Go Back   Literotica Discussion Board > Main Literotica Forums > Authors' Hangout

Reply
 
Thread Tools

Old 05-13-2011, 09:20 AM   #176
Chantilyvamp
Confidently Neurotic!
 
Chantilyvamp's Avatar
 
Chantilyvamp is offline
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Mi vida loca!
Posts: 10,244
Now that is enough to raise the temperature in the room!
__________________
"So far I ain't found a rhyme or a reason to change
I've always been crazy but it's kept me from going insane" ~ Waylon Jennings

"My darling girl, when are you going to understand that being normal is not necessarily a virtue? It rather denotes a lack of courage." ~Aunt Frances, from the movie "Practical Magic"

"I like to get kissed before I get fucked. " ~from the movie blood diamond

Stories and Poems, Chantilyvamps Gallery (New Photos as of 15/03/09)

The Breast Cancer Site, Breast Cancer Care UK
  Reply With Quote

Old 05-13-2011, 09:39 AM   #177
EmeraldKitten
Sweet & Twisted
 
EmeraldKitten's Avatar
 
EmeraldKitten is offline
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: In your dreams. :p~
Posts: 4,793
I agree! *fans herself*

Thanks Fool. Wonderful, as always.

__________________
Any time ya got nothing to do - and lots of time to do it -come on up.

Summer Lovin' Contest Entry!
Remind Me

New!
Into the Darkness
Whipped


I am passionate, talented, young-hearted, lovable, gorgeous, sexy,
fun, cute, easy-going, strong-willed, laugh-out-loud funny, shy, creative,
sophisticated, fashionable, intuitive, fantastic, edgy, fabulous.
I am ME.


Cut & Dried~ A special Presentation from Matriarch and myself.
  Reply With Quote

Old 05-13-2011, 03:49 PM   #178
The_Fool
smiling for the camera
 
The_Fool's Avatar
 
The_Fool is offline
Join Date: Jan 2003
Posts: 17,419
Quote:
Originally Posted by Chantilyvamp View Post
Now that is enough to raise the temperature in the room!
Quote:
Originally Posted by EmeraldKitten View Post
I agree! *fans herself*

Thanks Fool. Wonderful, as always.

You two are inspiring...
__________________
Foolish Rants Redux

saying something foolish


Writing poetry is kind of like being a husband. You have to learn when to shut up and call it done.
  Reply With Quote

Old 05-13-2011, 04:38 PM   #179
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
*deleted*

Last edited by sweetsubsarahh : 07-05-2011 at 06:27 PM.
  Reply With Quote

Old 05-13-2011, 04:55 PM   #180
The_Fool
smiling for the camera
 
The_Fool's Avatar
 
The_Fool is offline
Join Date: Jan 2003
Posts: 17,419
***********
__________________
Foolish Rants Redux

saying something foolish


Writing poetry is kind of like being a husband. You have to learn when to shut up and call it done.

Last edited by The_Fool : 07-30-2011 at 11:54 AM.
  Reply With Quote

Old 05-13-2011, 05:19 PM   #181
MagicaPractica
Paralyzer
 
MagicaPractica's Avatar
 
MagicaPractica is offline
Join Date: Oct 2004
Location: a dark lit place
Posts: 13,395
Wonderful, as always.
__________________
My Kindle book at Amazon - Short and Sweet: Erotic Romances for Women
Also available in paperback through Amazon and Createspace.
My Stories on Lit
  Reply With Quote

Old 05-13-2011, 08:41 PM   #182
EmeraldKitten
Sweet & Twisted
 
EmeraldKitten's Avatar
 
EmeraldKitten is offline
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: In your dreams. :p~
Posts: 4,793
Quote:
Originally Posted by The_Fool View Post
You two are inspiring...
I aim to please. And so do you.
Thank you again.

Toldja I'd get your juices flowing.
__________________
Any time ya got nothing to do - and lots of time to do it -come on up.

Summer Lovin' Contest Entry!
Remind Me

New!
Into the Darkness
Whipped


I am passionate, talented, young-hearted, lovable, gorgeous, sexy,
fun, cute, easy-going, strong-willed, laugh-out-loud funny, shy, creative,
sophisticated, fashionable, intuitive, fantastic, edgy, fabulous.
I am ME.


Cut & Dried~ A special Presentation from Matriarch and myself.
  Reply With Quote

Old 05-14-2011, 03:49 PM   #183
Svenskaflicka
Fountain
 
Svenskaflicka's Avatar
 
Svenskaflicka is offline
Join Date: Jun 2002
Location: Scandinavia
Posts: 16,151
Everyone deserves to get heard.
  Reply With Quote

Old 05-15-2011, 12:19 AM   #184
The_Fool
smiling for the camera
 
The_Fool's Avatar
 
The_Fool is offline
Join Date: Jan 2003
Posts: 17,419
Quote:
Originally Posted by Svenskaflicka View Post
Everyone deserves to get heard.
Yes they do. Haven't heard from you in a while.
__________________
Foolish Rants Redux

saying something foolish


Writing poetry is kind of like being a husband. You have to learn when to shut up and call it done.
  Reply With Quote

Old 05-15-2011, 06:55 AM   #185
impressive
ennui
 
impressive's Avatar
 
impressive is offline
Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: Alessia Brio
Posts: 27,363
Quote:
Originally Posted by Svenskaflicka View Post
Everyone deserves to get heard.
I read that: Everyone deserves to get hard.

__________________
impressive : Adapted to excite attention and feeling, to touch the sensibilities, or affect the conscience.


  Reply With Quote

Old 05-15-2011, 06:56 AM   #186
impressive
ennui
 
impressive's Avatar
 
impressive is offline
Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: Alessia Brio
Posts: 27,363
Quote:
Originally Posted by The_Fool View Post
Hands just gliding along her sides,
counting her ribs
while tasting her lips
around laughter and smiles.

And then Iím cupping her breasts,
feeling the size and shape
within my hand.
But itís the softness of her skin

that always surprises me,
fingers gliding over the softest silk.
Witness to delicate sighs
as she licks her lips

and smiles.
In one way I am in no hurry,
wanting to take my time
and worship her with kisses.

In another,
I desire to throw her down
upon my bed
and offer prayers of a different sort.

Virginal innocence smiles,
belies my memories
of her lurid taste.
Memories I wish to renew

In twilight, moonlight,
dimlight, daylight.
Rake my teeth once more across her softness,
Then yield once more to primitive passion.
I think it's time to publish another Foolish poetry collection. In fact, I love the title "Foolish Poetry"

__________________
impressive : Adapted to excite attention and feeling, to touch the sensibilities, or affect the conscience.


  Reply With Quote

Old 05-15-2011, 02:50 PM   #187
The_Fool
smiling for the camera
 
The_Fool's Avatar
 
The_Fool is offline
Join Date: Jan 2003
Posts: 17,419
Quote:
Originally Posted by impressive View Post
I think it's time to publish another Foolish poetry collection. In fact, I love the title "Foolish Poetry"

See what I have. It might be a small collection or you might have to lump something with it. Vana and I have been trying to put something together as well. But I am lazy and she hasn't been feeling well.
__________________
Foolish Rants Redux

saying something foolish


Writing poetry is kind of like being a husband. You have to learn when to shut up and call it done.
  Reply With Quote

Old 05-17-2011, 06:03 AM   #188
Chantilyvamp
Confidently Neurotic!
 
Chantilyvamp's Avatar
 
Chantilyvamp is offline
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Mi vida loca!
Posts: 10,244
Quote:
Originally Posted by The_Fool View Post
See what I have. It might be a small collection or you might have to lump something with it. Vana and I have been trying to put something together as well. But I am lazy and she hasn't been feeling well.
If you do let me know sweetie... yours or hers and yours as you know how much I adore you!
__________________
"So far I ain't found a rhyme or a reason to change
I've always been crazy but it's kept me from going insane" ~ Waylon Jennings

"My darling girl, when are you going to understand that being normal is not necessarily a virtue? It rather denotes a lack of courage." ~Aunt Frances, from the movie "Practical Magic"

"I like to get kissed before I get fucked. " ~from the movie blood diamond

Stories and Poems, Chantilyvamps Gallery (New Photos as of 15/03/09)

The Breast Cancer Site, Breast Cancer Care UK
  Reply With Quote

Old 05-19-2011, 07:35 PM   #189
The_Fool
smiling for the camera
 
The_Fool's Avatar
 
The_Fool is offline
Join Date: Jan 2003
Posts: 17,419
so is your joy
crystalline light,
multifaceted, hard
but easily shattered
by brutal strike?

or is your happiness
the smooth surface
of a common river rock,
tumbled and worn
by the tumult of rushing water?
__________________
Foolish Rants Redux

saying something foolish


Writing poetry is kind of like being a husband. You have to learn when to shut up and call it done.
  Reply With Quote

Old 05-19-2011, 11:37 PM   #190
lisa123414
Literotica Guru
 
lisa123414's Avatar
 
lisa123414 is offline
Join Date: Dec 2006
Posts: 1,190
My joy, and hence my happiness
Is an elusive animal
At times crouching
At times dancing
Not a protected species
Its just that the hunter sleeps


Happy also to be ignorant in the rules of poetry

Perhaps if fools rools were resurrected Ė aye this gives me ideas
__________________
My mother had a great deal of trouble with me but I think she enjoyed it. ~Mark Twain
  Reply With Quote

Old 05-24-2011, 10:43 PM   #191
The_Fool
smiling for the camera
 
The_Fool's Avatar
 
The_Fool is offline
Join Date: Jan 2003
Posts: 17,419
Iíve lost track of dreams
once, twice.
Or maybe they were memories.
Or melodies.
Or memories of melodies
harmonized
just slightly out of time,
off-key,
certainly off-color.
But wasnít I talking of dreams?
Iíve lost track.
__________________
Foolish Rants Redux

saying something foolish


Writing poetry is kind of like being a husband. You have to learn when to shut up and call it done.
  Reply With Quote

Old 06-07-2011, 06:03 PM   #192
The_Fool
smiling for the camera
 
The_Fool's Avatar
 
The_Fool is offline
Join Date: Jan 2003
Posts: 17,419
Crescendo of silence
follows a crash and burn.
Did I just fuck up?
Why yes I did.

And now some pointy-headed
hotstuff smirking female
hands me my ass and queries
what else I plan to do for fun.

Iíd let her brush me off
a little longer
but I would like it
and she would know.

I can see her laughing at me,
about that, once again.
Seems she is always laughing.
She says that she laughs

with me, not at me.
But I know better.
Just like I know
she will hug me later.
__________________
Foolish Rants Redux

saying something foolish


Writing poetry is kind of like being a husband. You have to learn when to shut up and call it done.
  Reply With Quote

Old 06-07-2011, 09:34 PM   #193
lisa123414
Literotica Guru
 
lisa123414's Avatar
 
lisa123414 is offline
Join Date: Dec 2006
Posts: 1,190
......
__________________
My mother had a great deal of trouble with me but I think she enjoyed it. ~Mark Twain

Last edited by lisa123414 : 12-22-2011 at 09:42 AM.
  Reply With Quote

Old 06-07-2011, 11:16 PM   #194
The_Fool
smiling for the camera
 
The_Fool's Avatar
 
The_Fool is offline
Join Date: Jan 2003
Posts: 17,419
Quote:
Originally Posted by lisa123414 View Post
Would rather hug you sooner
Then, laugh with you
Share all of your feelings
As well as
Offer you mine
Somehow I found her
once more
sitting in my lap
as we discussed my last
faux pas.
Lips linger with kisses
and laughter
as she measures my embarrassment
with clarity and reason.
At least until desire
shortens my reason
and increases my desire
as her humor and her hips
sway towards risque.
__________________
Foolish Rants Redux

saying something foolish


Writing poetry is kind of like being a husband. You have to learn when to shut up and call it done.
  Reply With Quote

Old 06-07-2011, 11:17 PM   #195
The_Fool
smiling for the camera
 
The_Fool's Avatar
 
The_Fool is offline
Join Date: Jan 2003
Posts: 17,419
For Feee

~


Considering her new home,
she looked around and studied,
seeking just the right moment
in time

for her things.
Each and every memory
needing to be placed with care.
No need to leave that shelf bare

with all the glitter she could spare
sprinkled all around,
and in her eyes
stars needing that safe place.

Of course the moon held sway
from the mantle.
Place of honor
with muted glow on display.
__________________
Foolish Rants Redux

saying something foolish


Writing poetry is kind of like being a husband. You have to learn when to shut up and call it done.
  Reply With Quote

Old 06-15-2011, 03:13 PM   #196
The_Fool
smiling for the camera
 
The_Fool's Avatar
 
The_Fool is offline
Join Date: Jan 2003
Posts: 17,419
Since it was posted in the GB and I don't want to forget about it...

Quote:
Originally Posted by The_Fool View Post
Her petulant pose offered entry
to the event.
Slandered slightly,
he rose to her occasion
and cast aspersion on her decadence.
She retaliated with spite
and circled frenzy
as her choice for the game.
But he'd already finished
and wiped himself dry
on her disarray.
__________________
Foolish Rants Redux

saying something foolish


Writing poetry is kind of like being a husband. You have to learn when to shut up and call it done.
  Reply With Quote

Old 06-17-2011, 02:36 AM   #197
Chantilyvamp
Confidently Neurotic!
 
Chantilyvamp's Avatar
 
Chantilyvamp is offline
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Mi vida loca!
Posts: 10,244
I you, you beautiful man!
__________________
"So far I ain't found a rhyme or a reason to change
I've always been crazy but it's kept me from going insane" ~ Waylon Jennings

"My darling girl, when are you going to understand that being normal is not necessarily a virtue? It rather denotes a lack of courage." ~Aunt Frances, from the movie "Practical Magic"

"I like to get kissed before I get fucked. " ~from the movie blood diamond

Stories and Poems, Chantilyvamps Gallery (New Photos as of 15/03/09)

The Breast Cancer Site, Breast Cancer Care UK
  Reply With Quote

Old 06-17-2011, 04:58 AM   #198
Mandy57
Lawrence's Crab
 
Mandy57's Avatar
 
Mandy57 is offline
Join Date: Feb 2010
Location: LaLa Land, USA
Posts: 3,679
How did I miss this thread? I love it when I find a bit of gold here on Lit.

Wonderful, Fool.
__________________
"My heart to you is given: Oh, do give yours to me; We'll lock them up together, And throw away the key" ~Frederick Saunders." ~In love with my Archer~


My Lit Short Stories

My Newest eBook ~ The Sandman

My Blog
  Reply With Quote

Old 06-17-2011, 08:15 PM   #199
The_Fool
smiling for the camera
 
The_Fool's Avatar
 
The_Fool is offline
Join Date: Jan 2003
Posts: 17,419
Quote:
Originally Posted by Chantilyvamp View Post
I you, you beautiful man!

I you as well, you glorious lady!
__________________
Foolish Rants Redux

saying something foolish


Writing poetry is kind of like being a husband. You have to learn when to shut up and call it done.
  Reply With Quote

Old 06-17-2011, 08:19 PM   #200
The_Fool
smiling for the camera
 
The_Fool's Avatar
 
The_Fool is offline
Join Date: Jan 2003
Posts: 17,419
Quote:
Originally Posted by Mandy57 View Post
How did I miss this thread? I love it when I find a bit of gold here on Lit.

Wonderful, Fool.


Thanks, Always good to find a new reader. Even better one that will listen to me.

If you want to read more and can spare some money for a good cause, I have a book/ebook you can purchase here.
__________________
Foolish Rants Redux

saying something foolish


Writing poetry is kind of like being a husband. You have to learn when to shut up and call it done.
  Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 04:10 AM.

Copyright 1998-2013 Literotica Online. Literotica is a registered trademark.