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Old 08-09-2008, 06:31 PM   #1
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This one wandered off.
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Writing poetry is kind of like being a husband. You have to learn when to shut up and call it done.

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Old 08-10-2008, 10:59 PM   #2
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what was it I actually said?
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Old 08-10-2008, 11:40 PM   #3
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Old 08-10-2008, 11:52 PM   #4
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he asked her to sing contralto
serenading his baseness

willow contrast
roughness of his bark
though the allure for her
is his bite

she responded well to earthy tones
his natural voice
rumbling his desire
ponderous fingers probing

half in fear
he watched scarlet nails
trail along his thighs blood-red
red blood

shadows on the wall
some fearsome beast
making guttural sounds
frantic movements

he caresses high notes
from her
paying attention to dynamics
almost in perfect order

she enjoys making music
he enjoys hearing her sing
I would sing for you.

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I would sing for you.

Can I watch?
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Old 08-10-2008, 11:54 PM   #6
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I would sing for you.

You sing beautifully.
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Old 08-10-2008, 11:56 PM   #7
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You sing beautifully.
*blush*

I have a feeling you'd evoke even more sounds out of me, baby.

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Old 08-11-2008, 12:03 AM   #8
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Can I watch?
Is this 'cause I kept sneaking peeks at the two of you?

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Is this 'cause I kept sneaking peeks at the two of you?

What's fair is fair.
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Old 08-11-2008, 12:11 AM   #10
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What's fair is fair.


I love your AV, by the way. It's beautiful.
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Old 08-11-2008, 12:13 AM   #11
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I love your AV, by the way. It's beautiful.
Thank you!!! I got permission before using it.
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Old 08-11-2008, 12:17 AM   #12
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Thank you!!! I got permission before using it.
Good.

I'd hate to think she'd want to kick your ass.

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Old 08-11-2008, 12:19 AM   #13
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why do I always forget
that today is a day
like yesterday
five years ago
tomorrow
next week
regrets and memories
are for yesterday
plans and dreams
for tomorrow
today is for living
but I always forget
tie a string knot
to your finger, remember
the life of today tangles
on the back of yesterday and
that it denotes the tone
of tomorrow.

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Good.

I'd hate to think she'd want to kick your ass.

I don't need permission for this one.
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Naked grilling is fun.

And slightly dangerous.

Wait, what was this thread about?
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Naked grilling is fun.

And slightly dangerous.

Wait, what was this thread about?
Fool's amazing words.

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(And wso's)
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Old 08-17-2008, 11:54 PM   #20
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tie a string knot
to your finger, remember
the life of today tangles
on the back of yesterday and
that it denotes the tone
of tomorrow.

She is the string around my finger
reminding me of what important things
I need to remember.
The knot she tied was deceptively simplistic
and binds me tighter than any chains
but oh so light a cherished burden.
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Old 08-18-2008, 12:26 AM   #21
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Don't mind me.

Just hanging out to read more from the Fool.

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Old 08-18-2008, 12:29 AM   #22
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Don't mind me.

Just hanging out to read more from the Fool.

Am I minding you or are you minding me today? And is that minding meant to be an authoritative role or supportive role. I suppose I could be authoritative in a supportive way.
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Am I minding you or are you minding me today? And is that minding meant to be an authoritative role or supportive role. I suppose I could be authoritative in a supportive way.
Who has the crop, then?
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Old 08-18-2008, 12:43 AM   #24
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Who has the crop, then?
Academic question. If I caress your cheek, nibble your neck and taste your earlobe, would you remember you are holding a crop?
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Old 08-18-2008, 12:44 AM   #25
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Academic question. If I caress your cheek, nibble your neck and taste your earlobe, would you remember you are holding a crop?
Nope.

But we should test it, just to be certain.

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