Replacing Mom

illianacole

Tina's Fallen Angel
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Elisabeth Malloy woke up early that Saturday morning. Her mother had just left her father the day before and Elisabeth was going to try to get out of the house before he got up. She knew she looked too much like her mother with her long dark blond hair that cascaded over her back in soft gentle curls and grazed across her hips when she walked. She had her mothers short and curvy build that was soft in all the right places. She even had her mother's grass green eyes. Seeing her would only piss her father off and his anger was something the entire town avoided.

She Didn't hear her father moving about so she crept silently down the hall and into the bathroom to take her shower. She was careful to be quiet as she turned on the shower and stepped into the spacious standup cube. but as she moved under the warm spray she heard the door creak open and realized that she had forgotten to lock the door.
 
Harvey woke up suddenly, groaning. He had a headache and his jaw was sore. He had the tendency to grind his teeth in stressful situations. And what a stressful situation it was! His wife, Dorothy, with whom he was married for ten years, had left him for a younger guy, a man she was working with. At first, Harvey had decided to grab his gun and walk to that guy's office and shoot him down but he had changed his mind. The guy would probably suffer the same fate in a few years, maybe even in a few months. Dorothy had been known for her mood swings and changed her mind very quickly.

That she had decided to leave the house was one thing. That she had left her daughter behind was something Harvey could never forgive. Elisabeth was the perfect daughter. Never impolite, hard working and full of joy, she was her father's little sunshine. She had never disappointed her dad.

Harvey dressed in his bathrobe and moved out of his room. The house was a mess, he was a mess and his life was too. A former soldier, it was not usual for him to act that way. He was used to a regimented and organized life. Some would say he was a control freak and that was the real reason behind Dorothy's disappearance from his life. He looked at himself in the mirror in the corridor: his blue eyes were reddened by the tears and the abuse of alcohol, his face, usually clean shaven, was covered by a small beard and his hair, dark blond with some gray streaks, was a total mess. Harvey was about to smash the mirror with one of his large fists when he heard the shower starting down the corridor.

Usually his background as a former Ranger would have detected his daughter getting up but he was not in perfect shape that morning. Smiling, he walked down the corridor towards the bathroom and passed in front of his daughter's room. He noticed the two bags near the door and understood everything. His daughter was about to leave him too. Growling, Harvey moved quickly to the bathroom and entered, noticing Elisabeth behind the transparent curtain. Without one moment of hesitation, he ripped the curtain away, revealing his daughter naked and wet body. Besides her age, Eli was the perfect copy of her mother. The same curves, the same breasts, the same eyes. Mad with rage and pain, Harvey decided at that fateful moment to replace his departed wife by his sole daughter.

"Are you going somewhere you ungrateful bitch? Leave like your mother the whore? And sneaking out like a thief? "

He stared at her body with lustful eyes, already planning what he would do to his new toy...
 
Elisabeth screamed as the shower cutrtain was ripped from the rod and covered herself with her arms and hands. Obviously she had not managed to get up early enough to miss her father.

"Are you going somewhere you ungrateful bitch? Leave like your mother the whore? And sneaking out like a thief? "

"Daddy what are you doing?" she asked as she turned a bright red. "I wasn't sneaking off or leaving you! I was just going to Sally's for the weekend. I didn't think you'd want to see me right now. I'm not like mom, I would never do what she did!"

Did he really think she could just sneak off on him like that? She had always been daddy's little girl. Always doing her best to make him proud. She'd never been close to her mother, never understood her wavering emotions and needs. She'd only had that kind of relationship with her father.

Now here he stood accusing her of being just like the woman that had abandoned them both. Could mom leaving have messed his head up that bad? did he think she was that much like her mother? the notion hurt so much that tears began to spill over Elisabeth's cheeks as quickly as the still running water could wash them away.
 
Hearing his daughter scream and watching her cry never stopped Harvey. He was mad and his anger was legendary. No one ever succeeded in calming him. It just took time...a lot of time.

"You fucking liar! If you are leaving for the weekend, why bring two suitcases? Do you think I am a complete moron like your mother did? That's it isn't? You are moving out with her? You want to be fucked by that guy too? I will teach you to betray me you ungrateful bitch!"

Harvey grabbed Elisabeth's throat and slammed her against the wall of the shower, opening his bathrobe with the other hand. He dropped the robe and climbed into the shower, holding his daughter in place. His eyes were red and Elisabeth could hear her father's teeth grinding against each other. Lowering her eyes, she also noticed his cock fully erected. Harvey had a large and thick manhood, one of the things that have kept Dorothy at home for a while before she found another man.

"Just like your mother, the same fucking curves, the same fucking breasts....You filthy whore, I am sure this little body would have pleased that guy your mother is seeing now....Tell me the truth Elisabeth! Tell me how slutty you are just like your mother!"

Harvey squeezed her neck a bit, choking her before moving even closer, his hairy chest touching her wet breasts....his empty hand caressing her thighs.
 
Elisabeth didn't have time to answer her father's first set of questions before his hand was around her throat and she was slammed to the wall of the shower. her hands flew first to her throbbing head and then, as her father disrobed and climbed into the tub, to his shoulders to try desperately to push him away.

This was bad. This was so bad. His eyes were red and he was grinding his teeth so loudly that the sound was actually hurting her ears. She had never seen him so angry before, and now he was naked in the shower with her.

That was when she made the mistake of glancing down in her struggle. He was hard! Oh God! This was not happening to her. "Daddy, don't." she pleaded as she struggled to push him away, "I'm not moving anywhere! I have two bags because i always get cold at sally's and i packed my sweatshirts!"

He didn't seem to hear a word she was saying. He only moved closer and squeezed on her throat. She knew he could kill her if he didn't get a grip on reality, but her own panic was rising by the second as she felt the hair from his chest brush against the sensitive nipples of her slightly tanned 38d breasts. It rose even farther as his hand began to run along her thigh, skimming the very edges of her completely bald pussy. She topped the ladder of panic when she realized she could feel her father's cock rubbing against the soft skin of her flat abdomen. What a graduation present! her mom abandons her and her father loses his mind. being eighteen was definitely not all it was cracked up to be.

"Daddy, I'm not fucking anyone! I swear! I'm still a virgin!" screaming hoarsely she tried to kick at his legs, but missed, "Daddy, please.. I'm not mom...I'm your little girl! your Lissie. Please daddy stop!"
 
Harvey's hand left his daughter's throat as he slapped her harshly across the face, mad at her lies. The sight of his naked girl in the shower and her close resemblance to her mother had brought out the monster that he had kept inside for so many years, the monster that enjoyed humiliation and inflicting pain on others.

"You fucking liar, do you really think I will be convinced by these lousy lies? Two backpacks for one weekend? Be honest with me, tell me that you think like your mother and that I am a pathetic looser!"

Not hearing Elisabeth's pleads for mercy, Harvey grabbed her thighs and lifted her legs in the air, squeezing her against the wall of the small shower.

"We will know soon enough if you are telling the truth bitch! If you are not a virgin, you are just like your mother, a liar and a whore. If you are indeed a virgin, then I will enjoy this moment and no one will ever be able to claim that he took your cherry!"

Keeping her in the air by moving even closer to her, he then positioned the tip of his large cock over her pussy and in one powerful trust, sank deeply into her sex, effectively taking her virginity. Without any considerations for Elisabeth, he started to move violently in and out of her, smashing her back and her ass against the hard wall. The man had lost his mind and had become a beast...
 
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Elisabeth screamed as her father shoved into her untouched pussy and shattered not only her virginity, but her entire world. Though she knew that he was seeing her mother when he looked at her, she wondered how he could hurt her like this. He'd always been so protective of her.

It didn't matter now and there was nothing she could do to change it. He was paying no attention to her as he slammed into her body over and over again. Eventually, she quit struggling and just lay against the wall crying while he took his anger out on her.
 
Ignoring completely who he was fucking, Harvey kept trusting savagely inside the girl's pussy, sinking his fingers into the flesh of her hips. He moved like this for a few minutes until all the rage turned into an intense wave of pleasure. He then exploded into her, filling her insides with his hot seed.

He then moved out of her and, without any consideration for his victim, he dropped her, discarding her like a rag doll in the steamy shower. He grabbed a towel and dried himself quickly, out of breath and turned towards her:

"See Elisabeth, you might have told the truth about your virginity but you are still a fucking liar! Consider this a punishment for your treason! I can promise you that you will never leave me! NEVER! And I am not a liar...."

He then left the bathroom, going downstairs to grab himself something to eat.
 
Elisaveth sat on the floor of the shower under the ice cold water until she was shivering and damn near blue before crawling into her room and putting on her least attractive pajamas. Crying into her pillows was all she wanted to do right now.

She hated her mother. because of her she had lost everything. Nothing was going to be the same.

Eventually, She got hungry and tiptoed her way downstairs to the kitchen, doing her best to avoid her father as she made herself a simple sandwich to take back to her room. Unfortunately, he had just stepped back in from somewhere outside. She tried not to look at him as she busied herself.
 
Harvey had left the house to get his ideas straight and returned home with one thing in mind: turn his Elisabeth into his little fucktoy. For that, he had to make sure she would remain at home and keep what happened for herself.

As he walked back inside, he heard noise in the kitchen. Good. She had not left the house in a hurry. He entered the room and immediately noticed these ugly pajamas. That would be something he would have to change later...His fuckdoll would only be allowed to wear sexy clothes.

Faking a pityful look, Harvey walked closer to Elisabeth and took one of her hands. He started the first part of his plan: manipulation. He started crying, visibly shameful of what happened a few hours earlier.

" I am so sorry Lizzie....I was mad because of your mother and I lost control. I know this is unforgivable but I will still ask because you are the only thing I have left. Please forgive me, please stay with me...I have lost so much and you too...We have each other. I promise I will leave you alone but I need you with me to pass through these hard times....My sweetie, can I count on you?"

Harvey waited for her answer, knowing her well enough to know that she would stay and help him. The next phase of his plan would be to treat her like a princess, regaining her trust...
 
Elisabeth visibly flinched as her father took her hand. She didn't want him touching her. Not after the shower. She pulled her hand away and looked at him with harsh judgement in her eyes. "How could you, Daddy? All I have ever done was try to please you, try to make you proud of me. I never even connected with Mom. Yet you accused me of being just like her and forced yourself on me." she took a step back.

"Aside from the fact that you're my father, you came inside me. Think about it, Daddy. What happens if I get pregnant. You know I am not on birth control. You wouldn't let mom take me to get it. How much of a social pariah do you think it would be for me to be carrying my own father's child?"

She had thought about all of these things and more. Still, even being terrified of him now, underneath it all there was a piece of her that was still daddy's little girl and probably always would be. Besides, she had nowhere to go and telling anyone would just be too embarrassing.
 
Harvey moved back from his daughter, aware that he should give her some time to calm down. He listened to her and almost felt ashamed of himself. Almost.

She said herself that she always did everything to please him, to be the perfect daughter. With her mom gone, Elisabeth would have to take her place in his bed. He knew Lizzie well enough to know that after some manipulation, she would comply and he would be able to mold her into the perfect little cumslut.

He looked at her, his eyes looking down on the floor, faking to be ashamed of himself. When she finished her angry speech, he lifted his head and answered.

"I am really sorry but I don't want to be alone Lizzie. Your mother almost destroyed me and I thought you were about to leave me too. I know you always did your best to please me and you were closer to me than to your mother. What I did was horrible. As for the pregnant thing, there's pills for that isnt?

So now I will leave you alone. If you wish to leave the house, I would understand but honestly, it would destroy me. I need my baby girl and I need her close."

Harvey left the kitchen, curious to see how Elizabeth would answer.
 
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