Old 01-10-2010, 03:20 PM   #1
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I saw something today that gave me an idea but not sure on how to work it as I am not that much into poker unless it is strip, but my idea is that a group of men play cards the stake for the game is their wives.

The way I was thinking all the men owe money various loan sharks, and these loan sharks get together to discuss bad debts they have files on each of the debtors with photos and personal historyís everything on them.

They compare the debts and they all pick one client that is around the same amount as the others to balance it all out, letís say £10,000.00.

Each of them makes the same proposal to each of the clients, and that is that they have a chance of clearing their debts and winning the total pot of £100,000.00 but each £100 worth of debt is firstly one item of there wifeís clothing of who has to be sat beside them through the game there is a limit of ten items of clothing in the game, after this with each £100 loss the husband can specify what can be done to his wife while she sits there.

Ie she has to sit on a butt plug she has to use a dildo in herself until she cumís.

Each of the offers has to be accepted by the respective Loan shark, if he runs out of ideas then for each £100.00 loss she gets one lash of a whip done by the same man so there is no difference in the cost to each.

The man can stop at anytime but they still owe the full amount of the debt plus the equivalent amount their losses up to that point regardless of what the wife has gone through.

All the loan sharks are there for the entertainment and to see the what the men force the wifeís to do.

What do you all think?
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Old 01-10-2010, 04:00 PM   #2
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i think that's a higher suspension of disbelief than many readers might be capable of reaching, at least for that kind of money. i'd suggest halving, or perhaps quartering, the amount owed...

wait a minute--what if they're operators of porn sites and videotape the proceedings for new content for their amateurs section?

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Old 01-10-2010, 04:03 PM   #3
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sounds very enticing. so, when a guy wins 100 his wife gets to put clothes back on? poker is back and forth and can take hours for losers to be determined. as well, with too many players, keeping track of who is whose wife might be confussing.

perhaps limit it to a single loanshark with 3 of his indebted clients. he brings them together, with the 3 wives to see who can win his debt off, while the other 2 get screwed - well their wives do!
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sounds very enticing. so, when a guy wins 100 his wife gets to put clothes back on? poker is back and forth and can take hours for losers to be determined. as well, with too many players, keeping track of who is whose wife might be confussing.

perhaps limit it to a single loanshark with 3 of his indebted clients. he brings them together, with the 3 wives to see who can win his debt off, while the other 2 get screwed - well their wives do!
it is only an idea but thanks and as i said i dont know how poker works i would have to check it out i think tho that once somthing has been removed it stays removed would sort the time thing out numbers can be sorted carnt they
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Old 01-10-2010, 08:24 PM   #5
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Old 01-11-2010, 12:03 AM   #6
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I like the idea of gambling the wife to pay off a debt....hmmmm. lol

Could be a very entertaining story especially with the popularity in poker now (Texas Holdum). You could have some fun with one of the husband's jumping the gun and going "all in" and betting all his wife's clothing at once and losing leaving her to be just a plaything for the rest of the night while the rest play it out but I do like the idea of the controlled bets to keep it going longer and less complex. You should see if there are people who want to volunteer to be characters and put themselves in your hands.
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..or his daughter could sit on his lap and it goes from there....
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..or his daughter could sit on his lap and it goes from there....
how would you work that in ?
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Old 01-11-2010, 06:24 AM   #9
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Oh that is easy, his wife died years ago, he's not seeing anyone at the time and his daughter says I'll help daddy.
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Oh that is easy, his wife died years ago, he's not seeing anyone at the time and his daughter says I'll help daddy.
I did think about this after reading your last post, and the addition of the rest of the family could work. so as far as the two of them think it is just them but once the wife is naked some hoods bring in their children and the daughter or son is added to the pot and has to perform anything that the husband says on his wife.

I think that would add a twist to the story
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i definately like the incest twist... what if both the father and the son are indebted to shame loanshark. you could have the wives of both be part of the pot, or else keep it in tightly within the family and the brother gambling with his sister...
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The problem here is that poker is an epic game. I mean go watch Casino Royale and then remember that a scene that takes fifteen minutes of the movie was probably six or more hours of play. I mean they take a half hour break, twice if I recall.

My point is that while the idea is brilliant I don't see it as a good read unless you do two things, the first is skip to the end game where women are being forced into sex, and the other is have the women actively doing something during the game. I can see how a guy might lose a few hands with a girl sucking him off, or riding him.
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I saw something today that gave me an idea but not sure on how to work it as I am not that much into poker unless it is strip, but my idea is that a group of men play cards the stake for the game is their wives.

The way I was thinking all the men owe money various loan sharks, and these loan sharks get together to discuss bad debts they have files on each of the debtors with photos and personal historyís everything on them.

They compare the debts and they all pick one client that is around the same amount as the others to balance it all out, letís say £10,000.00.

Each of them makes the same proposal to each of the clients, and that is that they have a chance of clearing their debts and winning the total pot of £100,000.00 but each £100 worth of debt is firstly one item of there wifeís clothing of who has to be sat beside them through the game there is a limit of ten items of clothing in the game, after this with each £100 loss the husband can specify what can be done to his wife while she sits there.

Ie she has to sit on a butt plug she has to use a dildo in herself until she cumís.

Each of the offers has to be accepted by the respective Loan shark, if he runs out of ideas then for each £100.00 loss she gets one lash of a whip done by the same man so there is no difference in the cost to each.

The man can stop at anytime but they still owe the full amount of the debt plus the equivalent amount their losses up to that point regardless of what the wife has gone through.

All the loan sharks are there for the entertainment and to see the what the men force the wifeís to do.

What do you all think?

Thought about this idea a little more and have an idea....the various loan sharks dress the men in debt's wives as they would like to see them (10 items like you suggest). When all items are lost it turns to the wife to perform or do an act. Instead of someone picking what to do it becomes luck of the draw. The wife has to pick out of a hat what she has to do and then pick again for duration. As an added wrinkle the game could be filmed or even broadcast privately over the internet.
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how would you work that in ?
Well the guys are playing cards, and his 18 year old daughter, highly sought-after by all the boys, comes to sit in with daddy. She settles on his lap in something innocent but sexy. Now, the guys don't know it, but her and daddy have been together a number of times.

So she starts getting bored and eases herself around on daddy's lap. The guys can't believe it, and daddy goes on as if nothing is amiss. He still plays it cool as her antics become obvious.

And it goes from there.
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Well the guys are playing cards, and his 18 year old daughter, highly sought-after by all the boys, comes to sit in with daddy. She settles on his lap in something innocent but sexy. Now, the guys don't know it, but her and daddy have been together a number of times.

So she starts getting bored and eases herself around on daddy's lap. The guys can't believe it, and daddy goes on as if nothing is amiss. He still plays it cool as her antics become obvious.

And it goes from there.
I see what you mean but its changing the idea a little too much i think as it is what the men will make there wives ect do to get them out of debt is the story is the hook...
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...well it could be the same thing, just with his daughter instead of wife. Eh.
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Ms Linnet. I read your post about some hoods bringing the children in the wrong way at first. I read it to mean the loan shark's son enters the room and the husband has to watch while each time he loses the virile young stud has his way with his poor wife. that might be another twist for you!
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