Old 04-22-2015, 06:48 AM   #1
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Here is the sort of writing only a homosexual fine arts perfesser will enjoy. I've never seen so many adverbs in one place, and I found myself praying to Jesus for chapters to end. Ross MacDonald is no Chandler on steroids, more like Chandler the 98 pound weakling in a delirious coma using a cheap thesaurus. .
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Old 04-22-2015, 04:34 PM   #2
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Old 04-22-2015, 04:41 PM   #3
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I'm growing annoyed with famous writers who obsess with mundane, common details. In THE DEADLY EDGE by Richard Stark (Donald Westlake), Parker spent 2 chapters making a small hole in a roof, to get inside an auditorium.
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Why I stopped reading James Michener.
I love IBERIA, but that's it.
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Old 04-22-2015, 06:51 PM   #6
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I'm growing annoyed with famous writers who obsess with mundane, common details. In THE DEADLY EDGE by Richard Stark (Donald Westlake), Parker spent 2 chapters making a small hole in a roof, to get inside an auditorium.
For the most part, I agree. It rarely serves the plot, and seems to be there simply to justify the three months 'researching'.
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Old 04-23-2015, 02:41 AM   #7
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For the most part, I agree. It rarely serves the plot, and seems to be there simply to justify the three months 'researching'.
The question I always ask, when I encounter irrelevant digressions, is: So what does it have to do with the price of tea in China? I read it in a book by Lawrence Block last night, a pimp takes Matt Scudder home and gives Matt a tour of the house. I assume the house will become relevant in the future but the tour serves no plot point now.
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