ThePhoenixMan
Writing Gigolo
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It was an extremely hot Wednesday afternoon. Ramon Gerardo sat in his van, a white non-descript cargo van, staring out the window, watching people come and go from the Hardington National Bank. It seemed to amuse him as he made up stories in his mind about the different patrons that entered and exited the bank. There were plenty of old biddies depositing their Social Security checks, and the occasional mom, dragging a screaming kid in tow, as well as the many businessmen who went in and out of the bank.
The ring of the cell phone interrupted his imagination, expecting the phone call. "Yes? ... Of course ... Today ... I'm there right now ... Yes, I know ... Young ... Blonde ... Good body ... Big tits ... I'll be waiting for your call later tonight!" He closed the phone and pocketed it, returning to his imagined stories of the bank patrons.
Almost another hour had passed, and Ramon saw what he was looking for. It was time! He got out of the van, disregarding the parking meter which demanded money and entered the bank. Without wasting any time, Ramon brandished the gun, bull-rushing the counter. He grabbed a patron standing at the counter, wrapping an arm around her neck. He pointed the gun to her head and threatened to shoot if the teller didn't cooperate, or if anyone else tried anything funny!
He tossed the teller a bag, and she nervously filled it with cash, quickly handing it back to Ramon. The hostage was screaming and crying hysterically at this point, but Ramon's six foot, four inch, muscular frame, easily held her in place, the dark glasses over his eyes hid the steel grey gaze. He told his hostage to grab the bag. Dragging her backwards, out of the bank, her heels dragging across the marbled floor, Ramon yelled out. "Nobody move or the girl is dead!"
Backing through the glass door, with the girl in tow, Ramon pushed her into the van, keeping the gun trained on her as they sped away, and out of the small town. About five miles down the road, Ramon grabbed the bag and tossed it out the window!
He turned abruptly and traveled down a dirt path, running along the edge of a large corn field. They turned left into a dense patch of trees and pulled into a warehouse! Ramon was already growing tired of theyoung woman's shrill cries, pleading for her life.
"SHUT THE FUCK UP BITCH! NOW GET OUT!"
The ring of the cell phone interrupted his imagination, expecting the phone call. "Yes? ... Of course ... Today ... I'm there right now ... Yes, I know ... Young ... Blonde ... Good body ... Big tits ... I'll be waiting for your call later tonight!" He closed the phone and pocketed it, returning to his imagined stories of the bank patrons.
Almost another hour had passed, and Ramon saw what he was looking for. It was time! He got out of the van, disregarding the parking meter which demanded money and entered the bank. Without wasting any time, Ramon brandished the gun, bull-rushing the counter. He grabbed a patron standing at the counter, wrapping an arm around her neck. He pointed the gun to her head and threatened to shoot if the teller didn't cooperate, or if anyone else tried anything funny!
He tossed the teller a bag, and she nervously filled it with cash, quickly handing it back to Ramon. The hostage was screaming and crying hysterically at this point, but Ramon's six foot, four inch, muscular frame, easily held her in place, the dark glasses over his eyes hid the steel grey gaze. He told his hostage to grab the bag. Dragging her backwards, out of the bank, her heels dragging across the marbled floor, Ramon yelled out. "Nobody move or the girl is dead!"
Backing through the glass door, with the girl in tow, Ramon pushed her into the van, keeping the gun trained on her as they sped away, and out of the small town. About five miles down the road, Ramon grabbed the bag and tossed it out the window!
He turned abruptly and traveled down a dirt path, running along the edge of a large corn field. They turned left into a dense patch of trees and pulled into a warehouse! Ramon was already growing tired of theyoung woman's shrill cries, pleading for her life.
"SHUT THE FUCK UP BITCH! NOW GET OUT!"
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