what makes a poem good?

[Remec]

Originally Posted by Angeline

Well yes, it is based on me. The hair and the eyes and the glasses, for sure. And I can't count how many guys over the years have said I'm a dom type. I always thought of myself more as bossy lol. eagleyez caught it right away.

Now grab your ankles and let me spank the bejesus out of you, you bad, bad poet.

Mmm...is that something for all us naughty poets? In which case, where's the line start? hehehe

[Angeline]

Originally Posted by Remec

Mmm...is that something for all us naughty poets? In which case, where's the line start? hehehe

Sure! Everyone gets a spanking plus the Fool has to write a sestina. That's how I roll.

[eagleyez]

Originally Posted by Angeline

Sure! Everyone gets a spanking plus the Fool has to write a sestina. That's how I roll.

She aint just whistlin dixie. I oughta know. Last time I got spanked was when I thought a sestina was a nap taken after a big lunch.

[Angeline]

Originally Posted by eagleyez

She aint just whistlin dixie. I oughta know. Last time I got spanked was when I thought a sestina was a nap taken after a big lunch.

You're bout due for another, buster.

[XXplorher]

Originally Posted by Angeline

If your intent was to demonstrate that you can do no more than vomit up an epithet, as opposed to using language to actually say something meaningful, you got it just right.

Actually, I think I might have nailed it pretty good there.

My very best vomit in recent memory.

(Which is to say, I support my use of the word 'cunt'. I think it's especially funny as I used it. And given my usual blather here the last few years - maybe the most 'sound' comment I've made in quite some time. Check the contect again and it might be especially funny to you also - given recent headlines.)


Far more than 90% of the time - I'm not worth concerning yourself about (not to mention impossible to understand). But that other 10%... might be meaningful.

Especially so.