Fantasy story:lesbian erotic hell

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I want to write a story: Lesbian erotic hell, this strory is similar to Dante's Divine Comedy.

A man die,his Soul enter a strange hell. The hell no man,but women only! A lesbian BDSM world! He see women whip women.women rape wemen,even women pregnant for women.

1 when he reach First Circle of hell, he see many naked women In the riverside. These women cry and whiped by female Boatman of hell.

2 when he reach Second Circle,he see many strong women with wing ,fly in the sky,they pursue and capture the small women on the ground.The small women cry and resistance,but unhelpful.

3 when he reach Third Circle, he see some women who flesh connect with tree. they are root in the ground.These women are lesbian.

4 when he reach Fourth Circle, he see a scene shocking him. His wife's flesh connect with a strong women. They were suspended on the cliff with wind of hell blowing their flesh. He ask his wife go home with he,but his wife said that she was fall love in the women,she would rather became
conjoined twins in the next life than go home with him!

5 when he reach Fifth Circle, he see many women centaur,they are whip by female Soldiers.The hell was full of cry.He see the hill compose with hug women Breast……

6 in the Sixth Circle,he came to a river. The river is component by the semen of women.Many women were thrown into the river,they become pregnant……

etc……I have not completely the idea,but the more down the more abnormal ……

7 The man reach Seventh level of hell, he found the land was separate by a deep gulch.

On the right land,there are many hug,strong and naked women,their body is composed of gold and iron.These women have no hair,they are bald and showed that the wild. The strong women pushing the big rock year after year,can not rest.

On the left land,many young and beautiful bride standing on edge of Canyon,they are nake,only white,transparent veil wrap their lower body.They looking those strong women but can not close to them.

8 Eighth level of hell, he reach the land which is named virgin bottle. All the women on the land was virgin.They are nake,only white,transparent veil wrap their lower body.Each virgin is holding a bottle,which full of their juice----the virgin juice,for the famale devil bath. Each virgin put the bottle on the head,and go to the land center

on the center of this land , there is a hug Bathtub. A strong,Bronzed female devil bath in it. The shy virgin standing in Bathtub,pour their bottle juice on the female devil's strong shoulder.The virgin veil is wet……

9 when he reach Ninth level,he see many huge flower. The petal is composed of woman's body. These women due to fuck too much,so their lower body was connected each other.
 
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I want to write a story: Lesbian erotic hell, this strory is similar to Dante's Divine Comedy.

A man die,his Soul enter a strange hell. The hell no man,but women only! A lesbian BDSM world! He see women whip women.women rape wemen,even women pregnant for women.

1 when he reach First Circle of hell, he see many naked women In the riverside. These women cry and whiped by female Boatman of hell.

2 when he reach Second Circle,he see many strong women with wing ,fly in the sky,they pursue and capture the small women on the ground.The small women cry and resistance,but unhelpful.

3 when he reach Third Circle, he see some women who flesh connect with tree. they are root in the ground.These women are lesbian.

4 when he reach Fourth Circle, he see a scene shocking him. His wife's flesh connect with a strong women. They were suspended on the cliff with wind of hell blowing their flesh. He ask his wife go home with he,but his wife said that she was fall love in the women,she would rather became
conjoined twins in the next life than go home with him!

5 when he reach Fifth Circle, he see many women centaur,they are whip by female Soldiers.The hell was full of cry.He see the hill compose with hug women Breast……

6 in the Sixth Circle,he came to a river. The river is component by the semen of women.Many women were thrown into the river,they become pregnant……

etc……I have not completely the idea,but the more down the more abnormal ……
OMG, that is such a great idea!
I don't know about the Siamese twins/next life thing or the centaur women, but that can easily be taken care of.
Of course Succubi must be in this.
This is from the second circle (which is actually level, not circle), but ties in with the river of sperm on the 6th level.
The naked women appear as women from a distance, but they are not women at all.
They are like witches (magic devil worshipers), but they are actually sea hags (the blinded, all seeing Gorgan sisters meets evil water nymphs).
Sea hags can often be found accompanied by Harpies (hybrid vultures with a woman's head and chest and a banshee's screech).
 
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Interesting.

Do you intend to explain why the different women are being punished in different ways like Dante did?

And do you have an explanation for why the guy went there instead ofwherever he was supposed to?
 
Interesting.

Do you intend to explain why the different women are being punished in different ways like Dante did?

And do you have an explanation for why the guy went there instead ofwherever he was supposed to?
It's his punishment for being a real slime towards the ladies.
1: A porn addict who can never get any,
2: being tortured because of wife beating, and
3: because he was such a sleaze, the female creatures assigned to his case are not attractive at all, and make sexual advances towards him.
 
Oh thank all who love my story.These scene have appears in my mind for a long time. I have a very heated passion to write it.

For similar to Dante's Divine Comedy,the hell have 18 Circle(or level),the more down the more erotic. I have only write 6 level,but the down is exciting……
 
Oh thank all who love my story.These scene have appears in my mind for a long time. I have a very heated passion to write it.

For similar to Dante's Divine Comedy,the hell have 18 Circle(or level),the more down the more erotic. I have only write 6 level,but the down is exciting……
I see what you mean, a spiral staircase (Roman myth interpretation)!
The Greek myth interpretation of hell (or Hades) is just a wide chasm that narrows into a near "bottomless" pit, only with narrow ledges to mark the way (wide tunnel just above ledge).
 
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It's his punishment for being a real slime towards the ladies.
But then he'd belong in a hell for male slimeballs.

My thoughts are that this should either:

-Be some sort of bureaucratic mixup.

OR

-He was virtuous in life, but perverse at heart, and he's being rewarded by being able to enjoy his voyeuristic fantasies of lesbian S&M.
 
But then he'd belong in a hell for male slimeballs.

My thoughts are that this should either:

-Be some sort of bureaucratic mixup.

OR

-He was virtuous in life, but perverse at heart, and he's being rewarded by being able to enjoy his voyeuristic fantasies of lesbian S&M.
OMG, you just reminded me of that movie with Adam Sandler.
He's the son of Lucifer who's retiring and Sandler has to find his dad's replacement.
Sandler's brother (not human) is like a big time lawyer of hell who found a loophole his clients used to escape and reek havoc on Earth.

I think a punishment with your mix up would make a nice comedy.
 
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The man reach Seventh level of hell, he found the land was separate by a deep gulch.

On the right land,there are many hug,strong and naked women,their body is composed of gold and iron.These women have no hair,they are bald and showed that the wild. The strong women pushing the big rock year after year,can not rest.

On the left land,many young and beautiful bride standing on edge of Canyon,they are nake,only white,transparent veil wrap their lower body.They looking those strong women but can not close to them.
 
Eighth level of hell, he reach the land which is named virgin bottle. All the women on the land was virgin.They are nake,only white,transparent veil wrap their lower body.Each virgin is holding a bottle,which full of their juice----the virgin juice,for the famale devil bath. Each virgin put the bottle on the head,and go to the land center

on the center of this land , there is a hug Bathtub. A strong,Bronzed female devil bath in it. The shy virgin standing in Bathtub,pour their bottle juice on the female devil's strong shoulder.The virgin veil is wet……
 
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when he reach Ninth level,he see many huge flower. The petal is composed of woman's body. These women due to fuck too much,so their lower body was connected each other.
 
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The man reach Seventh level of hell, he found the land was separate by a deep gulch.

On the right land,there are many hug,strong and naked women,their body is composed of gold and iron.These women have no hair,they are bald and showed that the wild. The strong women pushing the big rock year after year,can not rest.

On the left land,many young and beautiful bride standing on edge of Canyon,they are nake,only white,transparent veil wrap their lower body.They looking those strong women but can not close to them.
Eighth level of hell, he reach the land which is named virgin bottle. All the women on the land was virgin.They are nake,only white,transparent veil wrap their lower body.Each virgin is holding a bottle,which full of their juice----the virgin juice,for the famale devil bath. Each virgin put the bottle on the head,and go to the land center

on the center of this land , there is a hug Bathtub. A strong,Bronzed female devil bath in it. The shy virgin standing in Bathtub,pour their bottle juice on the female devil's strong shoulder.The virgin veil is wet……
when he reach Ninth level,he see many huge flower. The petal is composed of woman's body. These women due to fuck too much,so their lower body was connected each other.
There are only 9 levels of hell, so stop there.
You need a good editor for your broken English, but you have some good ideas here.

I like the idea of a she devil who must bathe in virgin semen rather than skinny dip in the river of sperm.
Presumably the bottled semen (which is a joke in itself, like buying bottled water for your bath) is female while sperm in the river is male.
 
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