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Old 09-24-2008, 12:43 AM   #1
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Edward and Bella from the Twilight series

This is a great series of books. Very romantic, very passionate. But they build up so much to the first time Edward and Bella have sex and then they gloss over it. What a rip. I would really like to see what someone from here who is familiar with the books can come up with.
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Old 09-24-2008, 01:11 AM   #2
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I've read the books several times... they are my favorites. Well... Twilight is my favorite.

I've been thinking about writing the "sex scene" that was missing from Breaking Dawn. I can let you know when I post it if you'd like?

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Old 09-24-2008, 01:26 PM   #3
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Please do

I would love to read what you come up with. Let me know when it's ready!
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Old 09-24-2008, 08:01 PM   #4
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I'm happy to be a guinea pig for a draft also. I felt totally ripped off by the "glossing over" of the whole situation.

I know none of you guys know me, but you will come to very soon. I'm becoming a contributing member now.
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Old 09-24-2008, 11:09 PM   #5
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LOL, I'm glad to know I'm not the only one who thought there should have been more than a passionate embrace followed by them waking up the next morning. I can't wait to read the stories everyone comes up with.
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Old 09-24-2008, 11:14 PM   #6
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Well from what we do know about the aftermath, if I recall correctly, it might be pretty um, abrupt.?. Who knows, I might try my hand at a draft myself.
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Old 10-16-2008, 03:02 AM   #7
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I was just wondering if anyone had a chance to tackle this one yet...
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Old 10-16-2008, 11:29 PM   #8
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Smile I can't wait

I absoloutley love the Twilight series and if someone were to write some love scenes between Edward and Bella I would totally read it! PLEASE let me know when you finish it! Also, has anyone ever thought of doing a storyline between Jasper and Alice?
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Old 10-17-2008, 03:07 AM   #9
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I loved the Twilight series!

but i wanted sex! lol
there were a lot of things she could've done
with the story, it would've made it better i think.

so let me know if someone does write something,
i'd love to read it!

great topic for a thread btw
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Old 11-16-2008, 12:27 AM   #10
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I hope someone will decide to give this one a try. I am not much of a writer myself, but I think this would make a really great story!
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Old 11-21-2008, 06:35 PM   #11
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This is a great series of books. Very romantic, very passionate. But they build up so much to the first time Edward and Bella have sex and then they gloss over it. What a rip. I would really like to see what someone from here who is familiar with the books can come up with.
Even though the series is kind of a girl thing, I enjoyed them too. I wouldn't take a stab at writing it, but I've seen some fanlit online with any kind of combinations you could imagine...including homo and gang. I shant post any URLs here but if you Google it I'd imagine you could find it.

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Old 11-22-2008, 01:11 AM   #12
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Have any of you watched True Blood on HBO? It is definatly more mature sexually then Twilight.
Add me to the list of people who would love to read the sex scene in Breaking Dawn written a little more explicit.
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Old 11-22-2008, 10:34 AM   #13
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I just read that Breaking Dawn scene this morning (had to wait for my daughter to get the book back from her umpteen friends who've borrowed it), and I totally agree that it could have been a bit more, um, detailed. I wasn't even completely sure they'd done it at first.

Then again, to me it seems almost blasphemous to mess with Edward and Bella, but that's just me.
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Old 11-29-2008, 02:43 AM   #14
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oooooh I Luhuuve Twilight

I've really been thinking about a much dirtier twist on things
I love the contrast b/t gentle and icy Edward vs. rugged and scorching Jacob


threesome anyone?

that lucky, clumsy, helpless, kinda needy Bella
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Old 11-29-2008, 10:49 AM   #15
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A threesome among Bella, Edward, and Jacob has the potential to be pretty humorous, given Bella's innate clutziness...
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I loved the Twilight series as well, but I have to post this:

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Thats Awesome ^^^^^^
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Old 12-05-2008, 10:00 PM   #18
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That is funny. I totally love the idea of a threesome with Edward, Bella & Jacob. I'm surprised that no one has done anything like this yet, as popular as the books and movie have been.
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Old 12-07-2008, 09:15 AM   #19
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Ya know, in Breaking Dawn when Edward tells Jacob about the baby and how likely it is that it will destroy Bella, he also says something along the lines of, "If she really wants a baby, you can give her one."

That has the potential for some major action; what if the book had gone differently and they had persuaded Bella to give up on having Edward's baby? What if Jacob had taken Edward's "offer"?
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Ya know, in Breaking Dawn when Edward tells Jacob about the baby and how likely it is that it will destroy Bella, he also says something along the lines of, "If she really wants a baby, you can give her one."

That has the potential for some major action; what if the book had gone differently and they had persuaded Bella to give up on having Edward's baby? What if Jacob had taken Edward's "offer"?
Now THAT is hot. I didnt read Breaking Dawn and probably won't...but that definitely has some potential. Ever present, protective Edward insists on watching perhaps?? Hmmmm
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Old 12-08-2008, 11:57 AM   #21
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O My Lord! there were so many scenes that needed to be written out fully in that book!! the two major sex scenes would have been amazing to read in all its horny detail!!! arg it did frusterate me when i was reading it that Stephenie Meyer cut those out.

o well it still was a great storyline and i acn't wait for her to contuine it with Nessie and Jacob
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O My Lord! there were so many scenes that needed to be written out fully in that book!! the two major sex scenes would have been amazing to read in all its horny detail!!! arg it did frusterate me when i was reading it that Stephenie Meyer cut those out.

o well it still was a great storyline and i acn't wait for her to contuine it with Nessie and Jacob



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OMG! I looooove Twilight! and I would love to read a story about Bella and Edward!

Oh I bet the love scene between them would be awesome!
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Meyers is Mormon. They don't even talk about sex, let alone write it down.
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Old 12-09-2008, 12:11 AM   #25
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Meyers is Mormon. They don't even talk about sex, let alone write it down.
That might explain why she was a bitch when her new book got leaked on the net.


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