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Old 07-17-2011, 12:56 AM   #1
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Mother with son and his friends

I have read a few stories in which a mother has some fun with her son and his group of friends. I find them to be the best stories out there. (Just my personal opinion. They seem to turn me on the most for some reason.) I figured there are a lot of very talented authors out there that can make more of these stories happen. I just wrote my first story ever trying to use this idea. It hasn't been approved yet but when it does please read and give me thoughts. But i would really love to see some of you authors try something like this. Thank you
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Old 07-17-2011, 01:01 AM   #2
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I know what you mean. And it's hard to pull off without going too far over the top.

I really like this one:

http://www.literotica.com/s/jamies-needs
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Old 07-17-2011, 11:59 AM   #3
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I have read a few stories in which a mother has some fun with her son and his group of friends. I find them to be the best stories out there. (Just my personal opinion. They seem to turn me on the most for some reason.) I figured there are a lot of very talented authors out there that can make more of these stories happen. I just wrote my first story ever trying to use this idea. It hasn't been approved yet but when it does please read and give me thoughts. But i would really love to see some of you authors try something like this. Thank you
These are my one of my favorite type of stories as well.
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Old 07-17-2011, 09:38 PM   #4
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Does anybody have any other suggestions of these type of stories? I kind of prefer the ones that involve 1 son and a good 4 friends. This is by far my favorite story on the site =) http://www.literotica.com/s/mom-entertains-at-sleepover
I would love to see more stuff like this. Its really hard to find though.
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Old 07-18-2011, 04:05 AM   #5
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Might want to look at the usual suspects for this.

thehumpman, spankymcf, George VI, BarondeSade, maybe EnCarta

Generally a big fan of the subject, not so much the mother/son, as much as mother/son's friends or others the sons age.
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Old 07-18-2011, 05:01 AM   #6
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Does anybody have any other suggestions of these type of stories? I kind of prefer the ones that involve 1 son and a good 4 friends. This is by far my favorite story on the site =) http://www.literotica.com/s/mom-entertains-at-sleepover
I would love to see more stuff like this. Its really hard to find though.
The MC area can inspire many good ideas, only they either have control, blackmail, or even a bribe.
Although I love the control aspect, go over to the First Time and Seduction categories to really get your creative juices flowing (no pun intended).
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Old 07-21-2011, 08:05 PM   #7
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Maybe just a tad over the top, but...

[Underage material prohibited per our forum guidelines.]
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Old 07-21-2011, 08:17 PM   #8
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Maybe just a tad over the top, but...

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Are you the author of said story?
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Old 07-21-2011, 08:28 PM   #9
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Are you the author of said story?
Yup...
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Old 07-21-2011, 08:30 PM   #10
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You should resubmit it at Lit then if you wish to advertise it.
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Old 07-27-2011, 02:36 AM   #11
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The best way you can go about this is just do whatever you happen to like. Write that. So long as you manage to write a compelling and complete story (which is something else entirely), you'll be fine.

The premise is the easiest part and the execution is the hardest and if you don't get started, it really is the hardest.

And, going off of what I read here, try to avoid one page stories with five characters. There's got to be a build up to this kind of a thing. How are things supposed to be forbidden or naughty or kinky when everybody falls into debauchery in 800 words. It's lame. At the very least, if you're going to be brief, give the mom and the son a good reason for doing what they end up doing.

Also don't put in a cuckhold husband on a business trip. I am bone tired of reading about how guys who support their family are assholes. It's a pet peeve of mine. Give her a good reason to get into a crazy gangbang and we'll all believe you.

So that's me.
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Old 07-30-2011, 05:45 PM   #12
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I have read a few stories in which a mother has some fun with her son and his group of friends. I find them to be the best stories out there. (Just my personal opinion. They seem to turn me on the most for some reason.) I figured there are a lot of very talented authors out there that can make more of these stories happen. I just wrote my first story ever trying to use this idea. It hasn't been approved yet but when it does please read and give me thoughts. But i would really love to see some of you authors try something like this. Thank you
I wrote one like that a while ago:

http://www.literotica.com/s/sarahs-awakening-1

and I am working on a new idea where the mother ends up stripping for her son and his friends in their basement.
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Old 08-06-2011, 09:52 PM   #13
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You should resubmit it at Lit then if you wish to advertise it.
As soon as Lit permits characters who are 17 years old, I will.
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Old 08-06-2011, 11:07 PM   #14
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Also don't put in a cuckhold husband on a business trip. I am bone tired of reading about how guys who support their family are assholes. It's a pet peeve of mine. Give her a good reason to get into a crazy gangbang and we'll all believe you.

So that's me.
It just so happens a husband ignoring or cheating on his wife is the main reason she goes wild.
A (totally legit) business trip being longer than expected or being snowed in at a ski resort is the lesser of those problems, but you're right, it is cliche and over used.

What if his junker car just got caught in traffic, or maybe he was driving drunk and hit somebody (a car not a person) and had to give the victim some information.
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Old 08-07-2011, 05:35 PM   #15
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My new story just got accepted. It's called 'My Mom The Stripper', and as you might imagine it involves a mom stripping for her son and his friends.

Let me know what you think, I'm always looking for new story ideas.

http://www.literotica.com/s/my-mom-the-stripper
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Old 08-08-2011, 12:48 AM   #16
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As soon as Lit permits characters who are 17 years old, I will.
Or you rewrite your story to abide by this web site's rules. (Otherwise, it's in poor taste to advertise your stories for a different site that does allow adults to fuck minors.)
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Old 08-14-2011, 04:01 AM   #17
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My new story just got accepted. It's called 'My Mom The Stripper', and as you might imagine it involves a mom stripping for her son and his friends.

Let me know what you think, I'm always looking for new story ideas.

http://www.literotica.com/s/my-mom-the-stripper
Alright, but if this kills my boner, I'm going to yell at you.
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Old 08-14-2011, 05:41 AM   #18
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Or you rewrite your story to abide by this web site's rules. (Otherwise, it's in poor taste to advertise your stories for a different site that does allow adults to fuck minors.)
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"A performer, eh? And what is it you plan on performing for a group of eighteen year old kids?"

"Trust me honey, they ain't no kids. They are full grown whether you like it or not."
I had to check.

Why was the link to the Literotica rules deleted?

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Old 08-14-2011, 11:16 AM   #19
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Why was the link to the Literotica rules deleted?
God help me for replying...


What are you talking about? Laurel has never disabled the link to her rules.
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Old 08-14-2011, 02:29 PM   #20
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What are you talking about? Laurel has never disabled the link to her rules.
I think he was confused by the "link disabled" which in the original disabled posting had referred folks to the guidelines...
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I think he was confused by the "link disabled" which in the original disabled posting had referred folks to the guidelines...
http://forum.literotica.com/showpost...96&postcount=8
Yes, that's the one I mean.
A reply to kinkybelle_bi's post.
I didn't get at first that the original post was edited by the moderator, nor did I understand the post.

I do think underage stories not hosted on this site, added as a link instead of text copied to the Lit forums should be ok, but at the same time it's advertising another site.
If linked to the home page instead of a specific story without begging people to come in, I believe it would be alright to add to your signature, but ask the mod before you act.

A good rule of thumb is if it's a link to a porn site, a referral to a group of porn sites, or a picture from or linked to a porn site, don't post it, even if non moderated groups are getting away with it.

To Laurel:

I think people are getting confused because this is a porn site (I know, erotica is here too).
I think your home page should have a special "Lit Unfriendly" section (password upon forum validation with Lit forums password) just for unhosted links like this (story sites must be free).
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Old 08-14-2011, 04:55 PM   #22
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Oh. When I first quoted kinkybelle_bi, I deleted her link from my reply and wrote "link diabled" to still show/offer what I was refering to. After Laurel saw that the link did, indeed, spam her web site and offered a story where an adult fucks a child she completely removed the link and added HER web site rules to the post.
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Oh. When I first quoted kinkybelle_bi, I deleted her link from my reply and wrote "link diabled" to still show/offer what I was refering to. After Laurel saw that the link did, indeed, spam her web site and offered a story where an adult fucks a child she completely removed the link and added HER web site rules to the post.
Oh I see, but my suggestion is still valid.
I was thinking about this (for about a minute) and thought it WAS a really good idea given the correct set of rules (yes it wouldn't just be an anything goes section) which I could help write (in non legalese).

I'm sure the members who have gone to places like this (general forum members) would be happy to lend a hand (no pun intended).
Fetishes would need to be in specific categories, so a quick sweep of the sites would be needed (no pictures on or linked to Literotica).
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Old 08-18-2011, 03:03 PM   #24
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I tend to write about this:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/me...ge=submissions

I'm not as great as the stories listed so far, but I'm open to suggestions if you have anything specific you want me to write.
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Old 08-18-2011, 03:30 PM   #25
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I tend to write about this:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/me...ge=submissions

I'm not as great as the stories listed so far, but I'm open to suggestions if you have anything specific you want me to write.
how did a couple of your scores sneak up over 4? The trolls not awake?

jk- I will read some of your stuff when i have more time. thanks for the heads up.
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