Existencialisticism
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- Dec 16, 2009
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I recently posted my 'first' story, 'Voyeur Chapter 01', http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=454884 and did not submit it to an editor prior to doing so.
The story is about Voyeurism to some extent but is not limited to that.
Obviously there are some grammar issues within the story, and when I posted it some of the formatting of it messed up in places.
I'd appreciate it if a good editor could take the time to read the story and offer to edit it for me, or offer constructive criticism and ways of improving upon the story.
I can, if requested via pm, or here, post any such editor the story via email if that is the best approach.
Thankyou....Existencialisticism.
The story is about Voyeurism to some extent but is not limited to that.
Obviously there are some grammar issues within the story, and when I posted it some of the formatting of it messed up in places.
I'd appreciate it if a good editor could take the time to read the story and offer to edit it for me, or offer constructive criticism and ways of improving upon the story.
I can, if requested via pm, or here, post any such editor the story via email if that is the best approach.
Thankyou....Existencialisticism.
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