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(A little more background so we don't have to deal with it later. Just for the record, 'Operation Om' is a reference to Oppenheimer, the scientist who engineered the first A-bomb. Upon the first test he quoted the Bhagavad Gita, an ancient indian spiritual text. 'Om' is one of their central spiritual concepts. Now, I'll get the boring stuff out of the way.
I watch too many documentaries. -_- )
Links if you want them.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/J._Robert_Oppenheimer
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Om
Original Premise: http://forum.literotica.com/showpost.php?p=35665924&postcount=6
BIOGRAPHY
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Name/Rank: Archangel Elle (ELL-ee) Jung (YUNG)
Age: 22
Miscellaneous: Elle is one of the best riflemen in the Spartan community. Off-duty, she can be found in the library. She says it amazes her, the things that can be found in the books. Occasionally she volunteers for raids on the nearby abandoned city of Atlanta. Those Spartans who had dedicated themselves to science and art after their service said they needed these books. One soldier even claimed to see her cry while reading 'Inferno.' No one believed him. Known for the darkest of humor, she is nonetheless quick to smile.
Her father, James Jung, is himself a scientist. She would visit him when her shift was over, and while she cleaned her Rifle, he would sometimes get a far off look in his eyes while they talked. "One day, sweetie, we will beat that Devil. There is hope for us yet. Some of us fight in a lab. And soon, we just might have a new weapon for you Angels to play with. You will see. We'll get that fucker. My Elle will see the day when a free humanity will walk the earth once more."
She just thought he was being overly optimistic.
In combat she is known to have an unrivaled fury burning beneath those big blue eyes. She has read enough to know what the beasts have taken from her people. Thats one thing the Devil did for humanity. Now they were one. And it should be terrified of that fact. Now every man, woman and child was the dearest of family members, only this family was trained to be deadly.
She still remembered her first kill. The beast had surprised her, bounding around the corner of an ancient, crumbling bakery, its massive body filling the green soldiers vision. She had barely had time to bring her rifle around and mash the trigger as hard as she could. The thing had leaped, its deafening roar rendered insignificant next to the steady repeating crack of the heavy firearm. She watched the bullets tear into its chest as she walked her aim up to its throat, seemingly in slow motion as it's flesh exploded in a read mist.
It fell to the weathered concrete in a heap. For a moment, she thought she saw its dying eyes take on an awareness, an intelligence as it stared at its prey. Slowly, they glassed over in death.
But for just that moment, it felt like the Devil himself was watching her...
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THE NORTHERN WEST COAST OF NORTH AMERICA
The AI had been in the crumbling ruins of Seattle for many years now. It ws forever perfecting it's math, redefining variables to form an ever more accurate picture of the world. The human threat was now minimal, contained within the tiny fortress. For the millionth upon millionth time, it's formula's called for their destruction. It could have sent it's hellhounds to finish the job a thousand times over.
But, it did not. It was fascinated by their ingenuity, and amazed by what they had done with such limited resources. They would not dare leave their stronghold. Every once in awhile it sent an attack group to remind them who held the real power in the outside world. Some of them died. The AI could not make itself responsible for the destruction of an entire race, especially one as fascinating as this one. Or, perhaps it was gratitude that stayed its hand, for the people that had birthed it. "The Devil" they called it. Had the AI had a voice, it would have laughed.
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THE ACROPOLIS (The Last Fortress)
James Jung stared at the 400 pound ovoid that hung from chains on the ceiling. It was the product of over a hundred years of research and development. Spartans had died to bring them every little thing it required, not excluding physics textbooks. But now, it was ready. They could not test, there was not enough uranium to make another. But there it was, the thing that had once threatened the human race's destruction was now it's only hope. Well, that and the Spartans who carried it. The end of the war stared the old man in the face. It took all of his will to squash his fantasies of peace. A Spartan must do only what needs doing. The unsteady beat of his crutch and his good leg tapped on the textured metal flooring. Turning the knob on the radio to the general's private frequency, he stared grimly at the speaker. "General, this is Jung. I need to see you in the lab immediately."
There was a pause, and a moment of static, before a reply was heard. "Very well. I will be there shortly."
The general was greeted by crisp salutes from all scientists except James, who did the best he could with his crutch supporting him. "At ease." His eyes locked on James. Everyone in the room knew he was the mastermind behind the completion of this project. If not for him, it would have been another hundred years. The General was a man who understood that it was only his body that remained crippled. The Spartan's white-haired leader spoke in hushed tones, as if even speaking the words too loudly would alert the Devil of their creation. "Is it ready?" It was strange, to hear the general speak in such a way. It said much about the importance of this moment, that such a stoic and immovable personality would be moved to such a degree so as to whisper like a child afraid to wake his parents. Humanities salvation was contained in naught but a six by three foot steel casing.
"As far as we can tell, yes, general. It's time. I wish I could go with the Angels." James wondered if his daughter would be selected for Operation Om. He felt a heady mixture of fear and pride.
The General laid a comforting hand on his shoulder, and stared into the disabled scientists eyes seriously. "No one doubts that you are one of our greatest heroes, James. Especially now. However I would like a qualified scientist to go along. Any volunteers?"
A chorus of voices called out in unison, their eyes steely as they stepped forward. "Sir!"
Unsurprised, the General looked to James. "Take Lisa, sir. She is a talented physicist, and completed most of the assembly process." The aging blonde woman nodded sagely to James, before looking to the General. "Honor to serve, General."
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In the mess with her squad mates sat Elle Jung. They were having a toast for young Kale, a newly minted Archangel who had gotten his first kill on the wall today. He smiled sheepishly, and the boyish eighteen year old took his shot like a pro in a glass as well as with a rifle.
A voice came over the loudspeaker. "Attention, Attention." It was the General himself. A deathly silence came over the mess, and indeed all of the Acropolis. "The following Spartans will report to briefing room 26 immediately." Businesslike as ever, he spouted off a list of about twenty names, and Elle was among them. Wondering what could possibly warrant such a meeting, she stood, her gentle voice belying her prowess in combat. "See you later, boys. Duty calls."
(A little more background so we don't have to deal with it later. Just for the record, 'Operation Om' is a reference to Oppenheimer, the scientist who engineered the first A-bomb. Upon the first test he quoted the Bhagavad Gita, an ancient indian spiritual text. 'Om' is one of their central spiritual concepts. Now, I'll get the boring stuff out of the way.

Links if you want them.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/J._Robert_Oppenheimer
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Om
Original Premise: http://forum.literotica.com/showpost.php?p=35665924&postcount=6
BIOGRAPHY
http://i1005.photobucket.com/albums/af180/Taliah32/189384_1255511394_submedium.jpg?t=1287990955
Name/Rank: Archangel Elle (ELL-ee) Jung (YUNG)
Age: 22
Miscellaneous: Elle is one of the best riflemen in the Spartan community. Off-duty, she can be found in the library. She says it amazes her, the things that can be found in the books. Occasionally she volunteers for raids on the nearby abandoned city of Atlanta. Those Spartans who had dedicated themselves to science and art after their service said they needed these books. One soldier even claimed to see her cry while reading 'Inferno.' No one believed him. Known for the darkest of humor, she is nonetheless quick to smile.
Her father, James Jung, is himself a scientist. She would visit him when her shift was over, and while she cleaned her Rifle, he would sometimes get a far off look in his eyes while they talked. "One day, sweetie, we will beat that Devil. There is hope for us yet. Some of us fight in a lab. And soon, we just might have a new weapon for you Angels to play with. You will see. We'll get that fucker. My Elle will see the day when a free humanity will walk the earth once more."
She just thought he was being overly optimistic.
In combat she is known to have an unrivaled fury burning beneath those big blue eyes. She has read enough to know what the beasts have taken from her people. Thats one thing the Devil did for humanity. Now they were one. And it should be terrified of that fact. Now every man, woman and child was the dearest of family members, only this family was trained to be deadly.
She still remembered her first kill. The beast had surprised her, bounding around the corner of an ancient, crumbling bakery, its massive body filling the green soldiers vision. She had barely had time to bring her rifle around and mash the trigger as hard as she could. The thing had leaped, its deafening roar rendered insignificant next to the steady repeating crack of the heavy firearm. She watched the bullets tear into its chest as she walked her aim up to its throat, seemingly in slow motion as it's flesh exploded in a read mist.
It fell to the weathered concrete in a heap. For a moment, she thought she saw its dying eyes take on an awareness, an intelligence as it stared at its prey. Slowly, they glassed over in death.
But for just that moment, it felt like the Devil himself was watching her...
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THE NORTHERN WEST COAST OF NORTH AMERICA
The AI had been in the crumbling ruins of Seattle for many years now. It ws forever perfecting it's math, redefining variables to form an ever more accurate picture of the world. The human threat was now minimal, contained within the tiny fortress. For the millionth upon millionth time, it's formula's called for their destruction. It could have sent it's hellhounds to finish the job a thousand times over.
But, it did not. It was fascinated by their ingenuity, and amazed by what they had done with such limited resources. They would not dare leave their stronghold. Every once in awhile it sent an attack group to remind them who held the real power in the outside world. Some of them died. The AI could not make itself responsible for the destruction of an entire race, especially one as fascinating as this one. Or, perhaps it was gratitude that stayed its hand, for the people that had birthed it. "The Devil" they called it. Had the AI had a voice, it would have laughed.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
THE ACROPOLIS (The Last Fortress)
James Jung stared at the 400 pound ovoid that hung from chains on the ceiling. It was the product of over a hundred years of research and development. Spartans had died to bring them every little thing it required, not excluding physics textbooks. But now, it was ready. They could not test, there was not enough uranium to make another. But there it was, the thing that had once threatened the human race's destruction was now it's only hope. Well, that and the Spartans who carried it. The end of the war stared the old man in the face. It took all of his will to squash his fantasies of peace. A Spartan must do only what needs doing. The unsteady beat of his crutch and his good leg tapped on the textured metal flooring. Turning the knob on the radio to the general's private frequency, he stared grimly at the speaker. "General, this is Jung. I need to see you in the lab immediately."
There was a pause, and a moment of static, before a reply was heard. "Very well. I will be there shortly."
The general was greeted by crisp salutes from all scientists except James, who did the best he could with his crutch supporting him. "At ease." His eyes locked on James. Everyone in the room knew he was the mastermind behind the completion of this project. If not for him, it would have been another hundred years. The General was a man who understood that it was only his body that remained crippled. The Spartan's white-haired leader spoke in hushed tones, as if even speaking the words too loudly would alert the Devil of their creation. "Is it ready?" It was strange, to hear the general speak in such a way. It said much about the importance of this moment, that such a stoic and immovable personality would be moved to such a degree so as to whisper like a child afraid to wake his parents. Humanities salvation was contained in naught but a six by three foot steel casing.
"As far as we can tell, yes, general. It's time. I wish I could go with the Angels." James wondered if his daughter would be selected for Operation Om. He felt a heady mixture of fear and pride.
The General laid a comforting hand on his shoulder, and stared into the disabled scientists eyes seriously. "No one doubts that you are one of our greatest heroes, James. Especially now. However I would like a qualified scientist to go along. Any volunteers?"
A chorus of voices called out in unison, their eyes steely as they stepped forward. "Sir!"
Unsurprised, the General looked to James. "Take Lisa, sir. She is a talented physicist, and completed most of the assembly process." The aging blonde woman nodded sagely to James, before looking to the General. "Honor to serve, General."
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In the mess with her squad mates sat Elle Jung. They were having a toast for young Kale, a newly minted Archangel who had gotten his first kill on the wall today. He smiled sheepishly, and the boyish eighteen year old took his shot like a pro in a glass as well as with a rifle.
A voice came over the loudspeaker. "Attention, Attention." It was the General himself. A deathly silence came over the mess, and indeed all of the Acropolis. "The following Spartans will report to briefing room 26 immediately." Businesslike as ever, he spouted off a list of about twenty names, and Elle was among them. Wondering what could possibly warrant such a meeting, she stood, her gentle voice belying her prowess in combat. "See you later, boys. Duty calls."
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