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Old 10-05-2010, 09:21 AM   #1
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Brother finds out sister is a shemale

Hello all. I'd been searching around the site and there aren't any stories like this. If someone could make a story up about an older brother that finds out that his younger sister is in fact a shemale. maybe have him stumble in on her after a shower or something like that. then with a lot of heavy flirting through out the story have them finally end up fucking, as if they wouldn't on this site lol. thanks!
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Old 10-05-2010, 09:24 AM   #2
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Hello all. I'd been searching around the site and there aren't any stories like this. If someone could make a story up about an older brother that finds out that his younger sister is in fact a shemale. maybe have him stumble in on her after a shower or something like that. then with a lot of heavy flirting through out the story have them finally end up fucking, as if they wouldn't on this site lol. thanks!
define shemale. hermaphrodite?
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Old 10-05-2010, 09:28 AM   #3
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No, a pre-op shemale. but obviously for the story, the most beautiful shemale ever. like 5'6'' to 5'9'', 130-160 lbs, long hair, C-D cup breasts, maybe a 7-9 inch dick, and face that would make you never guess she had a dick to begin with.
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Old 10-05-2010, 09:58 AM   #4
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No, a pre-op shemale. but obviously for the story, the most beautiful shemale ever. like 5'6'' to 5'9'', 130-160 lbs, long hair, C-D cup breasts, maybe a 7-9 inch dick, and face that would make you never guess she had a dick to begin with.
i get ya. would it work better if the sis is older?
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Old 10-05-2010, 11:39 AM   #5
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How could a brother not know his sister is a shemale all along? At some point, she had to decide to "go" shemale, at which time she would stop looking like a male, and start looking like a female. Certainly the brother would have noticed this.

Unless she had been a shemale since birth, with the parents dressing her as a girl, getting her the injections, etc. And that's really creepy. Not to mention non-Lit-friendly.

I'm not discounting your idea; just trying to point out some plot issues that you need to work around.
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Old 10-05-2010, 11:43 AM   #6
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How could a brother not know his sister is a shemale all along? At some point, she had to decide to "go" shemale, at which time she would stop looking like a male, and start looking like a female. Certainly the brother would have noticed this.

Unless she had been a shemale since birth, with the parents dressing her as a girl, getting her the injections, etc. And that's really creepy. Not to mention non-Lit-friendly.

I'm not discounting your idea; just trying to point out some plot issues that you need to work around.
that's why i thought the sis should be older too.
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Old 10-05-2010, 02:35 PM   #7
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that's why i thought the sis should be older too.
You would still need to come up with a really solid explanation why the brother never noticed anything.
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Old 10-05-2010, 03:21 PM   #8
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Half sibs not raised together? Or mom and dad divorced when the kids were really little, each took one?
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Old 10-26-2010, 10:55 AM   #9
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So, I'm pulling up an older thread to give it new life. The argument of "how could the brother grow up with his sister and not know she is a 'shemale'?" is a valid one...but what about this...

A couple has two kids. One boy, one girl. However, the girl is biologically a boy or is a hermaphrodite. Why oh why, the parents chose for boy number two to be a girl. They even gave her "vitamins" (hormones).

Clearly by puberty the girl has to realize that she has a penis. There's no way around that. But she has also developed breasts. (Don't worry, puberty isn't in this story. Or, even if an author wants some back history, there will be nothing sexual. Yada yada.)

Perhaps the parents are going to let the he-she decide what gender it is by the age of majority? Or maybe he-she likes being both? Maybe there's supposidly some medical reason why the penis was never cut off, etc?

At any rate, the bulk of the story is set with the "kids" being legal adults. Why the sister's secret IS is up to the author. If the girl has looked like a girl her whole life the brother has no reason to know that she grew up with a penis.

So, this brings us to the how/why the brother sees her naked... But there's always a million reasons WHY incest or lookie-loos happen.
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Old 10-27-2010, 12:25 AM   #10
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It would make much more sense if they were step siblings, and the brother had only known his step sister as a female since their parents had married.
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Old 10-27-2010, 11:31 AM   #11
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Or they were twins, like in the Parent Trap. Parents divorce, each one takes a kid and they meet up later, only instead of at a summer camp it's at a swinger's resort or something. He's inexplicably drawn to her and only when they are getting serious about getting down to business does he find out that not only is she a pre-op tranny but his twin brother as well.

Now the problem is how to write it in a way that the "discover brother" doesn't run screaming into the night.
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