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Old 04-23-2015, 03:37 PM   #1
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Write Your Carpe Diem Poems:An Invitation

Old male members are invited to write their Carpe Diem poems.I start with mine.

At the eve of fifty
I still chase pussy
I can simple say
for every guy
life is a chance to fuck hot chicks
as much as possible
if you miss that chance
your life is a waste
so Carpe Diem young guys!
seize the day
fuck cunts as much as possible.

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Old 04-23-2015, 10:41 PM   #2
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What a horrible word that is, very unpoetic
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If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
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Old 05-23-2015, 06:35 AM   #3
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The only time
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now.
Don't ask me
why,
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Old 05-23-2015, 07:27 AM   #4
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What a horrible word that is, very unpoetic
God don't get butters n Tess started again
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I seized the day for sixty years
each sealed safely in my chest
now I just lounge around 'cause
I fuckin need the rest.
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Old 05-23-2015, 02:01 PM   #5
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This may be a good idea, TQ, but shame on you, you appear to exclude under 50s and ladies.
Utterly ageist and sexist.

Have a good rest, Harry, cause the next day is always near to... carpe.
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Old 05-23-2015, 02:25 PM   #6
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What a horrible word that is, very unpoetic
Carpe or Diem? Or did you mean Invitation?

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God don't get butters n Tess started again
What can you possibly mean?
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Old 05-23-2015, 02:33 PM   #7
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Carpe or Diem? Or did you mean Invitation?



What can you possibly mean?
It all started in words to avoid in erotic poetry ETA: omg, reading, forgot how funny that was
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Old 05-23-2015, 03:59 PM   #8
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It all started in words to avoid in erotic poetry ETA: omg, reading, forgot how funny that was
In my case you were probably thinking of me on my high horse - my "vouns and nerbs" thread.
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Old 05-23-2015, 09:09 PM   #9
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Carpe or Diem? Or did you mean Invitation?



What can you possibly mean?
You're bad you are! But the way he uses it is derogatory, like a woman is just there to be used for him to get his rocks off. It's about the only time I've had penis envy to show him what it's like to be used, but I suppose a good strap on would suffice!
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They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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Old 05-24-2015, 07:24 AM   #10
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You're bad you are! But the way he uses it is derogatory, like a woman is just there to be used for him to get his rocks off. It's about the only time I've had penis envy to show him what it's like to be used, but I suppose a good strap on would suffice!
Gather, a mysogynistic challenge.
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Old 05-24-2015, 01:20 PM   #11
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Talking repost to Carpy Do 'em

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On the eve of fifty
he still chases pussy.
A simple guy who thinks
life is a chance to fuck hot chicks
as much as possible.
If that chance slips by him
it won’t be surprising.
So Carpe Diem young guys!
seize the day and learn
that to fuck chicks as much as possible
won’t work
bcause the cunts will end up
fucking you. ....and not in a good way!
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Old 05-24-2015, 07:52 PM   #12
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Gather, a mysogynistic challenge.
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On the eve of fifty
he still chases pussy.
A simple guy who thinks
life is a chance to fuck hot chicks
as much as possible.
If that chance slips by him
it won’t be surprising.
So Carpe Diem young guys!
seize the day and learn
that to fuck chicks as much as possible
won’t work
bcause the cunts will end up
fucking you. ....and not in a good way!
He's all mouth and no trousers anyway
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Blessed are the cracked for it is they that let in the light
They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
Nil Caborundum illigitimi
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Old 05-24-2015, 10:07 PM   #13
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"repost to Carpy Do 'em" - ROFL!!
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Old 05-24-2015, 11:31 PM   #14
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Now I am old,
I want only to stroke your cheek

as we whisper shared secrets
to each other.
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Old 05-24-2015, 11:51 PM   #15
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Carpy Do 'Em

Cool catfish or guileless guppies
They come swimming by
Hoping for a nibble
Of my slick pink fish
Or on suicide runs
Struggling to get up
My 8 mile wide stream
Hoping to be swallowed whole
And reborn as men
Goddess that I am
I grant their prayers
For a small fee of course
These fishnets ain't free ya know
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Old 05-25-2015, 12:04 AM   #16
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I want only to stroke your cheek

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Carpy Do 'Em

Cool catfish or guileless guppies
They come swimming by
Hoping for a nibble
Of my slick pink fish
Or on suicide runs
Struggling to get up
My 8 mile wide stream
Hoping to be swallowed whole
And reborn as men
Goddess that I am
I grant answer their prayers
For a small fee of course
These fishnets ain't free ya know
Both lovely in their own way.
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Old 05-25-2015, 02:50 PM   #17
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Just a quick thought...

Carpe Diem:
From Sunrise to Sunset
Some time remains.
Wrest what pleasures
May be yet found.

Carpe Penes:
Yes, Maids young or not,
take them softly in hand,
Autumn rose-hips, fruit or
glans in folded sepals.

Carpe Cunnos:
Gently open the drapes,
Grey-Beards, let the last
Rays of Day penetrate
the welcoming sheath.

Carpe Diem:
Thanatos beckons with
crooked finger; let
Eros raise his erect
In final defiance.

(So saith this old man...)
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Old 05-25-2015, 06:01 PM   #18
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Yeah
Motherfucker
Magnetron raps
Doesn't need carpe
Cuz he's got bass
Don't want your stinky tuna sandwich spread
Bitch
Get it the hell out of my face
Listen to my fly flows
Working my angle with a school of young minnows
I bed them in the shallows
Fighting over me
Coming to blows
Giving me hammerhead
Old enough to bleed
Too young to wed
That's right
That's what I said
Stuff that into your blow hole
Hoes
Oh nos
In trouble with the old lady
I gotsta goes
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Old 05-25-2015, 07:20 PM   #19
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Yeah
Motherfucker
Magnetron raps
Doesn't need carpe
Cuz he's got bass
Don't want your stinky tuna sandwich spread
Bitch
Get it the hell out of my face
Listen to my fly flows
Working my angle with a school of young minnows
I bed them in the shallows
Fighting over me
Coming to blows
Giving me hammerhead
Old enough to bleed
Too young to wed
That's right
That's what I said
Stuff that into your blow hole
Hoes
Oh nos
In trouble with the old lady
I gotsta goes
.................
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They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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