I've just finished a new story that is a COMPLETELY different direction for me as a writer. I was looking for a little constructive feedback, as most of the comments I receive are more along the lines of "can I see your tits?" or "that made me hard...want to relieve the pressure?"
Which, to be clear, both are a definite "no."
This is the first that isn't along the wham-bam-thank you ma'am variety of an erotica story. Don't get me wrong - I love 'em and enjoy writing them. But I wanted to try to write something with a story line and clear character buildup.
So if anybody feels like reading and commenting, I'd be much obliged.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=414376
"Curly," in Erotic Couplings.
Thanks much.
<3 Ellabee
Which, to be clear, both are a definite "no."
This is the first that isn't along the wham-bam-thank you ma'am variety of an erotica story. Don't get me wrong - I love 'em and enjoy writing them. But I wanted to try to write something with a story line and clear character buildup.
So if anybody feels like reading and commenting, I'd be much obliged.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=414376
"Curly," in Erotic Couplings.
Thanks much.
<3 Ellabee