A Dancers Salvations (Closed)

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Yet another attempt at this srp closed for Powerdog16

~Ember sat in the back getting ready for yet another performance. Makzim seemed most intent on her dancing most of the night tonight and she dared not cross him this time. Llast time she did not feel up to dancing most of the reoutines most of the night she had paid dearly. She thought about the man she met the night before. remembering tender words. Something she was not used to without pain or pills following.

She walked out onto stage in the black skirt and blood red corset and spike heels and began to dance trying her best to forget the sleezy males that Makzim had here tonight. There out of the corner of her eye she saw him. Sitting at the bar with the other muscle Makzim kept around. Seems her kind worded man was one of her bosses boys. that scared her a little~


Makzim looked at his latest top soldier and smirked. You did well protecting her from Gino's two idiots so figured you might like seeing her dance

Her slender form slinked along the stage with prefect sway with the music as if she has done this for a very long time... Longer than she has been "legal" to be dancing. The corset fell as she danced more and more the music seemed to overtake her and carried her far from this place at least in her mind making her just an extension of the music and a sensual dream given flesh and life.

The skirt was slowly slithered down her long legs as the song slowed down leaving her by the end of the song in nothing more than the heels as she collected her clothes and the money thrown at her.

Moments later she was dressed again and walking over to Makzim and the others as if programmed taking her place by Makzim looking away from all of them. A very different sight from the young woman who had spoken with him the night before. The faintest sight of bruises on her upper arms was visable only to someone who was well trined to spot the hidden.

Her eyes briefly glanced to him as she bit her lip and then away quickly until she heard Makzim offer her to this man for however long he wanted and that she could be given something to make her completely willing if he wanted.
 
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Makzim had done the unimaginable for Logan Stone. He had given Logan his trust. If only he knew just how misplaced that trust was. Logan was Makzim's trusted right hand man and had been for 4 years now... however, it was all just a sham. In truth, Logan ( which was not even his real name ) had been an FBI agent working deep undercover. Logan sometimes hated doing the things he had to do to prove himself to the gang, but they were getting dangerously close to busting this Makzim gang wide open!

He looked at the girl and smiled. Though he had not been in this club more than maybe a handful of times, he had surely not been here at the same time as this lovely young lady. He said, "No... I don't think I will need anything for her... will I darlin?" He walked towards her and said, "How about you and me go somewhere more private..."

He reached up and wrapped his arm around shoulders and said, "Makzim... thank you boss... I will take good care of her."

Logan walked back into back hallway of the club, locating a stairwell and then looked down at her and said, "Take me to your room... sugah..."
 
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She shook her head no that they would not need anything... She hated when Makzim gave her the pills or whatever. After so many years she should be used to it but still. She looked briefly to this man who she thought was different only to find him here and Makzim giving her to him she merely walked towards the backstage area and to the stairs that led up to the private rooms and then to the first one not in use. Opening the door to a fairly dimly lit room with a large four poster bed and a false fireplace and over stuffed couch and fur rugs as well as a small 4 person hot tub.

Walking in she stood there looking at him how could she have been so wrong bout this one... when he stopped those drunk animals form assaulting her she thought he was some sort of sideline good guy just hanging around with Makzim's people for something to do but now... he was to her just another person to fear and expect to use her.
 
Logan watched her go into the cheesy replication of a Victorian style bedroom and fought off his need to chuckle. It was so corny it bordered ridiculous. He watched her put her purse on the chair and then turn towards him. He felt her hands move onto his body in an almost robotic like movement and he stopped her a moment.

"Wait a minute... wouldn't you like to ... you know... get to know me first?" He said as he took her hands and moved them to her sides.

She kind of stared at him with a most confused manner and he seriously wondered if there was anyone actually homse inside that brain... He said, "My name is Logan... and you are?"
 
None of the others had ever wanted to know anything or tell her anything other than what was going to happen to her. Maybe this was a trap or some twisted game on his part.

Ember... her voice was soft. You have never been to the private rooms have you? He videos everything that goes on in them... I bet he is in his office watching this now. Her voice so soft and a little scared as she looked into his eyes searching for any sort of explanation to his actions.
 
Logan started to look... it was his instinct to do so and then stopped himself and said, "Oh?"

He said, "Well... this place is simply not going to do it for me. Too... traditional and as you will find out... I am as untraditional as they come..." He smiled and said, "Come on..."

He led her back downstairs... then to the back entrance to the alley... where his escalade was parked out in the back. He helped her into it and then said, "Let's go somewhere no so viewed..."

He smiled at her and said, "So ... Ember... tell me about yourself..." he spoke as he drove...
 
What and why do you want to know? She looked to him biting at her lip this was most confusing and she feared Makzim would be irate at their leaving.

He will be mad.

She thought for a moment... I have been with Makzim since my stepfather gave me to him years ago this is all I have and all I am now
 
He looked at her and said, "Hey... you look scared..." He put his hand on her knee and said, "He said I could have you for as long as I wanted... any way I wanted... So... this is how... if he has a problem, he has my cell number..."

He smiled towards her trying to calm her down as she told of her stepfather... he had heard of this kind of stuff before... selling their kids to pay off debts and what not... He said, "Wait... are you saying you are his ... property? Like... his possession?"
 
Since I was 15. She looked to his hand and then back to him she was scared that Makzim would be angry and abusive with her... she was beyond used to it but still she doubted that this situation being out of her control would be taken in consideration.

So yes I guess you could say that.
 
Logan made a mental note to contact Captain Hiller of the Police Force to pass this information on later... he said, "So... you have never left his side? Done everything he has asked of you? Really?"

He pulled into a seedy looking motel and up to room number 12. He said, "This is my place... at least for now..." He helped her out of the SUV and then walked her to the room and in. He said, "This place is safe... Now..."

He sat down on the bed and said, "Listen... I will be honest with you sugah... you look like a sweet girl... and I think you are very beautiful... but I am going to use you just like I want to... and..."

He eased her to the chair and walked to the minifridge and pulled out two beers, handing her one. She clearly looked confused as he sat down next to her cracked the bottles open and said, "Do you like Jay Leno?"

He turned on the TV and the two of them watched the late night talk show host...
 
She was completely confused and shrugged taking the offered beer wondering what he was up to. Whats your plan in all of this? Some sort of game to you?

She looked from the tv to him from time to time waiting for an answer. Part of her wanted to believe this was some tender caring guy who was nothing like Makzim and what she was used to dictated in her mind that this was a trick or a trap of some kind.
 
Logan felt horribly sorry for Ember. He said, "A trick? This is no trick. You needed some down time... and I am giving it to you... You see... I am not like him. I won't ever be like him."

He watched the show come to a close and then he said, "When the time comes and he asks me about you... I promise you that I am going to brag that you are the best I have ever had... and I want you again..."

He smiled as he stood up and pulled the sheets back to the bed and then looked to her and said, "Bed is yours..." He picked up a pillow and tossed it on the couch and said, "I will sleep here... I will take you back in the morning... if that is okay with you?"

It was evident that she was clearly confused. He said, "I could sleep out in the truck... but there is a risk this place is being watched... so... I promise I won't hurt you... okay... just... get some rest..."

He watched her get up and he laid down on the couch... stretching out some... he looked to her and said, "I have a couple of T-Shirts in my closet over there if you want to wear one tonite... Go ahead..."
 
She looked at him confused and scared.

You don't have to sleep on the couch.

If you are not like him why do you work for him?

Her curiosity was getting the better of her and she was starting to talk more.
 
Logan said, "I do work for him... but that does not mean I am like him... I hope that makes sense. Some of us out here actually like people..." He watched her head into the bathroom and slip out of her dancing outfit and into a T-Shirt.

As she returned, he let his eyes look down that body of hers and it was indeed magnificant and it was no secret why so many craved her. He said, "I will sleep on the couch... it is okay... see... it is... almost as comfortable as... the front seat of the escalade..." He gave a chuckle towards her and said, "Seriously... love it!!"

He adjusted his head on the arm rest and tried to get comfortable...
 
She was too tired to argue but after several questions about what he had done to end up in the club or Makzim offering her to him as reward she finally fell into a deep troubled sleep.
 
Logan woke up to the sound of a knocking door! He jumped up just as she did and he quickly got up and walked towards the door, peeping through the peephole and then cursing to himself. He turned to see her sitting up in the bed.

He said, "I will be back... get dressed..."

Logan slipped from the room and left for about 20 minutes... to talk to his contact with the FBI... something he had too keep secret...
 
She leaped up terrified even though dressed in one of his shirts she held the covers tight to her visably trembling as she looked to him biting her lip. She grew more fearful when he said he would be right back but nodded and grabbing her clothes she bolted for the bathroom and throwing her clothes on quickly wondering if she should walk outside as well in case it was Makzim or one of his people and try to make sure they did not harm him. She stood there shaking as she started to reach for the doorknob though half frozen in place she did manage to make herself open teh door a little trying to look out to see who Makzim sentor if he was there himself.
 
Logan saw the door open slightly and he grabbed it and pushed himself back inside... He had to make sure no one saw him with that informant...

Once he was in, he said, "I told you to stay here... remember. Please... just do what I ask of you... it is for your own best interests and yes... I am interested in your interests..."

He watched her back up and nod before he reached for his jacket. His phone rang and he looked at her a moment, then picked it up.

A few moments later, he looked at Ember and said, "Mikzen has invited me to his Jersey estate for the day and wants me to bring you too."

He leaned in to her and said, "Listen... I know you don't understand this... but you are my girl. Mikzen has given you to me essentially for as long as I want. So if anything goes awry out there... you will come to me... got it?"
 
She recoiled a little backing up but nodded biting her lip. She watched him not fully scared but still on edge. She walked over to the couch and sat down till she heard his phone ring and looked to him sure that Makzim would wonder where they were or be angry about her being gone so long.

Once he hung up and told her what was going on she balled up... she remembered that place well and knew now that He was kidding himself he he believed that Makzim meant longer than just that night. She stared blankly at the floor. He expects you to bring me there so He can offer me to someone else during the party... He is probably trying to gain favor from someone higher up. Or a party for some graduating or coming of age son of one of his other people. Thats why any of his dancers are at the parties and why I tend to be at all of them.

She seemed to fall back into that almost robotic mentality. Clearly a survival technique on her part as she stands and looks to him waiting for them to go. She stared through nearly hollow eyes her mind though was having a little harder time to completely get into that robotic mindset as she was still shaking a little and glanced occasionally to him biting her lip wanting to believe he was able to do anything to stop Makzim's agenda for tonight.
 
Logan listened to her and bit his own lip. He was not an idiot. He knew that she was not his... but he was going to try like hell to make it that way. He had a soft spot for this girl and he wanted to try and help her if he could.

He said, "I am going to try and get you for tonite. If I have to pretend to be love struck to make it happen, I will..." He hoped that softness he felt was not love struck... but he couldn't stop it...

He pulled up to the place and was waved through. THe estate sat on 50 acreas of fenced off land with guards walking all around the place and security cameras and motions sensors everywhere. It was going to be a very hard place to break into and out of... but he did have a few tricks up his sleeve.

The two left the truck and Logan walked to the back of it, opened a small bag and pulled out a few items of interest. He shoved them into his jacket and then the two went inside...

"Ahh... Logan..." Makzim said with a broad smile, "You look like shit. Did she keep you busy I trust?"

"Oh very..." He laughed and pulled her close to him... he said, "I have a favor to ask of you boss..."

"What is that?" Makzim said as he grinned at him. He knew that Ember was one of the best...

"You mind if I... you know... keep her another day?" Logan asked...

"Ahh... I am afraid that won't be possible. I have some friends here who want to have her for the night..." Makzim said.

"I see... Perhaps this might interest you?" Logan said, pulling out 2 $5,000 stacks of hundred dollar bills and handed showed it to him...

"Well! She certainly does have your attention... doesn't she? Very well... I am sure I can find another girl to play with the boys..." HE snatched the cash and looked at Ember and said, "You are his toy for the next say... 3 days... I am being generous... Keep him entertained..." He kissed her hard and brutally... then turned to Logan and said, "Have fun with her my friend..."

Logan smiled, looked at Ember, offered his arm and then escorted her to the main ballroom where the rest of the people were...
 
She just nodded to Makzim whimpering at the roughness of the kiss and then coiled closer to Logan especially after she saw some of the people present. watching one man walk towards them she tightly gripped his arm and tried to back away with a barely audible whimpered No.

She hoped that Makzim would stop him and he did telling him that part of his birthday gift would have to wait a few days. The muscle bound sleaze of a man snorted but looking right at her seeing the fear he nodded... I wait to get her I get her for... 2 weeks Makzim... agreed? Much to her horror Makzim agreed without a second thought. Deal now go enjoy one of the other girls for now my friend...

She was shaking now hearing what just happened not that she was not used to it but she barely did well with a night or two with that man much less now the promised 2 weeks.
 
Logan heard the conversation as well... and tensed. He knew there would be little he could do to convince Makzim to change his mind. He understood the meaning of political and criminal power and how at times it was even more important that money. Logan had to figure out what he was going to do... but till then, he had her for 3 days.

He looked to Makzim and said, "I trust you will not mind if I go ahead and call it a day... I want to get the most out of my money..." He grabbed Ember's ass and pulled her tightly to him.

Makzim smiled and said, "Of course not... just remember though... 3 days... she is back here..."

Of course boss!" He said and they two of the left...
 
By the time they got back to the truck she was shaking but instead of recoiling from him too as she normally would have she was holding tight to his arm. She had little doubt that Logan would have questions about who that was if he did not know already or what that little display by him and Makzim was.

Once in the passenger side of the truck she just balled up her mind slowly slipping back into memories as she sat there somewhat there and somewhat in the past with that slime of a man all over her.
 
Logan drove them back to the hotel and then stopped just as he was pulling in and said, "You know what... I can do better. Stay here..."

He got out, loaded his stuff in the truck, locked the hotel up and dropped off the key. The next stop was to a rather ritzy place called Beau Ravage and he dropped a cool 500 for three days at the place.

Inside, the place was a virtual dream away from life... massive king size bed, huge garden tub with whirlpool, large kitchenette, a large walkout balcony... He watched her look at the marble countertops, the wine, the bouquet of roses on the dining table, the office, everything that went with the suite and he said, "I hope you enjoy this. There is a whirlpool if you want to enjoy it... I promise... no expectations here... OH! But I do think you should consider maybe a change of clothes... I will have a dress brought up for you and we can go get you a few things later if you want...
 
She looked around and then did something that terrified even her but she could not stop herself. She moved to hold him tight hugging him she was still trembling as she looked up into his eyes... You... you can't stop him from...

She fell silent and run from him into the bathroom area locking the door she sat in there crying for some time before walking back out trying to smile... We should eat
 
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