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Old 01-07-2012, 12:27 PM   #1
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Writers of Oedipal mother/son sex stories

My favorite stories involve mother/son sex. This is a popular topic. But not always done well. I hate the cliche about the 45 year old mother who looks 25 years old. The big thrill for me in fantasizing about boinking mom is that she is indeed an attractive, but mature woman who definatejy looks momish. If she has bifocals/reading glasses, a practical hairstyle and some strands of gray in her hair, so much the better. An outwardly prim and proper, respectable middle class suburban mom really turns my Oedipal crank!
I really look forward to stories by Ahabscribe. He indulges in mystical ruminations on occasion and not all his ideas succeed. But he is always poking at new ideas. That is a good thing. I like his moms for being buxom and voluptuous.
I enjoy Barondesade because he really gets into the feel of a son's cock plowing his mother's cunt. His copulation descriptions goes a long way toward the fantasy that sex with mom is the greatest sexual experience possible. Sometimes the characters can have a trashy feel that I am not overly crazy about.
Alwayswantedto is another prolific writer of quality. I am not into the leg fetish. But I wish he would finish The Rambler series because I want to know how those boys all managed to seduce their moms. He likes multiple mother/son sex couples in his stories and I appreciate that. The idea of an Oedipal sex underground is terrific.
I wish klrxo would write more stuff just because I love the cavalier attitude of his moms. Bouncing on their sons' cocks comes easy for them.
If you have favorite Oedipal sex stories, do tell! Who are your favorite writers and why? I think I got a pretty good familiarity with writers of these stories on literotica. But you never know! I might have missed a genius of Oedipal lust or there may be a new rising star that I should know about.
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Old 01-07-2012, 03:23 PM   #2
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You could check mine out and see what you think.

My story link is in my signature.

Weekends with Laura is a mother/son even though the title does not sound like it. It was the first one I wrote.

The other three are obvious At the feet of my mother, mother of my dreams and my latest Mom's Christmas tradition. I enjoy a long build up and try to deliver.

Let me know what you think if you read them
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Old 01-09-2012, 05:13 PM   #3
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Zeal for Oedipal lust!

I like the zeal of your moms, lovecraft68. There is no doubt they want to bounce on their sons' cocks. Keep up the maternal enthusiasm in your Oedipal stories and let's see some more work in that regard. I am okay with your drawn out plotting style. I'll be glad to read your future stories.
Can anyone else write about their favorite writers of mother/son sex stories? What turns your crank in these stories? What are key elements in a good mother/son fuck tale as far as you are concerned.
I always appreciate a good kitchen scene where the son comes upon his mother from behind at the sink and cups her tits while pressing his erection into her rear end. It never gets old for me. In the tone of the overall story, I like the lust to take precedence over mushy romance.
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Old 01-12-2012, 06:07 AM   #4
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You might just want to have a quick look at my two series, "My Mother, My Lover", although mum is probably too young and elegant to tick the boxes. The other is "Degradation and Redemption" but you'll find this under Non-Consent, and anyway, it starts with grandmother - again, elegant. I'll tell you two other authors who also write very well, Moondrift and silkstockingslover. Both worth a read.
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Old 01-12-2012, 01:19 PM   #5
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You might just want to have a quick look at my two series, "My Mother, My Lover", although mum is probably too young and elegant to tick the boxes. The other is "Degradation and Redemption" but you'll find this under Non-Consent, and anyway, it starts with grandmother - again, elegant. I'll tell you two other authors who also write very well, Moondrift and silkstockingslover. Both worth a read.
I second on Silkstockinglover. Moondrift I have not read but will now have to check out.
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Old 02-13-2012, 07:31 PM   #6
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First I will list a few of my pet peeves with the oedipal stories. Number 1 on that list is the 35/36 year old mother. It is almost like the writer feels that the situation is not plausible unless the mother appears to be close in age to the son. I thought one of the major turn-ons is the intergenerational aspects of the relationship. In the USA the prime childbearing age for women is the ages of 25 to 35. But you see very few oedipal stories where there is a more common age gap. Number 2 pet peeve is that in too many of the stories the mother/son relationship appears to be incidental. It is just a description of two people having sex who just happen to be mother and son. There should be more focus on the relationship itself. How do these people get to this point? It is not a common occurence. Number 3 on my list of peeves is that the writers make no attempt at defamiliarization. It is rare to find a story that stands out.

Aside from the most popular writers in this genre, I have found a few hidden gems here.

chefgiovanni has submitted two multi-part stories in the past two years. The women featured are older, in their sixties. One is a mother/son story. The other is a grandmother/son story. What I like about these stories is the long build up.

wannabemommysboy submitted a two part story called Mom's Visit back in 2008. Perhaps he has submitted others under a different name. This story features a fifty something, full figured mother who visits her newly divorced son. The son's ex-wife did not allow him to communicate with his mother during the marriage, so this is their first time together in almost a decade. There is a long build up and some breast feeding. Again, this is not your typical 35 year old fashion model mom with 36DD's who catches her son masturbating with her panties on his 18th birthday and decides immediately to perform oral sex on him.

PANTY_FAN is a writer with a panty fetish who goes beyond the typical cliched "getting caught masturbating while wearing mom's panties" scenario. His stories have a medium to fast buildup but they are plausible. My two favorites of his, "Enjoying My Grandma" and "Mistletoe and Mom", are stories where the panty fetish is secondary. Actually, "Mistletoe and Mom" is one of the best "Son is mom's date for the Christmas party" stories on the whole site.

slimv combines a smoking fetish with an oedipal relationship in "Mom: A Smoky Love Story". This is a realistic story. The son may be a bit too earnest here, but what I like is that the story focuses on the relationship itself.
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mom's age

The mother's age thing is actually because of another reason. The desire for mother happens more in the developing age of boys than after twenties. The actual thing that happens for most male authors is during the time when their mother is in late 30s.

Another explanation for the over reliance on younger mother comes because many people find it tough to write about sagging breasts. I dont remember reading any good story in which the physical attributes of an older woman, and the fascination has been dealt with.

The art of writing one is tougher. You can check the mature section to understand what I am saying. There has been a wide divide on the sexual perception/expectation of readers/writers and reality. Many people want to be with woman whose body is young, but other aspects old. But when it comes to 50+ moms, they try to conjure up that the women looks 30+ instead of 50+, either using some medical technique or portraying as if the aspect is irrelevant. The notion of younger looking mom is plausible, but rarely explored. I personally know a lot of 50+ women who look stunning.

It will be nice if authors can post some stuff on getting older woman sexy, yet believable.
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The mother's age thing is actually because of another reason. The desire for mother happens more in the developing age of boys than after twenties. The actual thing that happens for most male authors is during the time when their mother is in late 30s.

Another explanation for the over reliance on younger mother comes because many people find it tough to write about sagging breasts. I dont remember reading any good story in which the physical attributes of an older woman, and the fascination has been dealt with.

The art of writing one is tougher. You can check the mature section to understand what I am saying. There has been a wide divide on the sexual perception/expectation of readers/writers and reality. Many people want to be with woman whose body is young, but other aspects old. But when it comes to 50+ moms, they try to conjure up that the women looks 30+ instead of 50+, either using some medical technique or portraying as if the aspect is irrelevant. The notion of younger looking mom is plausible, but rarely explored. I personally know a lot of 50+ women who look stunning.

It will be nice if authors can post some stuff on getting older woman sexy, yet believable.

This is a fine line. Yes in reality mothers are older. Hoever when it comes to sex the oedipal fantsy now becomes merged with "cougar and Milf" fantasy where every mom is 45-50, but is aging like Madonna.

I am guilty of this as well. I have 4 mother son stories and in each one has kept the mother fairly young as in very early forties and they are all very attractive.

However in this day and age many women are still quite sexy in their forties and I don't think it is that much of a stretch. 50's however definitely .

This reminds me of a thread where people wee discussing BBW fetishes and why aren't there many stories. Simply put how could you in words describe a very over weight woman as attractive? Its not to say that they are not, but how would you get it across?

this is why erotica is fantasy.
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Old 02-18-2012, 09:15 AM   #9
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The mother's age thing is actually because of another reason. The desire for mother happens more in the developing age of boys than after twenties. The actual thing that happens for most male authors is during the time when their mother is in late 30s.
Very good point...at which the boy is still too young to be written about here.

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Another explanation for the over reliance on younger mother comes because many people find it tough to write about sagging breasts. I dont remember reading any good story in which the physical attributes of an older woman, and the fascination has been dealt with.
Wellllll....actually I remember reading a few (they were in the Non-Consent area, and it always fascinated me when the woman would be older, so I'd always read it through to the end. ) where, mostly, it was the writer's enthusiasm and appreciation that came through, and therefore in my mind, "Very well, the protagonist likes what he sees; that's good enough for me."

Are the sagging breasts what I look for? No, but as part of a well-constructed story, it worked just fine and I had no complaint.

And before you bust a gasket, Mr. Lovecraft, I'm thinking of one particular scenario I enjoyed with an older woman that went like this:

Oedpial/Mature lust young man is more a Peeping Tom for a while, eventually (and believably) convinces himself that all he wants to do is look in her panty drawer. So he breaks and enters.

She discovers him, he's terrified, runs after her when she goes for the phone, they have a scuffle/tuffle in which he tries to say he doesn't want to hurt her but PLEASE don't call the police! Of course he has his hands on her and slowly realizes its warm and much better than the panty drawer...

Meanwhile, she recognizes him, loses much of her fear, and eventually invites him to "go further." He almost can't believe his ears (a trick?) but gingerly moves forward, leading to full sex. It was consensual at that point, and hey, the lead-up was awesome and all the "reluctance" I needed to call it a force fantasy.

Alas, that I can't remember the title; it was a few years ago. Oh well.

I also remember a "rape in the park" story with an older woman by a younger man that also had the enthusiasm/appreciation thing going for it. In this case, it was sort of the "classic" fantasy, "I'm so bloody turned on by you I can't control myself! Oh my god, you're perfect, yes even with the drooping breasts and plush bottom!" The author may have been a woman...but then again, the perception was from the man's point of view, and it was pretty convincing...hmmmm.

The key, though, is "well-written with enthusiasm and appreciation". Convince the (open) reader that this is what the protagonist wants, and some of us will just say, "Okay. Lead on."
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Very good point...at which the boy is still too young to be written about here.


Wellllll....actually I remember reading a few (they were in the Non-Consent area, and it always fascinated me when the woman would be older, so I'd always read it through to the end. ) where, mostly, it was the writer's enthusiasm and appreciation that came through, and therefore in my mind, "Very well, the protagonist likes what he sees; that's good enough for me."

Are the sagging breasts what I look for? No, but as part of a well-constructed story, it worked just fine and I had no complaint.

And before you bust a gasket, Mr. Lovecraft, I'm thinking of one particular scenario I enjoyed with an older woman that went like this:

Oedpial/Mature lust young man is more a Peeping Tom for a while, eventually (and believably) convinces himself that all he wants to do is look in her panty drawer. So he breaks and enters.

She discovers him, he's terrified, runs after her when she goes for the phone, they have a scuffle/tuffle in which he tries to say he doesn't want to hurt her but PLEASE don't call the police! Of course he has his hands on her and slowly realizes its warm and much better than the panty drawer...

Meanwhile, she recognizes him, loses much of her fear, and eventually invites him to "go further." He almost can't believe his ears (a trick?) but gingerly moves forward, leading to full sex. It was consensual at that point, and hey, the lead-up was awesome and all the "reluctance" I needed to call it a force fantasy.

Alas, that I can't remember the title; it was a few years ago. Oh well.

I also remember a "rape in the park" story with an older woman by a younger man that also had the enthusiasm/appreciation thing going for it. In this case, it was sort of the "classic" fantasy, "I'm so bloody turned on by you I can't control myself! Oh my god, you're perfect, yes even with the drooping breasts and plush bottom!" The author may have been a woman...but then again, the perception was from the man's point of view, and it was pretty convincing...hmmmm.

The key, though, is "well-written with enthusiasm and appreciation". Convince the (open) reader that this is what the protagonist wants, and some of us will just say, "Okay. Lead on."
I will not blow a gasket my dear, because what you just described is "reluctance" there came a point during each scenario where the woman began to enjoy herself.

Also the male had no desire to really hurt the woman he wanted to enjoy her and hopefully her come to enjoy him.

Neither instance there is a true "rape" story. True rape stories are where the woman at no time enjoys it and are usually peppered with great touches like her begging and screaming.

The other instance is the absolutely hilarious and fun sexual trafficking stories where women are hooked on drugs and forced intro sex repeatedly. Those are rape stories and the ones that this site allegedly does not allow. Yeah right.

Bottom line is at various times over the last few years we have been a temporary home for some abused teens. So you know what? for those who make fun of my stance, you see one of these girls, you see how scared they are and you hear them wake up screaming from nightmares.

Then people can tell me how much fun these stories are, how harmless they are.

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I will not blow a gasket my dear, because what you just described is "reluctance" there came a point during each scenario where the woman began to enjoy herself.

Also the male had no desire to really hurt the woman he wanted to enjoy her and hopefully her come to enjoy him.

Neither instance there is a true "rape" story.
I'm pleased to see you can at least see a few nuances of the category.

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The other instance is the absolutely hilarious and fun sexual trafficking stories where women are hooked on drugs and forced intro sex repeatedly. Those are rape stories and the ones that this site allegedly does not allow. Yeah right.
? Where does it say it doesn't? Always missed that, and yes, I've run into plenty of those. Don't really turn my crank typically because the writing is on the poor side.

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Exactly as harmless and as much fun as stories about incest and infidelity, songs about cop killing, movies about war and torture, books about murder, and comics about all of the above.


EDIT: Although to continue contributing to the original topic rather than hijack it...I really do like the couple of gems I run into that describe a mature woman as she may actually look, not like a surgery-stuffed-and-pulled doll. It has an honesty to it that I find very enjoyable.
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I'm pleased to see you can at least see a few nuances of the category.


? Where does it say it doesn't? Always missed that, and yes, I've run into plenty of those. Don't really turn my crank typically because the writing is on the poor side.


Exactly as harmless and as much fun as stories about incest and infidelity, songs about cop killing, movies about war and torture, books about murder, and comics about all of the above.


EDIT: Although to continue contributing to the original topic rather than hijack it...I really do like the couple of gems I run into that describe a mature woman as she may actually look, not like a surgery-stuffed-and-pulled doll. It has an honesty to it that I find very enjoyable.
I'm glad you mentioned the "rape rule" here is a link that can be found through the "my story was rejected" part of the FAQ

http://forum.literotica.com/showthre...hreadid=175666

The last item asks if there was excessive violence. They say they allow a certain amount of violence between characters however do not allow violent non consensual encounters between strangers. I.E. Rape.

Now I quoted this once and a bunch of the usual dweebs said that it was not "official" Killer Muffin is just an author here as we are.

However the thread to that link was put there by the site meaning they endorse what it says.

Flat out rape stories and sexual trafficking or anything that deals with women(or men for that matter) having sex forced upon them violates this rule.

Yeah okay

As for your reamrk about stories about... are the same. No they are not.

Incest (over 18 consensual variety allowed on this site) BDSM, Group, any fetish, GM or anything else does not promote a crime. Incest is borderline, but between over 18 and consensual is pretty hard to enforce, but I don;t want to argue legal issues. Rape is a crime pure and simple.

Rape in erotic stories is more dangerous than those in mainstream fiction. In Mainstream a rape is used as a plot device. to set up a revenge explain why a girl maybe traumatized, or how sick a person is. It is a means to further a story. same reason under age sex in fiction is allowed it is not the "heart" of a story just something that is part of the plot.

a rape erotica story is written for the sole purpose of glorifying the act of rape. There is only one reason to read it, because you enjoy women getting raped. That is the difference.

And one more thing, because I am tired of incest always ranking up there with rape.

here is a question for you.

when a serial rapist/rapist is caught what type of porn is on his pc? rape of course, rape videos, stories, magazines all revolving around rape.

when a pedophile is caught what type of porn is on his pc? incest of.....

No wait a minute, what is on that sicko's pc is KIDDIE porn. Not incest.

Incest and pedophilia are vastly different. In the case of a father molesting his daughter he is not abusing her because he wants to commit incest he is doing it because he has a sick desire to have sex with young children and his own is the one he has access to, and most likely can scare into not saying anything.

fantasy incest and rape stories are quite different.

the tune will change when the FBI decides its time to start stalking sites like lit to find rapists the way they ghost sites that allow under age sex to find pedo's. then they will start pretending they have a rule in place and all the authors must just be ignoring them.
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I'm genuinely sorry I asked, Mr. Lovecraft, but only in that I enabled you to hijack another thread. I still love the well-written rape stories.

My sincere apologies to BarbarasSon, though. I thought Cockput and BonnevilleFlats had good thoughts on the original topic and I enjoyed reading them; perhaps if I leave, you can continue on a good discussion that actually has "back and forth, give and take" in it.

I'll be on my merry way. Cheers, Oedipal Sons of Yore.
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I'm genuinely sorry I asked, Mr. Lovecraft, but only in that I enabled you to hijack another thread. I still love the well-written rape stories.

My sincere apologies to BarbarasSon, though. I thought Cockput and BonnevilleFlats had good thoughts on the original topic and I enjoyed reading them; perhaps if I leave, you can continue on a good discussion that actually has "back and forth, give and take" in it.

I'll be on my merry way. Cheers, Oedipal Sons of Yore.
Well said and thank you. It's difficult to pinpoint exactly when this discussion went astray of the original topic, but it clearly has. Not surprisingly, this usually serves to kill the thread, but if anyone, and I do mean anyone, desires to return to the original topic, please feel free.
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Wellllll....actually I remember reading a few (they were in the Non-Consent area, and it always fascinated me when the woman would be older, so I'd always read it through to the end. ) where, mostly, it was the writer's enthusiasm and appreciation that came through, and therefore in my mind, "Very well, the protagonist likes what he sees; that's good enough for me."
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My sincere apologies to BarbarasSon, though. I thought Cocput and BonnevilleFlats had good thoughts on the original topic and I enjoyed reading them; perhaps if I leave, you can continue on a good discussion that actually has "back and forth, give and take" in it.
Etaski: Your thoughts are welcome. They had added other dimensions to the discussion. If you could give more pointers to similar type of stories, it will be nice to add to the list of authors dealing with good oedipal works.


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Simply put how could you in words describe a very over weight woman as attractive? Its not to say that they are not, but how would you get it across?
I think that is what the original peeving was all about.
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Are the sagging breasts what I look for? No, but as part of a well-constructed story, it worked just fine and I had no complaint.
I have read a few well written stories, but they were in my native tongue. I still remember one story where the son is in active awe of the fact that the breasts were saggy. The flowing language did a wonderful trick, but if i transliterate to english, it would look like a cowshed with 100 cows that nobody bothered to clean from the time of xyz. (I added the last phrase to give you a feel of what the transliterated work will look like.)
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I am guilty of this as well. I have 4 mother son stories and in each one has kept the mother fairly young as in very early forties and they are all very attractive.
However in this day and age many women are still quite sexy in their forties and I don't think it is that much of a stretch. 50's however definitely .
Have always loved your work. The only reason why the so-called mom-son stories look good is because we as readers assume that the woman is special or she had done something medically.


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The key, though, is "well-written with enthusiasm and appreciation". Convince the (open) reader that this is what the protagonist wants, and some of us will just say, "Okay. Lead on."
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This is a fine line. Yes in reality mothers are older. Hoever when it comes to sex the oedipal fantsy now becomes merged with "cougar and Milf" fantasy where every mom is 45-50, but is aging like Madonna.
well said.

Can people contribute with author list and sub-classify a bit more?

I mean can we have a list of writers who write mom-son stories as
a) romance
b) circumstantial
c) public sex (sex in public place)
d) one-off events
e) nonconsent
f) fetish

Most of the authors in list concentrate on romance, or circumstantial work. I have read one good one-off story, but i was unable to mark it.


the current list (I have taken all names in the list and sorted them alphabetically. my contribution is at the end):
Ahabscribe
alwayswantedto
Barondesade
bumblegrum
chefgiovanni
lovecraft68
Moondrift
PANTY_FAN
silkstockingslover
slimv
wannabemommysboy
L.A.Wicker

There are a few authors who had done good.
There are good vehicle sex stories by
NakdSalr, alwayswantedto, retired04

NadSalr is not added to the list since the author has posted only 10 stories, and the latest one was in 2005.

The problem with the sub-category is that only a few authors mostly stick to it , like the barondesade, alwayswantedto, ahabscribe.
Many of the authors have written very good works, but they had not been focusing on this one particular sub-genre alone. Classic example is lovecraft68. he does a few good pieces with mom/son, then he shifts to bro-sis and then meanders away to other categories.
I dont want to blame the authors. After all, creativity is nothing but an escape from mental stagnation.


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Alas, that I can't remember the title; it was a few years ago. Oh well.

I also remember a "rape in the park" story with an older woman by a younger man that also had the enthusiasm/appreciation thing going for it. ... and it was pretty convincing....
If anyone can give me a list of stories that map near to it, i think i will give a shot at writing one, of course without rape.

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One rule when writing erotica is, "If the author is not turned on by the story no one else will be either." If the author genuinely finds mature or plus size women to be sexy he or she will successfully convey that to the reader, especially if the reader shares the preference. But if the author is not turned on by the character he or she is depicting most readers will not be turned on either. So, a good Oedipal story where the mother is in her fifties or sixties requires an author who finds mature women attractive. However, if most readers' Oedipal fantasies involve a late adolescent son and a thirty-something Mom then stories with older characters will only capture a niche readership on erotica regardless of how well they are written.

I have several preferences in an Oedipal story. First, the characters have to be developed enough that the situation where the mother and son have a sexual relationship is plausible. The most common way to do this is the absent father, either through death, divorce or abandonment, is a non-factor and the son becomes his mother's husband. But if an author can construct another type of plausible scenario involving well developed characters the story will stand out from the pack. However, if the characters are mere sketches and hardly developed at all the scenario will be preposturous.

The second preference I have is that the situation unfold without the characters realizing where things are leading. If find these stories erotic because of the accidental nature of the relationship. Two people who are prohibited by the taboos of every social order on the planet find themselves in a situation where they are drawn towards each other, both physically and emotionally. I tend to stop reading the moment I realize that the relationship is "premeditated" by one or both parties. There are, however, exceptions to this. ChefGiovanni's stories are premeditated situations that I find highly erotic.

The third preference I have is that the emotional connection between the two is apparent. This is a psychologically complex situation between two people who are mother and son. It is not something that typically happens. It takes more than big boobs, a big dick and mutual horniness for the relationship to become sexual.

I have never had fantasies or desires involving my own mother. I was in my twenties when a read my first Oedipal story in Penthouse's Forum magazine. It was a slow seduction story involving a soldier who returned home from the war after his father died. I found the mother's seduction and the son's initial resistance and ultimate surrender to be highly erotic. However, I am very picky when it comes to these stories.
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Old 02-25-2012, 02:43 PM   #17
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... a good Oedipal story where the mother is in her fifties or sixties requires an author who finds mature women attractive. However, if most readers' Oedipal fantasies involve a late adolescent son and a thirty-something Mom then stories with older characters will only capture a niche readership on erotica regardless of how well they are written.
I won't argue that the author needs to find mature woman attractive, but to force an author specifically crave for 50+ women is not mandatory.
The main drive for Oedipal fantasies, IMHO, is the typical taboo nature of the sub-genre. cousin-cousin and uncle-niece don't become exclusively taboo in many societies. But every society I know considers mother-son relationship taboo. If an author takes care of your second and third preferences, then the story will be well received, no matter what the age is.

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I have never had fantasies or desires involving my own mother. .... However, I am very picky when it comes to these stories.
many of us don't. But the kick of seeing somebody else being with their parent or child is very much there in many of us. Anything forbidden is attractive. For most of us, our moral compass is in the correct direction, so we won't do it in our real life.
I don't believe that any of the great authors who have written in this sub-genre necessarily have actual experience or fantasies about their own moms. (Exceptions don't define the rule.)
Oedipal story is attractive to the author mostly because of the extra challenges attached to this class.
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Old 02-29-2012, 12:29 PM   #18
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There are many mother/son stories and I have read many of them over the last years.
In many of the M/S stories at the moment there is much sex and nothing more, as I think others have already mentioned here.
I'm also tired of reading about 35 year old moms with big breasts, the physique of 20 year old girls who falls instantly for her sons with their supersize cocks
The two words "mother" and"son" can be exchanged for normal persons without damaging a lot of that stories too much, sadly.
Don't get me wrong, the sex is a very addictive element of these stories, but there is a lot more potential for real tragedy and erotic drama in that theme.
In the near future I hope to finish my own first M/s story "The Mill" which is set in the middle ages and I hope to accomplish a very dark, but also erotic and dramatic feeling in it. Not only hard sex, but also sadness and tragedy will be a part of it and I hope the story will benefit from that in the end.

But, I also have a few favourite authors here on literotica, who managed M/S stories very well: Here are a few:

"A matter of trust" - by AngeloMichael
It was planned as a trilogy, but sadly the author didn't write the third part. The M/S relationship in there is very well described and the sex is embedded in a nice and exciting story

"An accident, the internet, a hotel" - by jtmalone
One of the best stories in my collection. A very cool beginning, terrific sex scenes and the feelings of the protagonists are very well recorded.

"The Sea Cruise" - by PhoenixKiwi
A mother and son on a sea cruise - interesting idea, and it worked good.
PhoenixKiwi is one of my favourite authors, but he has only posted a few stories here on literotica and all of them back in 2002. On the web you can find his other M/S stories, if you search a little bit. They belong to the best, I have ever read.

"Just after midnight" - by dirtymindedmother
A short one, but a good one. The mother is not the usual buxom woman, and her feelings are very intensively described. The sex scene itself is fantastic and I wish the author had made a longer story out of it.

"Retribution" - by Ahabscribe
Ahabscribe, as other have already mentioned is a fantastic author of M/S stories. "Retribution" is only one of them, and maybe not his best, but the theme in it is a little dark and i liked it very much.

These are only some story examples, which come to my mind at the moment. There are a lot more to find here, from "alwayswantedto", "BarondeSade", "jgjohn", "klrxo" and others.

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Old 02-29-2012, 12:51 PM   #19
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the jtmalone work is something I have read. A very good one, though I forgot to fav the story. The author's unwillingness to ruin husband/wife relationship, while still being able to handle the mother/son relation is commendable. I especially liked the way he used sleeping problem of mother to start things.

The sea cruise is interesting work. I voted 5.

Ahabscribe is already on the list. One of the best IMHO.

The rest I am yet to read. But, thanks for the list.
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Authors, situations and scenes

I am really fascinated by the idea of a son, his girlfriend or wife and mom making whoopee together. I have long thought it would be an interesting story series if someone wrote of a son auditioning girlfriends who would accept a ménage a trois arrangement with mom. If you know the Golden Age porn actress Colleen Brennan, she is often my model mom for this arrangement. I just have the most fuckliscious picture in my head of her coming on to my girlfriend, much to my girlfriend's astonishment, confusion and eventual acceptance. It brings a whole new perspective to bringing your girl home to meet mom. It winds up with mom going down on your girlfriend while you fuck your mom doggy style.
I have read no better mother/son/wife threesome story that Ahabscribe's Mistletoe Trigger.
In a different vein, for those who like lesbian incest, Ignoble is a rising writer who has a good handle on the fantasy. I enjoy the sapphic frolics in his Taylor Family and Ferraro Family stories and eagerly await new installments.
I have liked Pelios as a leader in mother/daughter incest stories as well. I like how the characters just want to have sex with each other in a matter of fact manner. I regret Pelios has been inactive for sometime now.
Writerotica has been dormant also for a while. He is trying to get personal matters together. After all, as hard as it is to believe, our favorite writers have more to do than write smutty stories for strangers! But I like his sense of June Cleaver moms who engage in incestuous sex. And I am ever patiently waiting to read whether mother Beth and daughter Lynn ever get down to it with each other in his Spring Break series.
I do enjoy lavish make out sessions between mother and son or mother and daughter. They begin innocent enough. Maybe mom complains that her offspring isn't affectionate enough. Before you can say "Calling Doctor Freud," there is French kissing and feeling up going on. What fun when another relative enters the room to find mother and son or daughter strangely disheveled in appearance. I get a kick out of clueless relatives who can't figure out what is going on under their very noses.
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Old 03-20-2012, 06:49 PM   #21
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Wink My personal favorite Mom/Son Stories.

I'm not new to Literotica but am new to this discussion board. I've read many, many Mom/Son Incest stories as they bring my blood to a ROLLING BOIL. My favorite of all and for some reason is never mentioned is Dylan and his Mother. It contains everything that excites me. A mother who hears her son masturbating and calling her name when he ejaculates, she then decides that she must watch him masturbate. They begin an ongoing mutual masturbation relationship that has her take matters into her own hands and masturbates her son every night and at times when he get's home from school. She finally catches her husband with his secretary and that leaves Dylan and his Mother all alone to progress into a full blown (no pun intended) incestuous relationship. Dylan gets a slow, sloppy blowjob from his mom and they begin intercourse as well.
I've read it over and over again and it never fails me.
Are there other stories that follow this type of storyline.?
One that includes a Mother who enjoys watching her Son masturbate for her.?
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Old 03-20-2012, 07:37 PM   #22
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In a previous life I wrote some mom/son stories on here, two different series; the stories got great scores but I got sort of fatigued and never finished either series. The thing that always turns me on as both a reader and writer of this genre was the reluctance of the participants: the desires matched against the taboo of it. That struggle makes it all the more rewarding when the taboo wins out. Where, exactly, is that breaking point? How long do the desires need to build up before they act on it? I tended to focus on (and read stories about) the mother's perspective, because that's where the tension is strongest.
Details like what, exactly, the mothers look like are less important considerations for me, except for how it shapes the characters. Some older women are going to be extremely confident about their mature body, others are going to be very vulnerable. There needs to be a connection between the physical descriptions and the attitudes of the mothers.
Anyway, thanks for all the author suggestions on here... I'm going to enjoy reading through some of the authors that I haven't heard of before.
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[quote=callmeismael;40320733 The thing that always turns me on as both a reader and writer of this genre was the reluctance of the participants: the desires matched against the taboo of it. That struggle makes it all the more rewarding when the taboo wins out. ..........There needs to be a connection between the physical descriptions and the attitudes of the mothers.
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I don't remember reading many stories with extended emotional struggle.

Can you give an example for stories like this?
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let me know too if you find a story on those lines
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A writer who delivers the goods!

Bob03567 is an excellent writer of Oedipal sex fiction. He knows how to deliver the goods and leave the reader wistfully imaging further exploits. His Getting Mom Interested stories indicated this ability well. For motherfuckers of the imagination, those who are unabashedly motivated by lust, is there anything hotter than a foursome including a lucky son, his mother, his girlfriend, his girlfriend's mother? When an Oedipal fan comes across a high quality series of stories in this vein, it is an occasion to call in to work and take a personal day!*
A special treat is picking names. A girlfriend. named "Becky" always invokes a sweet and innocent girl-next-door. Speaking for myself, I want to read about this girl sitting on her mother's face! I want to read about the son's mother seducing the 18 year girlfriend to discover that sex crazed bitch under the sweet girl-next-door demeanor. And I want read about the girlfriend and both moms accepting the authority of the son's cock.*For an Oedipal minded guy, such a foursome is the last word in complete obscene delight! At least, it is for me.*
These are the thoughts that a good Oedipal fiction writers stirs up in the imaginations of readers. Bob03567 delivers the goods to getting the stirring!
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