Nude Beach Bride

I have numerous requests for the next chapter of my Nude Beach Bride series (it is eight chapters so far).

I think that part of the reason I have delayed is that this series depicts the sexual flowering of the bride over the honeymoon, and the week is almost over.

Originally, I saw a sequel spinoff series"Nude Beach Anniversary", set up already by fantasies about their best man and maid of honour. But as I considered ch 9, I thought the description might read "all honeymoons come to an end" (assuming it doesn't sprawl into a ch 10). But that suggests that the honeymoon is REALLY over...that the consequences of Seth and Gaby's adventures are dire indeed, now I'm not sure.

what do you all think I should do?

So far, 100% say "the honeymoon never really ends - it is true love". I think you should go with that. (but then, I'm the only one that's voted so far)

But really, the honeymoon as a trip after the wedding should come to an end. But the marriage and their love should remain undying.

Jenny

Before the anniversary

Sirhugs

I read the entire series as you wrote them. I loved the story.


I think you need to continue the story at least for a couple of chapters, with them at home after the honeymoon. Do a couple with special friends over, before they go back for their anniversary and hopefully many of your other characters could rejoin them.

Smiles


Fred

(going back now to reread the stories)

I suggest you do what all great writers do.... leave the current protagonists as is, with their future ambiguous, and JUMP the action to their descendants, to carry on the same themes. You could call it "Nude Beach Bride; the NEXT Generation."