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Old 02-28-2011, 06:02 AM   #1
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Unhappy Sister Sitting On My Lap

Jerking off and readying a climax when your sister stumbles in your room and jokingly sits on your lap unaware you are about to lose it.

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Old 02-28-2011, 07:09 AM   #2
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A few things:

- hit the enter button at the logical places. Nobody is going to read a large block of text and enjoy it without getting headaches.
- don't submit the entire thing here, this forum is just for ideas. You might want to take this to the editors or the author's hangout.

Other than that: welcome to Lit!
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Old 02-28-2011, 08:45 AM   #3
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Old 03-11-2011, 02:54 PM   #4
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Jerking off and readying a climax when your sister stumbles in your room and jokingly sits on your lap unaware you are about to lose it.
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