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Private lessons with Mrs. Reynolds

Although I just showered a couple of minutes ago, the sweat ran again down my back. This Saturday was a particular hot day for late September. I just had a good weekend workout at the gym and I was now on my way to the Reynolds. The Reynolds that are Ms. Reynolds and her son Jimmy, a twelve year old who gets some math coaching from me. I just had started to do the coaching and despite that it was just the second lesson, I really looked forward to it. That was an easy way to get some extra bucks and there was also the lovely Mrs. Reynolds. She split up with her husband a couple of months ago and now she was living alone with her son in their house. She wasn’t just very friendly to me she was also a quite good looking woman for her being in the late 30s.

I arrived at the house at the Reynolds and rang the bell. But nobody opened the door. Their car was standing in the gateway, so I presumed that the Reynolds would be home and decided to have a look around the house. I glanced through the front windows but I didn’t see anybody inside. I came to the backside of the house, where a garden with a small swimming pool was located. I peered over the garden fence and saw a part of somebody’s legs on a canvas chair. I expanded and realized that it was Mrs. Reynolds who was lying there in the glistening sun. She lay their wearing ear phones and a very small bikini. In order to prevent tan lines she had stripped down the straps of her bikini top. I realized that she had a really fit body for a woman of her age. I liked the view of her whipping her feet to the sound of the music she was listening to. For quite a while she didn’t realize me and I enjoyed looks of her well tanned body.

When she opened her eyes and saw me standing at the gate of the fence, she quickly put her ear phones aside and moved up. By a fraction of an inch her bikini top would have fallen down due to her fast move, but unfortunately she managed to get a hold on it in time.
She gave me a big smile and said: “Oh, Paul, I am so sorry. Were you waiting for a long time?”
She opened the gate and asked me inside.
“No Mrs. Reynolds, I just arrived. Where is Jimmy, is he inside?”
“That’s the second fact I have to apologize for”, she answered, “Jimmy isn’t here he is at his fathers, where he spends every 4th weekend. I am really sorry that I forgot to tell you last week. But at least let’s drink something inside and of course I will give you the money for this lesson.”
“That’s no problem Mrs. Reynolds. You don’t have to pay me for this lesson.”
“Thank you so much, Paul. But don’t call me Mrs. Reynolds. Frankly that reminds me too much of my still husband. Just call me Karen.”

She gave me a coke to drink and we had a little chat about the hot weather outside while we sat together at the small counter in her kitchen. After a while she came up with a question: “There is this one function Jimmy told me to ask you about. Just wait here, it must be somewhere over there.”
Karen stood up and walked towards the dining table across the room where the math’s stuff was lying. That gave me a good few of her attractive backside. Her butt was quite firm and not really covered by her bikini bottom.

“Here I got it!” she took a booklet and came back with it to the counter where I was sitting. She placed the booklet on the counter and stood right between me and the counter, so that the bare skin of her shoulder touched my chest. Her intoxicating scent immediately filled my nostril. I felt the warmth of her sun heated and sweaty body right through the fabric of my muscle shirt. That feeling just caused a bulge in my trouser which was growing within every second.

“Look Paul, here the X in this term. Jimmy doesn’t understand what it means.”
“Oh, the X Ms. Reynolds, uhm I mean Karen, yeah the X...”
My thoughts were at an entirely different subject than math at this moment. This very attractive MILF was standing right next to me and pressing her delicious body just against mine. Meanwhile the bulge in my trouser clearly pointed out now through the thin material.

“Is everything alright Paul?” she asked.
Karen now got even close to me on the stool and fondled my upper arm. Her leg now was only inches away from my hard-on caused by her.
“Do you have troubles with the heat? I thought a man of your frame wouldn’t mind,” Karen said while giving me an intense look to my eyes. Her hand now moved from my arm over to my chest and she got even close to me and lifted her leg a bit so that her knee now pressed my hard-on.

“I think it’s something different causing your distraction, isn’t it?” Karen whispered before her lips met mine for a kiss. Our tongues met wildly and our hands slid over each others body during our passionate kiss. Karen removed my shirt and was visibly inseminated by the condition of my upper body. She played around my chest with her black colored fingernails and then slowly moved her hands down over my abs into my boxer. Her eyes widened when she got hold of my dick which was already wettish with pre-cum.
She quickly pulled down my trouser and my boxer and I kicked of my shoes as fast as I could.
Now I was standing in front of this extremely hot woman, who was nearly twice my age, completely naked with her hands playing around my dick.
“Oh boy, what a man!” she said with an expectant smile before she got down on her knees and lowered her head into my crotch.

Carefully she surrounded the top of my cock with her lips. She sucked slowly and gave me a glance full of relish with her hazel-nut brown eyes. A shiver shrugged through my body, so that I had to get a hold on the stool behind me. Now she quickened her movements and started to take more and more of my cock into her mouth. Her fingers played around my balls virtuosic while she took the entire 7 inches of my cock down into her mouth. I never had a girl doing something even close to this. Although those girls with whom I had encounters before actually were girls and not a nearly 40 year old mother with an immense hunger for cock.
I felt an enormous load building in my balls. Despite that Karen kept on sucking my shaft as if she had never than anything else in her live. She kneeled there right before enjoying every inch I could offer her to suck. Her dark hairs were full of sweat because of the effort she was making.

“Karen, I’m close, uhm, I…I am about to cum,” I moaned.
She didn’t do anything like slowing down. If that was still possible the one thing she chanced was to suck even harder. My balls tightened and my vision got black for a split second before the huge orgasm finally ran through my body. Wave over wave of cum I shot and Karen eagerly swallowed every drop of it down her throat.

After what seemed to be an eternity my orgasm faded.
I started to say: “Oh Karen…”
But she interrupted me: “Paul, don’t even say a word, this is far from over…”

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