a good guy is almost overdone at this point. If you wrote something with a little more depth, giving her a reason to want this mystery guy because he has some quality she hasnt found in the guys she has easy access too (both cocksmen and losers mind you) youd have a category winning winner, no doubt.
Now you're making it difficult. Maybe they shared similar backgrounds, and more importantly, he doesn't judge her as a person simply because of the job she does.
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People enter contests all the time, and they don't necessarily think that they'll win anything. Maybe that's the case here. Also, maybe he thinks that since she fcks big c*cks all day long that she'll be disappointed at his size.



Now you're making it difficult. Maybe they shared similar backgrounds, and more importantly, he doesn't judge her as a person simply because of the job she does.
I like the golden ticket idea.

Big cock thing hell no. That is not complex. That is not realistic it has to be deeper than i hav a skinny cock that's fucking pathetic. It has to be something like his wife just died from a terror attack or something deep.

I like the idea of him looking at her as a human. She could a have a undergrad in pshyc where he went all the way to grad school for his where she went a different. route. Probably they went to the same college probably not.
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From the title, I figured this would be about a typical nerd (thick glasses, kinda scrawny looking, reads a lot and plays World of Warcraft or what not) by day who lives a secret life making money as a porn stud (limitless endurance, appropriate endowment for that line of work, lean muscled build underneath his Star Wars t-shirts), etc.

Actually, now I have a random idea where ALL of the porn stars he works with are basically huge typical nerds off-the-clock, unbeknowest to the jocks and popular kids. *shrug*
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From the title, I figured this would be about a typical nerd (thick glasses, kinda scrawny looking, reads a lot and plays World of Warcraft or what not) by day who lives a secret life making money as a porn stud (limitless endurance, appropriate endowment for that line of work, lean muscled build underneath his Star Wars t-shirts), etc.

Actually, now I have a random idea where ALL of the porn stars he works with are basically huge typical nerds off-the-clock, unbeknowest to the jocks and popular kids. *shrug*
I think it's going to be a average guy now. Mr. do good.
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People enter contests all the time, and they don't necessarily think that they'll win anything. Maybe that's the case here. Also, maybe he thinks that since she fcks big c*cks all day long that she'll be disappointed at his size.
Re: Contest. Yes, people enter normal contest all the time. Do people enter "fuck a porn star" contest so commonly though? Are there that many?!!! Pepsi is not going to sponsor a fuck a porn actress game and I doubt McDs is going to be adding it to their Monopoly game. Wouldnt you see this as something someone doesnt just accidentally sign up for? Its a little more deliberate than you want to seem to give it credit.

Um, he knew she "fucked big dicks all day long" BEFORE he went to meet her. And his dick certainly didnt change size between the in front of the cameras meeting and the behind closed doors hangout (its still capable of exactly what it was before) So if dick size is his issue, why show up at a PORN SHOOT at all? Theres some logic missing.

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Now you're making it difficult. Maybe they shared similar backgrounds, and more importantly, he doesn't judge her as a person simply because of the job she does.
You oversimplify. I think its pretty common knowledge porn stars have fanbases and followings these days. If Honeybooboo has a twitter feed, surely a woman whos livelyhood is dependent on her selling high volumes of her films would.
Shes got a following. Its full of nice guys who "dont judge her" (and Ill even go so far as to say porn stars arent judged as much as you think they are these days. And certainly not behind closed doors.) That is as usual as a cup of coffee for her. You are going to have to work harder to sell a connection than "we went to the same school' or "he doesnt mind I do porn" if you want any sort of realism.
You can certainly write it as everyone else does, fantasy city. Thats pretty dull though and wont really be any different than most of whats already out there.

Again you'll say Im "making things difficult" Im sure. If someones going to write it shouldnt it be written well? Isnt a thing worth doing worth doing well or is that gauche these days?
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