Hi NjoyIt. Welcome to the forum.
If I can offer a little feedback on your poem, my first suggestion is to not break up every line so that it's standing alone by itself. You could group them into segments, or just have them one right after the other, but the line separations leads one to read a line, pause, then read the next line. Think about how you'd like the poem to be read. I find reading my poems out loud helps me to edit them and make them read more naturally. To me, anyway.
The repetition of playful mind doesn't seem useful here, but that may be due to not knowing how the poem is supposed to sound due to the line spaces.
“Her mind and mine” sounds good, but it doesn't lead anywhere, or seem to come from anywhere. With the “and mine” the narrator makes his first appearance, but I'm not sure why.
I'm going to leave it at that, right now, and hopefully some of the more experienced writers will have something to say.