I enjoyed the story. It was short and sweet but you got everything that was needed.
The only issue I had was what kbate said about the constant use of the names. I found it a bit irritating but it didn't retract from the story...So no issues there.
However....What happened to her bad ankle? When she walked to the window at the end all I could think of was 'She got over that quick enough!'
I guess all the endorphins rushing through her system helped!
I intended on giving the story a 4 but slipped and gave it a 3 by mistake...And it won't let me change it. Working on a laptop with a crappy mousepad has its issues.