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Old 12-30-2009, 12:21 PM   #1
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Mutual Masterbation while deployed

This is my first shot at this so be nice.

The story is set on a remote FOB in Afghanistan where there isn't much to do besides work out, go to the chow hall, and dodge the occasional mortar.

Not sure if I want to tell it from the perspective of the female or male. Could be interesting either way.

Basic idea is a young female officer is assigned to the FOB. She shows up and starts getting to know people, blah blah blah. Eventually ends up discussing masturbating to relive tension with a fellow male officer. She's just out of college only had one boyfriend, asks to watch him masturbate since she has never seen a guy do that. One thing leads to another and it turns into a mutual masturbation scene.

I know the young innocent only one boyfriend in college thing is kind of cliché but I'm not sure how to get around her never having seen a guy masturbate. Any ideas there?

Not sure how far I'll take this. Might turn it into a series so I'll probably right a pretty good back story. Maybe the male will be older and married.

Let me know what you think. My initial thoughts are over done story just set to a different setting.
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Old 12-30-2009, 12:26 PM   #2
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This is my first shot at this so be nice.

The story is set on a remote FOB in Afghanistan where there isn't much to do besides work out, go to the chow hall, and dodge the occasional mortar.

Not sure if I want to tell it from the perspective of the female or male. Could be interesting either way.

Basic idea is a young female officer is assigned to the FOB. She shows up and starts getting to know people, blah blah blah. Eventually ends up discussing masturbating to relive tension with a fellow male officer. She's just out of college only had one boyfriend, asks to watch him masturbate since she has never seen a guy do that. One thing leads to another and it turns into a mutual masturbation scene.

I know the young innocent only one boyfriend in college thing is kind of cliché but I'm not sure how to get around her never having seen a guy masturbate. Any ideas there?

Not sure how far I'll take this. Might turn it into a series so I'll probably right a pretty good back story. Maybe the male will be older and married.

Let me know what you think. My initial thoughts are over done story just set to a different setting.

were you at this post?

a lot of guys will not masturbate, let alone even admit it.....so she doens't have to have just one bf.

i have no idea what a day in the life of someone in the military is like...let alone in a hostial place. where does one sleep? how many others are you bunked with? same for male and female? what happens if one has sex in the military on a post?
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Old 12-30-2009, 01:52 PM   #3
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I happen to know someone around here who has the answers.

Don't worry about a girl never seeing a guy masturbate before. I almost never did it for either of my girlfriends; it was rather awkward when I did, but I had to remind myself that they were enjoying watching. Neither of them volunteered to masturbate for me except when I suggested it, and they only did it once.

Masturbation scenes are great starts for continuing eroticism. Plenty opportunity for angst between peers, or perhaps an officer with direct authority over the new NCO.
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Old 01-01-2010, 01:26 PM   #4
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well I guess you both answered my main question.

As far as what life is like, it really depends on what you are doing. Sometimes it is normal 8 to 5 stuff and sometimes it's pretty hectic.

As for billeting, most officers have either private or semi private rooms. Sex isn't allowed but it happens. It's more of an issue getting in and out of the womens rooms with out being seen than anything.

I guess I should get started writing. Thanks for the input.
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Old 01-01-2010, 02:20 PM   #5
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well I guess you both answered my main question.

As far as what life is like, it really depends on what you are doing. Sometimes it is normal 8 to 5 stuff and sometimes it's pretty hectic.

As for billeting, most officers have either private or semi private rooms. Sex isn't allowed but it happens. It's more of an issue getting in and out of the womens rooms with out being seen than anything.

I guess I should get started writing. Thanks for the input.



What comes to my mind is that sci-fi movie called “Super Troopers” where the showers were co-ed.
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Old 01-03-2010, 04:12 AM   #6
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What comes to my mind is that sci-fi movie called “Super Troopers” where the showers were co-ed.
No. not at all. Showers overseas (or in the continental US for that matter) are not co-ed. Showers at smaller FOB's (Orgun, Shkin, Viper) have separate times for male and female, but never at the same time. Larger bases (Kandahar, Bagram) have separate shower facilities.
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Old 01-03-2010, 09:07 AM   #7
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What comes to my mind is that sci-fi movie called “Super Troopers” where the showers were co-ed.
I think you're thinking about "Starship Troopers." Number 3 is out on DVD I believe.
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Does Denise Richards finally take her top off in that one? Though she's getting to be a little old...
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Old 01-06-2010, 03:33 PM   #9
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Does Denise Richards finally take her top off in that one? Though she's getting to be a little old...
just an idea and not quite on the same line but if this woman officer is the only woman on base maybe she is uesed for all the officers to use and maybe when she is not being fucked she is used for entertainment as she is racked up and forced to orgasm by anyone who wants to use any means posible to make her cum time after time.
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Old 01-06-2010, 05:13 PM   #10
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I love the idea. Couple of ways you could approach the characters: You cold use the old officer not being involved with the enlisted man, you have her be an officer and he be a young inexperienced recruit who is real easy for her to talk to. That gives you more than the sexual tension but being discovered by another officer.

Then I like the idea of her being young and new and an older officer feels sorry for her and want to help her out.

Either way it sounds like a really HOT story idea. Can't wait to read it. txboyalone



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This is my first shot at this so be nice.

The story is set on a remote FOB in Afghanistan where there isn't much to do besides work out, go to the chow hall, and dodge the occasional mortar.

Not sure if I want to tell it from the perspective of the female or male. Could be interesting either way.

Basic idea is a young female officer is assigned to the FOB. She shows up and starts getting to know people, blah blah blah. Eventually ends up discussing masturbating to relive tension with a fellow male officer. She's just out of college only had one boyfriend, asks to watch him masturbate since she has never seen a guy do that. One thing leads to another and it turns into a mutual masturbation scene.

I know the young innocent only one boyfriend in college thing is kind of cliché but I'm not sure how to get around her never having seen a guy masturbate. Any ideas there?

Not sure how far I'll take this. Might turn it into a series so I'll probably right a pretty good back story. Maybe the male will be older and married.

Let me know what you think. My initial thoughts are over done story just set to a different setting.
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Old 02-17-2010, 01:05 PM   #11
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I have got to admit that i have a huge thing for guys in military uniforms so the idea of this story is really hot. I like the idea of it being like a beasting session where she has to masturbate for all the other soldiers so she can be accepted in the group after making some sort of huge mistake that could have been dangerous..........now that does seem like a good idea....she is very reluctant to do it but then realises that its turning her on and she gets a power trip seeing the guys watching her masturbating to because she is so hot....then she gets caught by an officer and is punished......
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Old 02-17-2010, 09:43 PM   #12
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Sgt Wiklund;

Yes, it's true most showers overseas are men or women only, but it also depends on which countries military you are from. Mine for example has the sliding sign "Male-Female" on the door in most places. So it is often quite easy to sneak a peek if you so desired as the ladies are walking down a common hall to the shower room or just walk in and "opps!".

While I was in training, we had one lady on our course from my home unit. She was a swimmer and in fantastic shape. She once asked me to bring in some soap for her as she forgot it in her room. She had the most beautiful ass around! I was truely privilaged.

Also while in the field on exercise for work up-training to Afghanistan, one of the Artillery woman soldiers was caught by the Padre getting railed by a fellow gunner in the Blue Rockets (Porta Johns) She got the nic name "Shitter Slut" from then on and I believe actually taken of tour because she was such a whore and couldn't keep it on the down low.
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I have got to admit that i have a huge thing for guys in military uniforms so the idea of this story is really hot. I like the idea of it being like a beasting session where she has to masturbate for all the other soldiers so she can be accepted in the group after making some sort of huge mistake that could have been dangerous..........now that does seem like a good idea....she is very reluctant to do it but then realises that its turning her on and she gets a power trip seeing the guys watching her masturbating to because she is so hot....then she gets caught by an officer and is punished......
That is truly a hot idea, would love to see that developed in to one hot story...
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Old 02-20-2010, 08:32 AM   #14
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what if a young female officer is assigned to a base where there is only one other woman, a senior officer. because of tight quarters they are required to share a tent. one night the young officer awakes hearing some noise, only to discover the senior officer being fucked hard by one of the NCOs. she doesn't know what to do, but tries to ignore it. This happens night after night.

Being far from her own bf/husband, the young female officer gets increasingly horny watching the senior officer fucking every night. One night, she can't take it any more and starts masturbating. the older officer watches her and low and behold, she's a squirter!

the older officer is quite amazed, having never seen a woman squirt like that. she then arranges for a few of her lovers to watch the young officer masturbate, forcing her to be the nightly entertainment on the base...
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This is my first shot at this so be nice.
Yea, right!

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The story is set on a remote FOB in Afghanistan where there isn't much to do besides work out, go to the chow hall, and dodge the occasional mortar.
Stop right there! What the hell is an FOB? Fucking Officer Butt? If you're going to use military acronyms in your story, you'd better explain them to us civvies.

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I know the young innocent only one boyfriend in college thing is kind of cliché but I'm not sure how to get around her never having seen a guy masturbate. Any ideas there?
No, most women haven't seen a guy jack off except for the "money shot" in a porno.

Seems like you've already started, but I'll add my 2 cents worth if anybody wants to run with it.

Older woman officer gets assigned a young recruit for an orderly/yeoman/whatever. Maybe she picks him because he's big and muscular and she thinks he'll be able to provide her personal protection. This gives her and the young man ample time together and alone. They often discuss things that are strictly military business. But as time goes on, they get to know each other personally. They begin to fool around as you mention, not wanting to cross the final line because of fratinization rules. She's a reservist, maybe a doctor. Soon, her short tour is coming to an end. She finally decides to screw him before she goes back to the states, her husband and kids.
It's close enough to her first night with hubby that nobody knows who fathered the kid.


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Old 02-21-2010, 09:25 PM   #16
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Most of the ideas in this sound pretty good. I'm tempted to take a stab at something similar.

I particularly like SensualWhisper's concept and could tie that into the original idea without difficulty - perhaps she fucks up on patrol. On FOBs, all you do is patrol, QRF, eat, sleep, exercise, jack off and wish you had a different option, rinse and repeat. And then do it again and again.

FOB = Forward Operating Base. Also "Patrol Base" and "Platoon House".
QRF = Quick Reaction Force.

Baron_von_C: You lucky bastard. I wish I'd seen something that good! It is however a lovely idea for a story.
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