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Old 03-07-2014, 08:31 AM   #1
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handy advice in sound-bite size

KISS or keep it simple, stupid

at least, on the surface



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Old 03-07-2014, 08:32 AM   #2
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Old 03-07-2014, 08:32 AM   #3
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Old 03-07-2014, 08:33 AM   #4
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Old 03-07-2014, 08:34 AM   #5
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Old 03-07-2014, 08:35 AM   #6
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Most of us are betting at giving advice than listening to it, especially our own
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Old 03-07-2014, 08:39 AM   #9
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Old 03-07-2014, 08:47 AM   #11
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Old 03-07-2014, 09:00 AM   #12
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You can feed your horse polos but its poop'll still smell like manure

try this if the pic won't show: http://rossparry.co.uk/files/imageca...DLAND_JP04.jpg
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If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
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Blessed are the cracked for it is they that let in the light
They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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You can lead a man to reason, but you can't make him think.
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Blessed are the cracked for it is they that let in the light
They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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Old 03-07-2014, 09:55 AM   #18
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Sorry. Twenty minutes and then I delete the pics. You'll have to wait till next time, or ask politely.
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What ever argument you have there is probably an equally compelling argument that runs counter.
There are reasons for Don't, some of them are not good.
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Old 03-07-2014, 10:24 AM   #20
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ah, no
you can lead a man to pleasin' and often drink
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Old 03-08-2014, 09:06 AM   #21
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Too much is a load.
reminds self to remember this. guilty.
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They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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reminds self to remember this. guilty.
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