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Old 07-02-2014, 10:40 AM   #1
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Who's game for a little summer challenge?

I know some of you are on a productive roll, but there are others who're wandering off smelling the roses and chasing bunnies...

anyone interested, i'll throw out something
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Old 07-02-2014, 10:57 AM   #2
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Me. Yours are usually intriguing, butters.
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Old 07-02-2014, 10:59 AM   #3
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I might be able to give it a go, yes. I'm trying to write more (i.e., anything at all!) here.
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Old 07-02-2014, 11:45 AM   #4
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Old 07-02-2014, 11:47 AM   #5
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best think of something then, hadn't i?
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Old 07-02-2014, 12:34 PM   #6
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Well I am a silly rabbit
flopsy, mopsy or cottontail?
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Old 07-02-2014, 12:47 PM   #8
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it might turn out to be a bit evil...

*thinking....*
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Old 07-02-2014, 12:58 PM   #9
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Old 07-02-2014, 01:17 PM   #10
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silly was never a word i'd have associated with jessica
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Old 07-02-2014, 01:51 PM   #11
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Only a girl who was silly at heart would marry Roger.
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Old 07-02-2014, 03:31 PM   #12
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if others just want to post their pieces as they write them rather than send them on for the guessing-side of the challenge, feel free. i just thought it would add a little more spark to the affair where the board's a little quiet. champer's piece is a perfect example of nuance and angle - a how-to on avoiding the worn phrase.
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Old 07-02-2014, 04:31 PM   #13
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I wouldn't follow my bad example of not following Mistress b's rules though. She can be wicked in punishment. Be wary.
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Old 07-02-2014, 04:49 PM   #14
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I wouldn't follow my bad example of not following Mistress b's rules though. She can be wicked in punishment. Be wary.
rules shmulze - if a poet can't exhibit a bit of individuality, the world would be a sadder place

now, about that punishment....
i've a shed load of weeding needs doing
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rules shmulze - if a poet can't exhibit a bit of individuality, the world would be a sadder place

now, about that punishment....
i've a shed load of weeding needs doing
Weeds and harvest, it all springs from a fertile mind. ermmm... That's not to say you're full of <ahem> well, you know... poop?
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Old 07-03-2014, 02:15 PM   #16
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Weeds and harvest, it all springs from a fertile mind. ermmm... That's not to say you're full of <ahem> well, you know... poop?
*raises an eyebrow*

not quite full... there's still some space at the top. :P

thankyou to those who've already sent their challenge pieces! keep 'em coming.
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Old 07-03-2014, 05:48 PM   #17
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I've just been informed I have until Wednesday if I wish to participate in this rule-less challenge about.... reads back
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Old 07-03-2014, 09:50 PM   #18
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They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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Old 07-06-2014, 06:51 AM   #21
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had quite a few pieces in already and there are some i'm expecting soon

anyone else interested? just bumping this in case some haven't seen it yet.


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had quite a few pieces in already and there are some i'm expecting soon

anyone else interested? just bumping this in case some haven't seen it yet.


Interested, but got stalled when working on something this morning. We'll see how it goes. What's the cut-off on Wed (that might be the next chance I have to really work on anything)?


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Old 07-06-2014, 09:17 AM   #23
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Interested, but got stalled when working on something this morning. We'll see how it goes. What's the cut-off on Wed (that might be the next chance I have to really work on anything)?


wednesday midnight. so my thursday day time i'll put up what i have been sent.
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Old 07-09-2014, 07:27 AM   #24
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so come on all of you who mean to slip one into butter's box before midnight

i'm planning on posting up all those i've received before leaving for work tomorrow morning, so by 8am UK time. there're a few outstanding that i've been expecting, so don't let me down.

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Old 07-09-2014, 07:29 AM   #25
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as for those that've found their way into butty's box, may i say i love the imagination, the heart, the breadth of them all. it's most satisfying - but imma greedy girl and want more!
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