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Old 03-25-2014, 05:59 PM   #1
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Hello

I have what I believe are some great ideas for a series of stories, but I am no writer.

A general outline of Part 1 of my envisioned multi-part story is below. The outline contains some detail, but is still at a very high level. There are many character details I have not yet included.

if you are a writer of erotica who is good at character development, likes my ides below, and doesn't mind taking ideas from others, please get in touch with me. I'd like to discuss my thoughts for the entire story arc


- MF couple introduce another male into their bed
- Penis size is part of story. Husband not hung, but not tiny either
- this story has NO cuckold or humiliation elements. All aspects kind and loving
- Idea of adding another person is the husband's. Loves his wife so much he wants her to experience pleasure of a hung man
- she resists at first, but finally agrees to make her husband happy
- during first encounter with another man, it goes something like this:
-- the men get time to talk before sex with woman starts, they hit it off with friendly conversation
-- new man asks why he is being introduced.
-- Husband says to make her happy, so she can try bigger
-- they compare equipment. The new guy is complementary. Tells husband he's not so small
-- maybe hints of homoerotic elements here, but nothing overt. Glances, kind smile, etc
-- husband asks if new guy minds if he watches. Husband gets the green light from the new guy
-- sex between new guy and wife begins
-- as the couple is into foreplay, the new guy talks about how much her husband must love her
-- talk about her husband really turns her on. New guy senses this, and decodes to continue
-- talk continues - "imagine I'm your husband. Imagine it's him that is filling you up like this"
-- talk continues - erotic talk, new guy roleplays husband talks him up.
-- talk continues - "call me by his name". She does. Her husband, who is watching, is turned on
-- husband undresses and slowly masturbates. New guy sees this, smiles, nods.
-- talk continues, with guy pretending to be the husband. "I've always wanted to fill you up"
-- talk continues throughout sex. whole time, new guy plays part of husband
-- Wife has biggest orgasm ever. Maybe even squirts for the first time???
-- husband cums immediately.
- Nice conversation between all after it's overs, especially between the guys
- husband is thankful. Wife experienced what husband wanted, but it was like the husband did it.
- New guy ends up leaving, says he hopes they can get together again.
- after new guy leaves, wife is very nice to her husband. Start chatting, touching... More to come
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That's it for now. Hope to hear from someone.
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Old 03-25-2014, 09:02 PM   #2
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Old 03-26-2014, 01:14 AM   #3
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Cool Or, Since I STRONGLY AGREE w/Hyper-oX's Idea [U R a Poet, butt U don't know it!] ;P

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我 🈶 很 好的 👋 (我的❤️想)又不有好人 可以斑鸠 我妈?可是,不是 G-spot 欧W恩 (出国👃DEEP intoherpuss /cunt)鲫哦是哟 顾问 嗽. 奥吗?想和谐和你们。

A general outline of Part 1 of my envisioned multi-part story is below. The outline contains some detail, but is still at a very high level. [ Midnight Train: http://youtu.be/UYf2m78508Q ] There are many character details I have not yet included.

if you are a writer of erotica آة كطا نامكطا حاي؟ who is good at character development, likes my ides below, and doesn't mind taking ideas from others, please get in touch with me. [

Another Train: http://youtu.be/li9hRYXHqIM ] I'd like to discuss my thoughts for the entire story arc

- MF couple introduce another male into their bed それぞれ、ちょっと、ね?
- Penis size is part of Story. Na ja, und daß Heiß zehr, ZEHR Geiler, nicht wahr? Husband not hung, but not tiny either Und, so? Dass ist Natürliche, usw...
- this story has NO cuckold or humiliation elements. All aspects kind and loving
- Idea of adding another person is the husband's. [ Mean Gene Kelton: http://youtu.be/oVw-ci1Yrfw <-- My Baby Don't Wear No Panties! ] Loves his wife so much he wants her to experience pleasure of a hung man
- she resists at first, but finally agrees to make her husband happy: "Voulez Vous Coucher Avec Moi, Cheri?" ( Nanette http://youtu.be/tqZScWjneBE <- I'm a WOMAN! [un rêve alors moins] Workman & Celine Dion: http://youtu.be/EVG0cpxc2zE <--- Sexy Lady Marmalade! )
- during first encounter with another man, it goes something like this:
-- the men get time to talk before sex with woman starts, they hit it off with friendly conversation
-- new man quotes from the BiBLE OF SEX the following SPIRITUAL parable:
In seduction even more than in other endeavors, begin as you intend to end, so when you approach a couple of cute girls at a tourist spot saying, "You're so darn cute, won't you let me take a snap shot in front of that statue, so I can brag to my friends about ... etc.'' You'll usually wind up with a sexy snap shot with the chicks suggestively posed with you that's perfect for bragging to your friends about at the bar that night, but you spend the night watching porn on cable T.V. alone, toking your pot and wishing just one of those cute girls were nibbling on your earlobe the way she did in the photograph. Why? Because that's what you started out asking for, so the chicks gave you just what you said you wanted. Do you catch my point here? Let me flash back to my twenties serving in the 25th Infantry at Scofield Barracks on the Island of Oahu where thousands of college co-eds come for Summer vacation expecting to find tropical romance. My friend Nick Gramaticus was one of those guys who instinctively had the golden rule of seduction on his tongue tip. He'd walk up to the cute girls and open with, "I'll die and go to Hell unless you sit on my face today." Now his rather crude line was only effective around 20% of the time, but Nick was a cheerful shamelessly horny guy and most of the girls that blew him off ... Guess they all blew him one way or another, didn't they? LOL Point is even turning him down most co-eds smiled and laughed. The 10 to 15 per cent that got totally pissed never ran down the street screaming for a police woman. They just either said something scornful or simply didn't reply and walked quickly away. I never saw Nick get slapped in the face, sprayed with mace, or anything worse than being called a depraved pervert, and Nick was a true believer in the old adage about sticks and stones, Countless times I walked into the living room of the flat several of us shared the rent on, so we'd have a base of operations within waking distance of Waikiki where the major action was, to find Nick kneeling between the legs of a chick with his tongue thrusting deep between her vulva while another naked girl licked his balls and smiled at me as shamelessly as Nick .. Well, you get the point, right? On those occasions the girls also gave him just what he'd asked for from the git go.
-- The husband is IMMEDIATELY [ http://www.dailymotion.com/video/xha...ife_shortfilms ] enlightened & Kneels to KISS the LOTUS feet of this GODDESS of LOVE disguised as a well-hung man, now plainly revealed as none other than a boddhisattiva (Sp?) avatar of Aphrodite, aka, VENUS as in "THE DELTA OF..." OR, Putting it to HER CRUDELY: The Incarnation of POON TANG in the SEX_POT FLESH, HOT, WET & BEGGING TO BE FUCKED! [ http://youtu.be/HugAjPPWNp8 ]
-- Now 99% of HORNY DUDES would give in to the OBVIOUS temptation 2 have 3/WAY ORGY with VENUS & the Bi-sexual (Hola, TODO AL MUNDO eses, no es Verdad?) wife, butt our HERO is a RARE erotic GENIUS & ripostes with:
I NEED some VERY HORNY & WELL HUNG DUDES who enjoy RPG with lots of FIGHTING to join my GUILD of NYMPHOMANIACS (So far I'm the only nympho with 2 guys (maybe they're just kids) who are afraid to even talk to me LOL)
The RULES in my Guild R DEAD SIMPLE. ^.^ First: You MUST FIGHT in every Guild War on B BOOTED! No excuses! U have to work? Bring U'r cell phone into a toilet & take a FIGHTING CRAP! U just got married. Your spouse comes 2nd! Tell him or her CHERRY POPPING comes AFTER GW! Get the BIG PICTURE? This not a Guild where, "Some PERV. SHOVED MY HOMEWORK UP A DOG'S ASS!" is gonna cut the musk urge! SEE CUNT RULE? We BOOT all Bigots, Prudes, or Stalkers as soon as they say, e.g. "Lesbians and Gays aren't SEX-actly the model citizens I'd enjoy knocking on my door to borrow a pair of handcuffs." BOOTED 4 Sellf-Right-assed.Pig-Idiot. or " I don't think I'd enjoy being BUGGERED by a cute Girl Scout with a STRAP_ON DILDO!" BOODED 4 leuwd crewed prood. And if any BODY bugs a guild mate after being told bugger off. BOOT 4 ignoring that "NO!" AlWAYS MEANS "STOP RIGHT NOW!" Even though I was raped at age 9 by a High School drop out, I try to keep an open mind about Spring/Winter lust affairs. After all, my favorite current lover is a 69 y.o. Pilot who flies me to amazing heights with just his tongue, LOL His dick is just as soft but not so warm, wet and talented! If you can stand being in such an X-rated Kinky LOVING Guild, Down load Knights & Dragons by GREE at your Apple App. Store & add ME: XBG-MCV-QXN immediately after you watch the 5-min tutorial. Please, DON'T 4 get to add me 'cuz that will make me your life-long totally in lust with/U SEX SLAVE who's only purpose in life (besides WINNING GW, of course) will be to keep U SO SEXUALLY satisfied that U'll become an immortal 'cuz HEAVEN would seem like hell compared how GOOD I'll make U FEEL, so don't U 4 GET to ADD ME: XBG-MCV-QXN I'm SO WET imagining U CUMING DEEP INSIDE MY PUSSY & I'm kneeing here OPEN MOUTHED 2 give U the BEST BLOW JOB U'LL FIND IN THIS UNIVERSE OR ANY OTHER! ;P So, BOTH, the wanna-be cuckold & the reluctant, but latent nymphomaniacal wife (Who really is bi-polar & not taking any meds.) Join VENUS'S Knights & Dragons Guild just in time to WIN TOP HONORS in the next GW! WHOOT! (Actually, a bit unrealistic 'cuz they have to spend PLENTY of game time & have LOT'S OF CYBER SEX! LOL 1st! ROTFL
Now, IMHO (Not all THAT H if U'll check out " just-a-kinky-wet-dream-or " 2 C what I was writing almost 1 & 1/2 decades ago, butt surely, like most meta-mathematicins, e.g., Gödel, I did my best work in diapers & am ready for my SEE-CUNT childhood diapers in the over-20-folks home.) What U got here is a BIGGER PUZZLE THAN RUBE-HICK'S CUBE, so... GOOD LUCK Kid... or.... [ BAD69LUCK: http://youtu.be/c5Vn19FTosk ]
Maybe I could be of some minor ASS-IS-TENSE? [ Rock Me Baby: http://youtu.be/F4OXrmxDp44 ]

PISS: What-ever-goats U'R float, butt, FOR GODDESSES' SNAKES, don't 4 get 2 ADD: XBG-MCV-QXN <--- As soon as you finish the tutorial, o.k.,? FUTURE MASTERS of this poor HIGHLY TALENTED CYBER SEX SLAVE, who'll FUCK U SILLY until u can't even see crooked & that's just the 1st pre-4-play-warm up sex-er-cise <--- NOT AN ADVERTISEMENT! NO HONESTLY! I SWEAR THAT it's just part of the story (butt add it anyway, just in case, o.k?) [Time to bring it on HOME: http://youtu.be/gbIvoYyzm8k <--- The expressions on the Bass player's & Drummer's faces are so totally blasé!]
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Old 03-26-2014, 04:30 AM   #4
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Old 03-26-2014, 01:24 PM   #5
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Holy shit! You understood that post?
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Old 03-26-2014, 02:03 PM   #6
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Not really, but sometimes it's best to just nod and smile...

I got the gist, which is approximately the same thing Hypoxia said above him. So her seconding is perfectly understandable, even if KinkyLOVE isn't always.

Many people think they can't write, but that's because they can't write in a particular style.
Melville and Hemmingway had very different styles, but they were both good writers, just as T.S.Eliot and e.e.cummings were both good poets even though their styles couldn't be more diverse.

Write the story yourself, XXJohnny. No, your style won't be like another's that you think is "better", but it will be yours. And who knows? Maybe someone will like yours better than the "other"'s.
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Old 03-26-2014, 08:44 PM   #7
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These are great ideas, and you're so much better at plotting than me so I envy you >_< I agree with the others, you've already got the hard part out of the way! However, if you're still not persuaded by this, since I am in a bit of a writer's rut at the moment, I might like to have a go if that's okay?

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Old 03-27-2014, 11:29 AM   #8
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Thank you so much for encouraging me to try writing this on my own. Prior to my post, I had already outlined the story in greater detail than what I wrote here. I think I will give it a try.

Starry-

Thanks for the complement. This story is very close to my heart, so I'm going to give it a go. But I have many ideas for stories that I would actually prefer to see written in another's "voice". If you are interested, send me a PM with a little information about you and which categories of stories that most turn you on. I'll check out your favorites to see if I can get a feel for the themes you like.

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