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^Aki Lin

Aki Lin brought into this world in the beginning of the autumn months and her parents graced her with a name meaning just that. I was always her favorite time of year when the leaves of green would turn a bright golden brown and with flow from the trees as if they were raining from the sky. As the years passed by she grew into one of the most beautiful girls in her village and one of the purest. Her days were filled with happiness and wonder but it didn't stay that way for long. Her village had gone to war against a nearby one that took most of their food not even paying them enough for what it was worth and they were tired of being taken advantage of. No matter how just their reason for the war was they were still loosing because the other village was much stronger then their own and they turn to the one person that could help them

They began to pray to the patron God for help and wisdom to win their war but their prayers went unanswered. They began to become desperate and in their desperation they took Aki from her family. She was the purest in their village and if they were to offer her purity to their god he would have to answer their prayers but it was on her purity that would be given not the child herself.

Aki certainly couldn't saw no to the village, such a sacrifice would help them to win their war and it would bring honor to her family so she agreed. They dressed her in the villages' finest Kimono, painting her face and body white to symbolize her virginity. Normally her long black hair lay free over her shoulders but it was pulled back now into a tight bun and several cherry blossoms were stuck in her hair to match the cherry blossoms on her kimono. They carried her in a richly decorated carriage moving her inside the gods temple and closed the doors behind her.

It was when she heard the doors close behind her did she finally open her eyes, the room was lit with candles that surrounded the statue of their God and she let her eyes move over it. She hopped that she would be enough for him to finally answer their prayers and she worried because of her purity if she would be fulfilling to him.
 
In his existence, he had been given many different names by the humans that worshiped and feared him. But in the Ways of the Heavens, the first Name the humans gave him would be his for Eternity, regardless of what other names he was given. The first Human who saw him named him Akai Kami - Red God.

His hair was the colour of flame, and his skin was more red than the golden hue of the peoples that lived on the lands. In his natural form, he stood 8 feet tall, and was human in his shape. Again, the first human shaped him too.

Over time, the local people called on him to aid them, and they gifted him as was his due. But he could not help them as much as they needed, because of the Laws of Heaven. But they were his, and looked after them as he could.

Now, they were in a war with another village, one that had abused his people. They took their fight to them, but the fight was not going well for his people. He felt them calling out to Him for His aid. He could feel them gather the offering they would give to him. He heard their decision of what would be offered - the virtue of their fairest maiden. Indeed, it would be a worthy sacrifice and it would bring His aid to them in their need.

He felt the maiden moving closer to the house they made to honour Him in. He could feel their anxiety, their fear that their sacrifice would not be worthy. He could feel her heart, her fear, her pride. He felt them carry her into His house, leaving her before His image, departing quickly.

She was dressed in the finest clothing, mostly in red as he was. Her delicate face was shaded white to show her purity. A purity she felt might not be able to please him enough. He was delighted at their offering. But it was important that the Maiden make the offer herself, freely with her heart.

There was one more Law that Akai Kami had to obey. He gathered His power, and brought himself forth into the world of men.

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Outside the temple he stood, gazing around. He had... other thoughts in his head. He recognized the lands about him, but he didn't. He knew that there was a woman within that awaited him. He walked into the strange building... his temple... to find the young woman... his sacrifice.

His leather boots crunched across the ground, his leather breeches were a dull brown, as was the rough fabric shirt that covered his fair skin. His hazel eyes took in the surrounds while the breeze ruffled his rich auburn hair. He climbed the stairs, then entered the main room. His solid 6' frame filled the doorway as he saw her for the first time... through these eyes.

He stopped and looked upon the Maiden he had been sent to find.
 
Aki had waited so long, she spent her time praying to her god that he would could and except her offering. Her village depended on her and if he didn't come it would be all on her, she would fail her family. She had almost give up until she heard the should of foot steps out side the temple and she turned her gaze behind her at the doors. It was curious to her, why would such a powerful god appear to her and walk through the front door. She moved her hand over her eyes now to block out the sunlight as the doors were opened, she could see a form walking in but soon it disappeared once the doors were closed again.

She moved her hand away from her dark eyes now and she searched the room for who had come in. "Hello..." she called out, she could hear his boots on the floor but the dim light of the candle hid his form and she wondered why he kept himself hidden. She caught part of his form in the candle light now taking in his hazel eyes and his auburn hair as he stood there in the doorway. "Who...who are you?" she asked now as she sat there on the bed the villagers had prepared for the act that would bring her village the help they needed.
 
"Hello, Aki Lin." The word that came from his lips sounded wrong, but he understood them. Quiet, vessel, and learn. "You do not recognise the mortal shell of your God?!?" He stepped forward, coming into full view of the maiden. She was interesting... a worthy offering, and he sensed her lack of confidence... her purity. "Since you are here to offer me something that is not you, I cannot accept your offer in my true form for that would end your life, so I have this form." His hands pointed from his head, all the way down to his feet.

He walked forward, and placed a crooked finger under her chin, helping her to stand. He looked down into the dark eyes, as if reading her soul. He felt her shiver under his gaze. He felt the welter of confused emotions wash over her.

"Do you come here willingly, Aki Lin? Do you freely give the offering that has been decided?"

He paused. "Are you worthy of the honour of making the sacrifice, Aki Lin?"
 
Aki watched as the figure drew closer, her eyes widened now as he explained why he appeared to her in such a form instead of the one she was so use to praying to. "I'm sorry My Lord...i didn't at first." She began to grow even more nervous now that he had arrived to take what she was here to give him and she played with the sleeve of her Kimono. He moved closer to her stopping just before the bed and she could see him fulling now. He placed a crooked finger under her chin helping her to slide off the bed and stand on her raised shoes.

She looked up into his eyes with her own, his gaze caused her body to shiver gently and she was filled with some many emotions at once it confused her. "I come here willingly..." she said softly now her lips painted a bright red the same shade as her kimono, "I give this gift of my own free will, it would be a honor to give it to you." She said blushing a bit but it couldn't be seen under the pale paint that covered her body, "I am the only one worthy of this honor, i have never been touched by a man...not even my father for a hug."
 
Akai Kami walked away from her, going over to a darkened recess. here was the faintest sounds of pottery scraping on stone. He returned to where Aki Lin stood.

"Hold this," he commanded softly, handing her a bowl full of water. Once she held the bowl, he took out a piece of cloth, and gently washed away the white makeup on her face. "I know of your purity, Aki Lin. There is no need for you to tell it to me with your face. I wished to see your skin properly." Once her face was cleaned, he took the bowl from her, and replaced it in the recess.

"Now, Aki Lin, before I accept the offering your village has given me, I would see you dance for me." He walked over to the bed, sitting himself down. He clapped his hands once, loudly. Soft sounds of music wafted through the room. Akai Kami watched Aki Lin closely, waiting for her to commence her dancing.
 
Aki's eyes followed him as he stepped away from her disappearing into the darkness, he could hear the sounds of scraping pottery on stone and she looked at him shyly. She reached out to take the bowl full of water from him holding it up so it was within her reach, he took out a piece of cloth dipping it into the water and running it across her face to wash her makeup away. The cool water over her face made a soft chill run down her spine and she relaxed her hands in front of her as he took the bowl from her.

She turned slowly as he came back to her and sat down on the bed were she had been sitting waiting for him before. She blushed as he asked her if she would dance for him and when it clapped the room with fill with music that seemed to come from nowhere. She moved back a few steps reaching into her kimono to pull out two red fans, she wasn't the best dance but she knew enough to at least please him. She closed her eyes now and began to move ever so gracefully to the music that surrounded her. She moved almost as if she was a leaf caught in the wind being blown so fluidly through the air and she didn't stop until the music did.

Aki stood straight now folding her fans and placing them back in her kimono. "Did that please you My Lord?" she asked now a bit out of breath with her cheeks slightly flushed.
 
Akai Kami watched as Aki Lin drew out two red fans from within her Kimono and started to dance. It was as he had hoped. She was graceful, delicate and full of life. She would do well with her offering when the time came for her to give it.

He waited until the right moment, and ended the music. She stood still for a few seconds, her breathing the only noise in the room. She closed her fans, returning them to where they belonged.

"Did that please you My Lord?"

"Indeed it did," he replied. The flush to her cheeks reminded him of what was going to occur, and that same flush would be elsewhere on her body. The thoughts stirred the mortal flesh into action. He stood up, and walked over to where Aki Lin stood. He reached out, and undid the bindings that held the Kimono in place. With great care he removed the clothing from her body, letting it pool on the ground behind her. He then let her hair down, some of the blossoms falling to the ground as well. He took a step back to look at her newly revealed body.

"It is now time, Aki Lin, for you to make the offering the village has given to me." He took her hand, leading her back to the bed. As they reached the side of the bed, he took her face gently in his hands, and he kissed her softly.

"Have no fear, Aki Lin. Not many women have a God for their first time." He kissed her again, this time with more passion that the first. This time, she could feel his manhood pressing against her flesh through his breeches.
 
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Aki's smiled softly, he was please with her dancing and she watched him as he stood up to walk over to her. She tensed as he reached out and untied the ribbons that held her kimono in place. He peeled layer of layer off her letting it fall down and pool at her feet. She stood there naked before him her pale skin glowing in the candle light as he reached out to let her hair down. She could feel the blossoms fall out of her hair and she blushed deeply as he stepped back to look at her.

She followed him as he took her hand and led her back to stand besides the bed. He took her face into his hand and moved her so he could press his lips against her own. It was a short kiss not giving her much time to react and she looked up at him as he told her to have no fear. When he kissed her again it was filled with passion and she couldn't help but to return his kiss filled with just as much passion. She blushed even deeper now as she could feel his manhood pressing against her and she grew nervous.
 
He took a step back from her, and pulled off his shirt. The chest was well muscled, and sat underneath broad shoulders. His arms were well formed, thick enough to show his strength would being overly large. His abdomen was flat, with the faintest signs of a washboard. But what was fascinating was the colour of the skin - white. Not white as snow, but it was not the golden hues of her people.

He shucked off his boots, then pulled on a knot at the front of his breeches. The breeches didn't drop far, as they were held up my his erection. He pulled the clothing off his erection, and the breeches fell to the floor. He stepped out of them totally naked, just like Aki Lin.

He walked up to where she stood. He reached out, and guided one of her hands to touch his shaft. She flinched at the initial contact. "Aki Lin, touch it, hold it, explore it with your fingers. Know it, Aki Lin, for that is the instrument which your offering will be taken. The more you know of it, the less fear you will have." He made sure that her hand was wrapped around his shaft before he left go of her hand.
 
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Aki watched him as he took a step back from her to pull his shirt, his chest held such muscles that she wanted to reach out and run her fingers over them but she stood still were she was. His skin was unlike anything she had ever seen, she had seen some people that were almost as place as coal but never someone as white as he was. Her eyes moved down as he pulled his boots off and them untied his pants to have them drop to the floor. Her body tensed as his erection stood there in front of her hard and ready to take her.

He walked up to her which made her grow nervous now and he reached out to guild one of her hands to touch his shaft. She flinched when he placed it there and she gripped it lightly. Her eyes moved up to lock onto his own as he spoke, she let her fingers move over it taking in the shape and how large as well as long it was.
 
The more her hand moved around his engorged shaft, the more pleasurable the activity became. Soon, he was moaning and groaning, enjoying the feel of her hand.

"Now, we need to get you ready for what will be done." He removed her hand from him, and laid her down on the bed. He leaned down, and kissed her again, slowly, passionately. He trailed kisses down her cheek, neck and onto her chest. He was her small, firm breasts as he kissed his way towards them. Once he actually reached her breast, he kissed all of it, licking it as well. He finally reached her nipple, licking and flicking it with his tongue. He finally took it in his mouth, sucking it gently at first, then drawing on it harder. He stopped to check the state of her nipple, seeing it was hard. He took it in his teeth, slowly rolling it with his teeth and tongue.

His low moans told her that he was enjoying what was happening. He glanced at her face to see how she was reacting to what he was doing.
 
His moaning and groaning was making her blush as well as to smile knowing that she was able to make him feel good. Her eyes moved to lock into his as he spoke, he moved his a hand off him and laid her down on the bed. She moaned against his lips as he kissed her again passionately this time and slow. His kisses moved down to her cheek, then down her neck and then to her chest. Her stomach muscles tensed as he drew closer to her breast and when he did she let out a soft sigh.

Once he reached her soft mounds he kissed them and licked around them. When he reached her nipple she arched her back and gasped soft. His tongue flicked across it then took it into his mouth to suck on it gently and then harder. She moved her head off to the side closing her eyes to enjoy what he was making her feel when his teeth and his tongue began to rolled her nipple around. Her hands moved to grip the bedding underneath them, she had never felt something like this before and her body was trembling softly from it all.
 
Akai Kami took great pleasure at the reactions of Aki Lin. She was letting her body tell her what was good and what was not, rather than her mind interfering as was common for many woman. Still, there was more to be done before the offering was accepted.

He continued his kissing of her body, moving from the delicious breasts, down onto her flat belly tracing his lips and tongue across her torso. He stated the first signs of sweat which added a delightful savoury tang to her skin.

Ashe reached her hips, he used his hands to part her legs. He caught the faintest aroma of her sex, as well as seeing it starting to swell and soften. He smiled as he turned his attention to her inner thighs. He kissed and nipped her soft flesh from her knee up to where the thigh joined her body, then repeated it for the other leg.

Again, her movements in response to his actions, and the sounds that escaped her lips spoke well of her. The offering would be potent indeed if she kept responding in the same manner for the rest of the act.

"Consider this my thanks to you, Aki Lin, for your sacrifice," he spoke before his lips descended to her mound.
 
She gasped softly for a bit of air as he moved down from her breast to kiss over her flat belly and she shivered softly as his tongue ran over her skin. Her body was growing hot slowly and small bead of sweat was forming on her pale skin. She began to grow nervous as he drew closer to the area between her legs and she turned her head to look down at him with lust in her eyes.

She didn't fight him as his hands moved to part her legs and she blushed deeply. She began to grow a bit damp now as he kissed the inside of her thighs moving from her knee up to her hip and then made the same trail over the other. She gripped the bed tighter now, she didn't understand what he was doing to her body but he was driving her crazy.

Aki looked down to him as he spoke, she wondered what it was that he was going to reward her with and when his lips pressed against her mound she gasped out arching her back in the strange sensation. She didn't know what to say to him nor did she know if she should really say anything and she simply let him know it felt good by moaning softly.
 
Fortunate is the one to taste the nectar of the flower's first blossoming. No other individual had taken the dew from the flowery flesh of Aki Lin, and Akai Kami took his time tasting every drop. He slowly swept clean the skin surrounding, then he lick and kissed the sensitive folds that hide her greater treasures.

Aki Lin's body shuddered with the touches of his lips and tongue on her outer edges. She moaned, cried and whimpered as he continued to delve deeper. The his tongue found the tiny nub hidden under her hood. He delicately and soft touched it with the tip of his tongue. Aki Lin's body rocked with each touch, her cries more vocal. He then flicked it, rubbed it with his tongue while he also took her folds into his mouth, pressing down on them with his lips.

He took a pause from his efforts with his tongue and mouth, and let his fingers explore. On hand returned to her sensitive spot, while the other found her entrance. His fingers there ran around the edges of the opening, feeling the tension in the muscles keep the entry way firmly closed.

Akai Kami decided he would not risk letting his fingers go further. The instrument that the Gods made to go in there would be the first part of him to enter in there. The sacrifice would not be spoiled because he was gaining too much enjoyment and pleasure from the one making the sacrifice.

"Aki Lin, are you glad that you made this offer to me?"
 
Aki's back stayed arched for a few moments as he ran his tongue over her sensitive flesh, it was unlike anything she had ever felt before and when she began to grow a bit use to them she let her back rest against the bed once more. His tongue danced over her folds and her body shuddered with each and every touch of his lips. His tongue continued to travel and when it hit her little nub she cried out as a wave of pleasure traveled quickly over her body leaving her breathless. She was in shock at how good it felt and when he flicked it her body seemed to stiffen up refusing to move. She seemed to hold her breath unable to think or how to react and as he continued his movements her body shivered.

Whimpers, moans, groans and gasps escaped her soft lips. She gasped out for more air as each breath began to rush out of her, she let her head rolls to the side her long black hair fanned out around it and she lay there with her chest rising and falling quickly as she began to feel something building inside of her. It felt so strange to her like every bit of pleasure she was feeling was building in the pit of her stomach, his fingers ran around her opening and her body tensed in her nervousness. She began to move around on the bed as he continued his actions on her sex, his fingers move over her nub while his tongue continued to lick her but as he stopped to speak to her she felt like she could finally breath.

"Yes....yes my Lord i am." She wouldn't wish at all that she had changed her mind and said no to her village after all of this.
 
Akai Kami smiled, and removed his hands from her sensitive place. His lips and tongue however returned, and continued their dance with her body. He sensed how close she was to her first ever orgasm, and he wanted her to know how much he appreciated her offering her greatest treasure to him. The villagers would reap a great bounty from this offering Aki Lin was making, and it was only fair that she be rewarded personally.

He started to feel the changes in her body's reactions she she crept ever so closer to another first for her. Her body stiffened and twisted, he could sense her fear and excitement at what as happening, along with the uncertainty of what would actually occur. He followed her body where it went, not restrict her movements, but not letting her escape the sensations that were battering her mind and body.

He knew it would be any moment now....
 
Aki seemed to hold her breath again as his lips and tongue returned to continue what they were doing. Her body was growing hot so very fast and beads of sweat began to pool on her body as the pleasure continued to build inside of her. She tried to move to stop his actions that was driving her crazy but he moved with her not letting her escape the sensations, she felt like something inside of her was going to explode and she lay there panting as it grew and grew.

She began to pant faster and faster her stomach muscles tensing several times as he moved over her sex. Suddenly her body grew tense as that build of pleasure finally busted and wave after wave moved over her body making it tremble. She was in a sence of shock at first and then suddenly she arched her back screaming out in a pleasure she had never known until now. Her mind seemed to go numb, she couldn't think straight as her body began to twitch and her back lay against the bed once more.

When she began to come down from her high her body grew still the only thing moving was her chest as it rose and fell quickly because of her quick breaths. She lay there her head off to the side her limps unmoving and her mind lost in a fog of pleasure. Soon her chest began to rise and fall slower and slower as the moments passed by. She didn't know what to say to him so she said the first thing she could think of,"....thank....you....My....Lord...." she said still a bit breathless.
 
Akai Kami pulled back from Aki Lin when her climax struck. He wanted to watch as she experienced her first ever, and neither did he want interfere with her enjoyment of it. He saw her body covered with a light layer of sweat, as well as her sex thoroughly soaked from her climax. He saw her go limp, and ride on the aftermath of her own personal earthquake.

"....thank....you....My....Lord...."

"You are welcome, Aki Lin. You should receive some personal reward for what you are about to do." Akai Kami proceed to climb up onto the bed, positioning himself over her. He looked down into her dark eyes, his own full of the lust and knowledge of what was about to occur.

"Aki Lin, to start with there will be pain as you go from being a girl to being a woman. That will mark the first part of your offer being accepted. The final part you will also feel, which will be my acceptance of your offering.

"This is the last time you will have the chance to change your mind, Aki Lin. If you wish to not make the sacrifice for your village, say so now. Once I start, I shall not stop until the offer is fully accepted."
 
Aki moved her head now so she could look down at him and watched as he climbed up onto the bed over top of her. She blushed as he looked down into her eyes, the way he looked at her just then sent shivers over her body and her body ached for him to touch her again. She listened to his words now, she was scared of the pain but the promise of feel that pleasure again and the fact that she could finally be a women was wonderful.

She looked away from him now as he gave her another chance to say no to making the offering, she though of it for a moment but she couldn't do that to her village and they depended on her. She turned to look at him once more, "Its a honor to give such a gift to you My Lord for my village"
 
Akai Kami rejoiced at her words. His very celestial spirit rang with the knowledge that the offering was worthy, and freely given with full knowledge. He bent down and kissed her softly on the lips as he guided himself into her. He felt the outer ring of muscles clench tighter from the unknown intruder. He slowly pushed against them, forcing them to yield to his instrument's manhood. He continued slowly moving further into her, the soft, wet walls tightly gripping him until the tip reached the Virgin's Wall. He moved his body forward, and he kissed her again, passionately this time, tasting of her deeply for the first time.

With one sudden sharp push, he broke through the wall quickly, pausing while her pain passed. In his spirit, Akai Kami felt the sacrifice made, and the offering was passed to him. The sacrifice's taste the sweetest his spirit have ever been given. He waited a little longer as Aki Lin's body stopped gripping him so hard. He proceeded to push all the way into Aki Lin, pleased that the young woman was able to take everything his instrument had.

He let Aki Lin feel what it was like to be filled by a man in the way that only a woman could.
 
Aki watched him now as he bend over her and took her lips into a soft kiss. Her body tensed as he moved himself out side her sex, her hands moved to his shoulders now gripping them gently as he slowly began to push inside of her and she tried to will herself to relax. She broke their kiss letting her head roll back as she gasped out now that he moved farther inside of her and he seemed to stop for a moment. Her breath was almost taken away as the kissed her once more deeply, her mind went hazy as she closed her eyes to return it.

She cried out against his kiss as he push inside of her sharply now breaking through her well and she winced in her pain. She could feel the pain moved over her body now and a small amount of blood ran from around him. She breathed softly as he gave her time to wait for the pain to pass and soon enough it had. She let her body relax now as it worked to make room for him inside of her and her grip on him relaxed a bit. She looked up at him now as he began to push all the way inside of her and she gasped out arching her back a bit.

She couldn't believe how good it felt to have him inside of her filling her, she ached to feel him begin to move in and out of her but she was till scared.
 
"Shhhh, Aki Lin. There is no need to be scared anymore. The worst of the sacrifice is now passed. The rest shall be a pleasure for you, as you start your journey to being a woman."

Akai Kami kissed her as he started to slowly move within her. Short, slow thrusts he used first, to get her used to the feel of him moving in side of her. It would also allow her follow the rhythm, and make the experience even better for her. After she started to become a participant in the act, he started to take longer strokes, then a little faster, a little longer, faster until he was using his full length and he was going at a good speed.

Akai Kami did not use his voice at all. No grunts, groans, moans or other signs of enjoyment than a person would make. But the expression on his face and the feel of his body clearly told of what he felt. Akai Kami was very, very pleased with the offering he had been given.
 
His words seemed to calm the pain within her body, she let her back fall against the soft fabric of the bed and her eyes moved to lock into his own just before his lips pressed against her own once more. She moved her hands to grip his arms as he began to slowly move inside of her, he took care to move slow and gentle to give her time to get use to the feeling. It hurt mostly at first but soon it began to shift to pleasure and she could no longer even remember the pain.

Aki's soft lips move against his own in kiss with such passion it surprised herself, her grip on his arms held firm as he began to take longer strokes moving a bit faster and each time moving more of his length inside of her. As his full length with moving inside of her at a wonderious speed moans began to tumble over her lips between their kisses and she began to move her own body against his own as it cried out for more attention.

She couldn't seemed to breath right as it began to pick up and she had to break their kiss in order to get enough air into her lungs. Her moans grew louder now with out his mouth on hers to muffle them, she grew concerned because he didn't make sounds of enjoyment like herself but as she looked up at him she could see the enjoyment on his face.
 
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