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Hey folks

The next chapter of Night Eternal is up.

Two best friends, Ryan and Coby, have known each other since just after they were born. One night after a wild night at the club, Coby goes missing, and is eventually presumed dead. Well they are half right, as Coby becomes tangled up in the mafia, among other things, and is trapped by obligation he never wanted. Now all that Coby wants is to get back to his best friend. If only his two thousand year old Vampire boss would let him…

In this chapter, Coby finds another new friend, and has a run in with an old one.

This is one of those Stories that happens to have sex in it. The primary goal is the story, not the sex... however, that said... the sex get pretty steamy. I encourage you to give it a read. If gay fiction is not your thing, thats cool too. You might like the Prologue though... there is a kiss at the end, but otherwise is a set up chapter and has no sex in it.

Here is the latest chapter:
Night Eternal, Chapter 4: Reunions


Or if you have not read any of the story yet here is the first chapter:
Night Eternal, Prologue: A Thief in the Night


Thanks for you time

Joshua